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>leaf thingy clipping through guy's leg
>girl looks more annoyed than in any kind of pain
>arrows hard durable enough to pin her hands to stone

Otherwise it's bretty guud. Instead of making the entire scene lighter, you could darken the background and put a torch or campfire near the models; that way, it's be a night scene.

But yeah. Either way, keep it up. ♥