I'm glad you enjoyed my ending for the CDL story. I hope you will eventually make something like that, but i know this would take a lot of your time. Since a torture scene like this would probably be too much at once for the LSC story and i think every new story would also need a lot of buildup before this, this alternate ending might be the best way to really do a scene like that, so whenever you feel like you want to do that, i hope you come back to the CDL story. And if you don't, i really enjoy your other work too, the summer camp is starting very promising.

So we get some real backstory here for the next girl, i like that! And of course not all the girls are virgins, i wouldn't be surprised if there were some more among the older girls. Maybe she can have some actual fun herself before things turn bad for her, it's a nice twist to have a girl who enjoys what's happening for now, i'm sure it will get worse for her eventually.

Karen is number 21 on my list, so somewhere in the middle, she is very pretty but it's a tough competition. That whole list was based on just the two initial pictures we got for every girl. Once we see more, things could change in my mind, but i'll keep this initial list unchanged as a reference.