Hey bro, same dude working with pudzuz here:) Just watched and was nice but 2 things. Around the ass your animation is a little chalky (leg momvent, cheek bouncings, actual humping while riding dick) (also where guy humps girl their body movements don't quite click) and the holes(pussy and ass) arent being streched when the dick enters. Also second, you kinda cut some of the best parts/dont use some stuff. The gun would have been nice in mouth (could use on different girl (possible shoot too for end scene) and you coulda showed the bottle being shoved in her pussy while sufficating and or during sufficating and her on the rope chocking and grabbing the rope when dude cums in her and uses the bottle next and leaves it in and the next scene woulda been the last where she was on the floor with bottle sticking out. But, way better cause I see you have emotions and jiggling/natural movements. Very nice. Also getting multiple angles won't hurt (unless you feel it doesn't look good) You're doing a very nice job:) Also, feel free to shed some blood>:)