Ok, i guess i'll use a pseudonym from now on.

I was lurking in this thread for almost a year, until old gurochan lost its clearnet site and i realized if nobody else commented you wouldn't post anything new any more, and your stuff is so good and so perfectly fits my taste i really didn't want that to happen. And then after a while i realized i could actually give you some ideas.

The thing with criticism is: Most artists don't take that very well. And i really don't like to criticize stuff when i can't do it any better myself. So i usually focus on the story and try to give you some of my own ideas what you could do, but i can't go into the technical details how to do that.

About the whipping scene: That last picture looks indeed very good, and i think it's the best you have done so far for a whipping scene. I already liked your first whipping scene with Sabrina, but this is clearly a major improvement.

I like how much work you put into having these visible marks on the girls, you can see what already happened to them, and overall it looks really good and realistic (and yes, as you mention it, those marks on Darla might be a little bit too red). Most 3d artists don't do that stuff, probably because it's a lot of work. And you can clearly see the pain and desperation in the girls faces, that's something else you usually do very well.

Most of the time i could criticize something, it's not about the pictures and more about how much i like the stories, for example how i'm not a huge fan of hangings and how i very much prefer long torture scenes over quick snuff scenes. But that's all personal preference, others might prefer other stuff.