Well I'm always glad to see more lesbian/futa sex and violence so it's especially good to see it done well!

The story helped out quite a bit, and the length was fine though it could possibly have been a bit shorter. With pictures to go with it you can focus less on what's physically happening and more on internal details and what isn't completely clear in the picture. >>14761 was a good example of doing that right, since the neck angle didn't look particularly lethal so describing it helped.

The only complaint I have is just a personal one, and that's that ebonic speech typed out always makes be wince just a bit every time I see it. It's basically unavoidable with stuff like this, and it's probably not even unrealistic, but still.

Overall still really good. Hoping to see what you do next!