Hey, nice to see another animation >:)
The only bad thing it the choppyness in movements. I like the music and expansion of the scenes and characters. That is actually unique and only yours. Also, there are some websites for other sounds (some free, some paid). I noticed a series of different sounds and realized that may have been a difficulty for you. Try googling sounds/copyright free sounds and type what you want/ what may make a similar sound. That was quite nice though. The concepts are always spot on.
*Also, special shout out to that outfit change in the beginning that was a nice detail.

>:)