Great update! I like how all the girls are getting their share of the hot iron. And now finally Nina is going to die, and she is looking really pretty on those pictures, still very much begging to stay alive, I love that! Yes, we figured out that she would get impaled pretty much right away, which might have been dumb luck since the thing everybody thought she would get impaled on isn't even the spike they actually use. ;-)
But it will be hard not to be predictable in this story, especially when lots of scenes are based on the huge number of requests you got. And being predictable also builds anticipation, it's nice to have some surprises but it's great to have events to look forward to.

Since lolicit got brought up again (and yes, what Zippy posted made it clear again how many fans you got on that site, including a bunch of artists), I just want to point out that my effort to get you to join got Onix to come back there again, so I guess I had at least some success.