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    Fun Vacation.
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    Starring:
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    Kenny. A well-rounded, serious young guy. Ginger's boyfriend
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    Ginger. A kind, sweet, fun-loving girl. Has a little sister.
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    Mark. The soul of the company. Very adventurous. In love with Nutty.
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    Nutti. Sarcastic bitch. In love with Mark. But won't admit it because of her bad temper. Has an opinion on everything. She's actually nice, too.
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    Petty. Ginger's little sister. I don't know how she ended up here. She just didn't have anyone to leave her with. You have to keep your eyes open for her. Otherwise, anything could happen.
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    Let's go on an adventure, shall we?
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    We arrived at the place. Very tired. We're going to sleep.
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    >>50959
    Going on adventure with a woodchipper ;)
    LOL

    I guess it will be first time when those characters are introduced
    Ginger looks best of all to me
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    I hope they run over a girl with that truck. Or just park it on her pussy.
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    It seems that Petty, out of curiosity, will get into trouble, after that it's not worth for the others to come back any more, they would be better enjoy themselves.
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    >>50967
    Will Petty be involved? Yeah. Is it gonna be an accident? No. It'll be sabotage. Or a prank, if you will.
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    >>50965
    Maybe. In the future.
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    >>50960
    You'll like Nutty, too. Maybe soon. She just likes to make faces and grimace. She's actually very sensitive.
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    Day one
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    I thought it would be better with grass
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    >>51016
    Looks like nobody can do proper expressions of pain :)

    >>51023
    I suppose Nutti died here
    Just now understood that I confused Petty with Ginger.
    That was pretty deadly prank she did.
    At this moment I think how everybody is going to feel about it.

    I also had an idea or similar introduction episode how they find out about how things work.
    But in my opinion it is less sad if they all die ;)
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    The story become little bit sad, and there are not fun any more.
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    Well, actually, Nutty deserved a pinch. Things got out of hand. She died. It's dramatic. I'm crying with you all.
    Pain is not a good representation. The thing is, pain-orgasm, surprise-fear are similar pairs of emotions. Let them die enjoying it.
    I'm just thinking how to show an upset Marcus and his friends and 01.01.64 that it's not that dramatic. LOL
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    I realize that no one will be completely satisfied. But it just so happens that some shenanigans require more than one. The finale always turns out sad and unimpressive. That's why I'm thinking about Neverland. I'm leaning towards the idea of Dead Like Me and Pet Cemetery.
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    While I'm thinking about the act of reincarnation look at the saddest artwork ever
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    >>51037
    I actually would have liked to see them put her in the hole and bury her, not just show the aftermath.
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    >>51016
    А это уже становится интересней. Жаль только что текст отсутствует.
    And this is already becoming more interesting. It's just a pity that the text is missing.
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    I'm at a loss. Everyone loves Nutty's funeral so much. I was just about to reincarnate her to be run over by a car. What should I do? LOL
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    It's not a comic book. It's a movie with the sound off.
    What am I supposed to write?
    - I'm gonna get back at you, you blonde bitch.
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    -Aah! -How that orange fire hurts!
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    How will I live without my Nutty?
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    >>51033
    People on guro story crying about character dying. LOL

    But I think it was supposed to be just the beginning
    She comes back and shoves Petty into woodchipper or something :)

    So for me it was rather interesting what will happen next. How the sad story will transform into the crazy :)
    >>51043

    I think you should just continue :)
    It was actually all expected as you described in the beginning.

    Maybe it just ended a bit longer and more emotional than expected.

    But speaking about running her over with a car that may be actually interesting idea if she comes back and everybody thinks she is a ghost or zombie (and being a bitch she may try to play a prank on them now) and now try to kill her and she keeps coming back and gets killed.
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    I am slightly disappointed that the story, at this point, somehow looks like would turn to anger, fear and hatred. It seems to me that free conscious choice, as much as it can be talked about in such a fetish, and getting pleasure and entertainment from events, especially if the reincarnation factor is involved, is much more attractive and fun. But that's just my opinion. It is not known how the story will continue, and it is only up to the author.
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    I was thinking of holding a theatrical pause. But the next episode isn't ready yet. And everyone's getting upset. So no next episode yet, just the end of day one. LOL
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    It's gonna happen. And a car accident and Nutty's bloody hilarious revenge. And they didn't bring the wood chipper with them for nothing. But not all at once.
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    Enjoy the vanilla for now LOL
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    >>51052
    Неожиданный поворот. Но без текста сложно понять, что происходит.
    Unexpected turn. But without text it's hard to understand what's going on.
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    >>51057
    I guess she found a way to get back from hell :)

    >>51063
    Well, not really that unexpected turn, because it was already mentioned in the beginning what will happen :)


    Just maybe it was unnecessary to show the process of how she came back ;)
    She could simply reappear.
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    >>51065
    Well, that's one time. Now they'll reincarnate automatically. Those who have already reincarnated will walk at the beginning of the scene without underpants)
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    >>51067
    It seems that the author introduced an interesting twist, with a lot of possibilities to make an initially sad story interesting and entertaining.
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    >>51067
    На них будет одежда? Это звучит печально.
    Will they be wearing clothes? This sounds sad.
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    Day two
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    you telling me its that easy to rip off a penis and balls. Come on dude this is weak. You are better than this.
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    I didn't want to post the artwork. I don't like them. But since my imagination is not turned on, you can see what I've done.
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    That makes more sense. Better much better. Well caring on then.
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    This times I am not getting what happened.

    How did she managed to get the hook into his eye? and later into his penis and why he cut them off?
    Or they are all already aware about respawning next day and eager to try how death feels? :)
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    >>51096
    Mark has a troubled relationship with Nutty. He went to follow her and hid where they were fishing. And got hooked. Getting free of the trap so he wouldn't be discovered. I just wanted to show an unusual catch. I didn't even want to post the extreme shots. I still get tears in my eyes when I see it LOL.
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    It's a story about how being a voyeur is complicated
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    >>51102
    Yesh , but what I don't get is how did he managed to get a hook into his eye?

    I think you overdid that eye wound a bit.
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    At this point just you should make it where they pretend to be fish, like it was a fun game they were playing. A side note: The girl that caught the "fish" is UGLY! like not even trying making her cute. Change her up a bit. Well thanks for maaking these stories. Ever since pivix lost most it's best guro and loli artist this has been a good place to come.
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    I meant the blonde girl with the caught of a eye
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    >>51105
    Just google eye+fishing hook and you'll get a dozen pictures.
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    >>51113
    She's actually really nice. It's just that her role in this story is bitchy. LOL.
    >>51105
    Yeah. I know the eye's a little overdone. But I didn't want to publish that stuff. And anyway, my boys don't die so well. I admit it.
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    >>51123
    I think the issue is more about her looks :) As overall she looks OK to me but maybe in some images her expressions were a bit too weird. and her eyelashes could be bigger/darker
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    Go look at Onix's girls, They are all sexy and BEAUTIFUL! And hurry up, I'm on the edge of my seat with this story.
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    >>51133
    If you're talking about characters then you're expecting a different story
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    Did you get mad and give up on the vacation? Now you're on Holidays and cam girls, Come on man! They better do some Fuck'd up shit while streaming it live.
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    Did their vacation with woodchipper already ended or just on hold ? :)

    >>51149
    I think she was not supposed to fly when being inflated with plain air ;) LOL

    >>51183
    Does not look like it would lead to something gorey but looks interesting either way.
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    I would say he got mad at us and made a new one. LOL! dude we just your fans saying what we like and what we hate.
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    >>51206
    We need to supply gas cylinders. I have helium. The balloons flew and the girl took off too.
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    What makes you think I'm angry?
    I softened Nutty's facial features.
    Why webcam? Because I needed a distraction. They have Internet in their house.
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    >>51239
    Not that I complain but I thought you don't like blood LOL
    Anyway this looks great. Webcam was good nice idea
    Maybe she died a bit too fast as they could do more fun stuff.
    Nutty expressions also seem to look better


    >>51228
    Helium logic would be fine, but she was inflated using air compressor not helium gas cylinder :) so it did not even came to my mind that it could be helium.

    Although this gave me idea for another story where they would be doing chemistry experiment in the chemistry class and someone gets filled with
    hydrogen/oxygen mixture
    then she farts into the fire and instead of flame she explodes into pieces LOL
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    >>51241
    Yeah. Compressor. LOL. but there are cylinders too. It was just inconvenient to get the hose in. Probably should have just put it next to each other.
    I told you I don't like blood. Not a phobia, just don't like it.
    That's a great idea. My humble suggestion. We could get the class room from the one with the compressor. It's just a corner. It's lightweight, easy to put lights on. It's from the Pin Up Boxes set.
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    >>51416
    Just wondering why are you asking that on 3d thread?
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    >>51424
    It's someone who is too stupid to understand how a message board works Onix, so they've resorted to trolling. It's the same one who was constantly demanding artworks and then criticizing everything. Possibly could be a child who has internet access tbh.
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    Hi, can you do the helium thing with Skyla, please?

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