>>4714

If you're bored, why don't you try it in a different style? Here's an idea - most of your works have been quick decapitations with a "Surprise" element which is nice.

Did you try making the girl put up a fight? Imagine the guy trying to rip the head off sub zero style but failing because she keeps fighting back. You can have him wore her down until he is finally able to pull it off. Than do the twitching. Make the executor work for it.