>>50907
We're a little different in our assessment of sexuality. I think it's the funny, random or just plain stupid deaths that are sexy. You want a different story, give me a plot. I'll give it some thought.
>>50906
I didn't do the destruction after the explosion, it wouldn't have helped the story, and it would have taken too long to do. Same with the guts - it takes a long time to stack and twist them, but that wasn't the point.
>>50905
I liked the story. I made changes that made sense to me. She's a thief and that justifies the search and seizure. I thought it would be better to not shove the grenade back in and get a gift from the bunny LOL. I remember they can poop a lot of round little grenades. Yeah. She can give a blow job if she gets pulled off the ceiling and Mark gets an erection after the experience.