Nice to see more people entering this scene. :) especially someone who is into this casual guro content.

But the main thing you are missing are eyebrows. did you forgot to apply them of that's sort of your fetish? G8 characters have separate eyebrows

You also may need to adjust skin shader, like set reduce translucency weight or it is way too dark. and also adjust translucency of her vagina for obvious reasons.

If you need some advice or specific props just ask.
although besides daz I recommend you to download zbrush as well