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great feedback, icy! thank you so much for taking the time!

> though if i'm not mistaken, there's still one or two shots in the initial preview that aren't present here
true, but these shots were rendered exclusively for the teaser (you can find them in R001-Teaser.zip).

> the main thing that i find could be improved right now is the speed at which she's rotated.
now that you mention it, i can clearly see that it's way too fast.
i guess it was a mathematical decision on my part (~16-second video, ~4 revolutions) .. odd.

> also i'm not a huge fan of the tin foil around her head.
yep, it looks awful. but what else would protect her face and hair from the heat? ;]
i tried wrapping it tighter, but then she turns into robocop.
i don't know .. i'll probably create an alternative version without tin foil.

> one thing i'm a bit torn on is the video recorder effect
don't worry, there'll be a version with no/very little post-fx.

> i think it would look good if the spit had somewhere to rest against on her face-side as well
well, i built it that way so that as little as possible obstructs the view.
but i'll try to add a stabilizing rod to make it look more believable.