I am surprised to see that you even bothered with that internal view :) If definitely required some tinkering.
also surprisingly well done fire and cooking texture But probably you had no other choice they did not bring any gasoline LOL

The story looks a bit sad this time but I think it has plenty of gore and abuse :)
Everything is good and if somebody missed something they can hope to see it next time :)

Maybe just for me some cute boy instead of that goblin would be more sexy to look at ;)