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Flood detection - great, just another one of those ways to stop the spammer that backfires and stops everybody else instead. I'm not really optimistic about gurochan, it has been stable since it came back, but that's really the only positive thing about it recently.

I know you're not bringing the CDL girls back, unfortunately. That story was just something special, I love the summer camp and it has great torture scenes, but we really got to know those three girls, in a way that's just not possible here. While that was probably the reason you let them get away, it's also the reason I'm still so invested in it. When you eventually start your next long story, I can say: That setup with a small group of girls with a personal connection worked really well for me. If one thing is lacking in the summer camp, it's that so far most girls didn't have any real connection. We had the scene with Jessica and Jolina, that's still one of my favorites, and the fact that Jessica cared so much about the other girl played a part in that. Other than that, while we had a few scenes with multiple girls, they didn't really know each other.
I know from the introduction that there are a few sisters in the camp, using that in their scenes can certainly work to make them even more interesting. I don't know if there is any room to add friendships between some of the girls on top of that, maybe just spending time with each other in their cells for a few days can build something. I wouldn't mind some short interlude scenes with just some girls in their cells talking and trying to figure out what's going on and what to do about it - some might still think everything is fine, some might really worry, some might actively think about a way to get out.
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