>>4943
I have to say your animation is getting better. I do have a critique to make.
Stop the flying camera. Stationary shots or angle shifts are okay, but having the camera fly
around the scene randomly makes it hard to focus on the action.

That and maybe work on the lighting a bit more. Scenes are a bit dark. I had a similar issue with my followers
saying my scenes were hard to see, since I was making them on a bright monitor. Don't forget to put dim floor lights facing up to simulate
light bouncing up as well.

Anyways, keep up the good work. The more snuff animators, the better!