>>37265
Cute! The lightning is good the story is nice, but what's with those tiny foxes or whatever they are? Are they Sonic cousins or what? And how about the actual kill? Did those tiny things killed the huntress or something else? And how were they killed, throatslit, backstab? In the past you were showing a scene before the kill so we can know what got to them! Also those floating dicks where nice, but how about an angle where we can see the actual body getting necro and the thingy fucking it? You'll have to try harder in the future! i give this one a 5 on a scale of 1 to 10! Sorry try harder!