>>37653
Well, realistically, in your fiction, you treat people like shit (or worse) too, just casually ;)
(If you can treat injuries and even death like something casual, Why you can't do the same with vulgarity too?)
And they don't mind it at all. If you transfer them into the normal world they would be labeled sluts for sure. They would be constantly serving bad guys and ignoring those who are nice.


>No, it's the other way around, because I couldn't think anything about her until I knew of her existence, and the moment I knew her she's already mean, or rather vulgar.

Not really, because she did not say or do anything vulgar or mean in the beginning just a normal brother-sister relationship which is typically an endless low-intensity conflict. She just came home at night after being raped and you already think bad things about her simply because she is not crying as it should be.
What was more or less my intent :)
Imagine if she had a cute angelic face and came home like that your reaction would be "oh how horrible, poor girl"
but now your reaction is "great, bitch got what she deserves"


>And also even if a character eats a baby because they're evil, that doesn't need to equate with vulgar and make faces like that. There can be classy and attractive evil too.

Actually this is in my other story plan, where eating/abusing babies is portrayed as something cute and innocent.
one picture from that story is here >>28192
This girl does not eat babies she is more like just trolling.
This story would be more fit to be a VN than a plain story. Otherwise, it is not very clear what is happening and it needs multiple endings. Maybe later it can be remade into the game.

>And also as I said, fundamentally it's all about her face, it's not the most attractive in the first place, and the expressions that scream vulgarity only make it worse, kinda defeating the purpose of porn. But if I ignore that, I very much enjoy the story so far.

Consider that character development :) It will get nicer later (although not very much.) So maybe you will start liking them more ;)