Hey, same dude working with puzudz here>:D This was lovely. I might have to help mold you too.>:) One thing though, (since this is you first animation and its actually pretty decent) you missed the cum shot. Also maybe he tears the torso off her body right before or after he cums would complete your cencept. And if he split her legs at the end to expose ovaries or torn vag that would also be nice. If you need some ideas just ask on your page and I'll be there:)