>>25810
It not that importation if it hurts or not while your are chopped into pieces but but at least for me, that original video was pretty interesting precisely because that boy as quite apathetic to what is happening to him he was not screaming not crying not trying to defend himself or run away I did not even noticed expressions of pain on his face.

Your version looks different(not necessary bad if you prefer it that way).
One thing which I would consider wrong is that he is speaking very long sentences in describing his horrible pain as there is no time to say anything that or negotiate terms of execution. At most he could say "It hurts" "stop" "please" "just kill me"