>>29983

I mean, you can cut the chase scene and end their escape very quickly if Darla is immediately out of bullets and he takes the two girls down right there - i don't mind that, that scene was pretty much the last part i wrote down.

But i think just quickly killing them isn't really the ending this story deserves either. I would prefer it over their escape, but i always wanted a torture scene to end it all where they get tortured to death, i was looking forward to an ending that topped every ending so far. And throughout the whole story while the torture scenes were great, they were always limited since the girls couldn't get damaged too much, an unlimited torture session was missing. And it wouldn't be out of character for Malcolm to do something like that. He didn't really care that Bob got killed either, the only problem for him was that it screwed up his plan.

So something in the general direction of this final scene is what i was hoping for, even though you could certainly make some changes and cuts to that. For example you could cut the rape scenes, the knife scenes, the leg breaking and the whole dismembering, that leaves us just with: Crucification and garotte for Laura, slow burning and skewers for Carla, burning iron, gouged out eyes and hanging for Darla.