Still a great story, even with that unusual ending!
So i guess you feel a little burned out? I can never get enough of your stories, but don't push yourself too much, take your time if you need it.

A girl could survive your stories? No way, that can't be! ;-)
But if you want a girl to survive for a change, just go with it. I don't really like it when the girls
get their happy ending, that already happens in everything mainstream, but they don't need to die all the time for a satisfying ending. Sometimes it can just end with a life in slavery or some other fate worse than death, or especially with multiple girls one could just turn against the others…

On that note, some more criticism, kinda related to what your guys were talking about in the end: Your
execution setting makes it easy to have some great torture scenes, but it's missing the uncertainty
and suspense you have in a kidnapping setting or something similar: The girl is going to die and everybody knows that when the story starts, not just the viewers, the characters too. In a kidnapping setting you just have a few bad guys and things could go wrong for them, the girls can always hope they can escape or somebody saves them, or there could be some other unexpected twist. Of course that usually makes the stories longer too, so more work for you.