Wow that's actually pretty great and if it's your first time attempting to make a video like this then it's amazing. I can see why you'd might think it's a bit awkward, but I don't think it's anywhere near as awkward/bad as you think it is. The animation and facial expression are both great and the arrow pov is amazing and also something unique and different that I haven't really seen before. The only thing I feel like is really missing is some blood but that doesn't take away from the positives.

I would love to see more from you in the future if you have any plans to do so, since I feel like if you started making some semi-frequently you could be as good as OP or EVMC.