So glad you can show us your new progress. Sarah looks so tempting spinning on the charcoal fire, or should I say appetizing?
I noticed the tree shadows changed very quickly in the last video. Is this a fast-forwarded version? If so, I have a small suggestion: the rotation speed might need to be increased further, and some sound effects could be added to remind viewers that it's a fast-forwarded version.
The tin foil around her head looks a bit like a strange hat XD. Honestly, it's stunning; few artists would depict that you need protective gear to prevent the her hair from getting burned. However, the effect isn't ideal, as it obstructs most of the view. If you're going to create a version entirely from Sarah's perspective, I think it's best to remove the tin foil—a small compromise for the art.
It's a bit of a shame that Sarah's face didn't move at all in the video; I hope she could stay on the charcoal fire for a while to enjoy the roasting.Then the fast-forward version can be used until she's cooked.
Overall, your video is fantastic, and I really look forward to see more of it.My English isn't very good, so I apologize if anything I said was unclear.