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>>62796
sorry for taking so long to respond!
first of all: thank you so much, I had no idea just how much material you had made and I really love each one ^^
(though if i'm not mistaken, there's still one or two shots in the initial preview that aren't present here, like the one where it pans around her feet standing on the "please stand here" mark :P)

when i have the time i definitely want to make a deluxe cut using the extended scenes you provided, there's just too much good stuff in there not to have it included :D
>>63089
these are awesome! i'm happy to see the triple stabilized spit make a return (the one that also holds her by her butt crack) and the details are again stunning to say the least!
i love her position on the spit and how she's affected by gravity in the one that turns with her face! i really hope that she lives long enough to feel the heat for herself :)


however since you're asking for feedback, there are a few small things that i would also like to point out. the main thing that i find could be improved right now is the speed at which she's rotated. i've never roasted a pig myself, but it feels like it should be slower. according to a forum i found keeping it around 3rpm would probably be good, but currently one rotation takes 4-5 seconds, so that would be 12-15 rpm. so even just going down to 6rpm or something would probably make a big difference

also i'm not a huge fan of the tin foil around her head. if that's possible, i think it might look better if it was more closely fitted to still cover her hair while leaving her face more exposed. but that's just my visual preference :P

one thing i'm a bit torn on is the video recorder effect, while it looks great on one hand as it makes the whole thing more believable, i'd also like a crisper rendering to really appreciate all the details, so if that's possible, then having multiple versions of the finished video could be nice ^^

and lastly since i'm nitpicking, i think it would look good if the spit had somewhere to rest against on her face-side as well, it seems like it could be a little unstable right now.

other than that, all i can say is that i hope you'll capture this magnificent moment in plenty of details, i of course can only speak for myself and don't know the ins and outs of making something like this, but i wouldn't mind if the video ends up being over 10 minutes, maybe even something like half an hour long :D
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