>>15952
The text is ok, but we still see the picture before we read the text and this creates some confusion like "hey, whast the hell Something is wrong here" and then read the story and see what happened.
Other authors on pixiv in that situation simply add a black or very dark page with text describing what happened so you probably could do same if you don't want to bother rendering anything.
Especially since you make so detailed picture sets that nobody even expects missing content.

Even if I am not that much sexually interested that stuff much it is still interesting to follow your story and see what will happen, so I will be waiting for the next batch.