>>35878
Wow, thanks for the feedback!
I definitely wanted to reduce the use of the OP magic that I wrote myself into in the previous chapter, so I used this chapter to destroy the staff.

Will definitely try to make the fight last longer and more struggles in the future. Others have pointed out on pixiv that they still mostly fight like trash mobs.

As for color, will try to change their outfit a fair bit. This was the outfit from my very first chapter long ago, and I am seeing a lot of issues with it, like the skirt clipping etc.

As for the complexity of the scenes, I used to do about twice as many images per scene in different angles to try to capture all of whats going on, but I felt as if that was almost like stuffing it with fillers. Should I add more angles like before?

>>35879

More contrast hmm, Will try for sure.