>>50908
Yes, your story version ended to be more logical but less crazy ;)

>>50909
I think your explosions have too much smoke and not enough flame. When in my opinion smoke is completely unnecessary.

>>50914
I guess that unit will turn someone who falls into it into fertilizer LOL
Not even sure what you have in mind for it.
But if you want some more plot than just jumping into that for no reason You could show it as some accident when in the beginning they are using it to chip some wooden sticks or other trash (as demonstration how it works) and end chipped themselves somehow too.


Also another story idea which may be interesting and will be fine with whatever snuffing methods anyone likes.

It would be PETA performance where girls dress/bodypaint? as cows and pigs then get snuffed and processed into canned meat, which is later left for people to take.
She could be electrocuted or big nail hammered into her head or being hung on the meathooks.

If it turns into longer story boy also could dress as bull and have sex with cow girls. Maybe make some of them pregnant (or stuff someone with meat from meat grinder )

I think it could be interesting if their legs get partially amputated to make them look more like pigs also that nose hook thing is very appropriate

One girl could also dress as cat and get "declawed"