Onix 07/07/19 (Sun) 12:03:12 No.31328
>>31314
I was talking about story realism, not about style. On that aspect, we are pretty similar.

But that's interesting to hear too, no need to be sorry. I really want to know what exactly you find wrong with my style, but probably we should discuss that on some of my threads not here.

Dear Onix, my respect for the understanding way you treat the posted criticism. I'd like to contribute to that by clarifying my views.
The characters you create for your stories look absoluteley great, be it that they look superclean as if they have been in the shower for an hour.
However the stories that you present come from a dreamworld which makes that your series lack a certain tension of reality. That -sadly- reduces your work rather to an interesting collector's item intead of a piece of work that moves the soul. I regret to say that this distinguishes your work from Drabok's.