>>10059
I think you misunderstood something:
because I am not critiquing your taste, I just mention that your Characters are not as hot as I would like.
Then you could explain reasons if that was deliberate choice or you just failed for some technical issues.
Or you can take my opinion into account for your future works.
Who knows maybe it is just something random what you do not even noticed and don't mind to change.

Also beauty is somewhat standard thing for most people and in the art it is even easier to make beautiful than ugly. But some authors seem to make their characters deliberately ugly/flawed for certain reasons as they want to express something with that and just don't want them look perfect. And in that case I woud like to know those reasons because they are important for the story.