>>37616
>>37615
well, you got it a bit wrong about that degradation and humiliation, as it is not the story intent (I am not into that ) but vulgarity is the intent ;) Although she is not drenched in semen but rather got dirty from being banged on the ground (or another dirty place) or maybe someone peed on her LOL (As this would require unreasonable amount of semen to drench her like that.)
All that humiliation and degradation is here to show that she does not care at all and it does nothing to her which is the similarity to your characters who also do not care to what is done to them.(of course if it was your story she would be some kind of angel LOL and everything would be plain and straightforward)

But I don't say that It is same as your characters I just say that your characters are also slutty in the same way as they allow anyone to do anything to them
More realistically, slut is not a girl who is promiscuous but rather a girl who is into guys who treat her like shit and who is always passive. So this one is not a slut, even if she looks like one at quick glance.


You noticed it right, She is not pure or innocent at all and she is being mean too (but just a little, she is probably nicer than most of the girls you will meet).
Just like in other stories you are given a hard choice to decide if you want to do anything with her at all and should have mixed feelings ;)
But considering that you do not want to hug her, you also show that you are not any better. This is exactly why she is so mean to you as she knows what you think about her. But she gave you a chance to prove her wrong anyway :)

Anyway, she is supposed to be a bad girl in the story so everything is quite right ;)
If she was an angel, like in your stories, this story could not exist


>>37616
>Hey, guy…if you don't like it then don't read it.

He pretty well noticed what I wanted to express in this story ;)
You are not supposed to like everything ;)