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    New guro series about a girl with older brother who are sent to the very boring but also very special village for the summer.
    Inspired by the "Chopping Wood" story from here https://boards.guro.cx/lit/koko.php?res=16464
    and probably somewhat resembles "Gravity falls" cartoon :)
    Any criticism or suggestions are welcome.
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    This will be the sad end of the current episode :)

    which explains why she doesn't like hangings
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    >>44758
    Well, well, well, if it isn’t the guy who just a few pages ago said that rendering pee is too hard and left her clothes on because of it :P

    I like it though, now that he’s also hanged, it would’ve been repetitive if she had peed like that earlier so it works quite well :)

    And since she literally leaves him hanging, he’s sure to die from it, even if he probably could’ve still recovered if he was let down again early enough, so at least one of them got a proper punishment :D
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    >>44767
    And i’m curious what she’ll do next time to not let him off that easy. Is it ball busting time already? If so, I can’t wait for the next chapter ^^

    Then again, I’m looking forward to it no matter what’ll happen
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    >>44768
    She can't to get him off she because she is little girl. at first I thought that rather than trying to do it with him hanging she would be trying to take him off and have sex with his body too, then notices that he is way to heavy and that she screwed up badly because she can't even hang herself now as he is "using" the rope :)

    So at that point it should be that she either she just wait this day to pass, or she tries to find a way to kill herself. so maybe when she got chopped into pieces she already had some more experience :) or maybe she was just very bored
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    p.s. Maybe I will consider inserting a picture where she is trying to take him off :)

    There are few directions where if can go next so maybe let's have some voting just to see what are vievers preferences:)
    without full details about what will be happening

    1. a girl dresses up as a whore and and later does some serious CBT for her brother later he "rapes" her

    2. she becomes a cow /probably end with getting slaughtered
    2.1 later they do some work in the local cow farm as another episode

    3. girl becomes a pig her brother does the same which obviously will be messy. and it may end with some slaughter/cooking/unreasonable pregnancy

    4. those other twin sister get introduced

    5. more pony play

    6 shifting from guro to sex :)
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    >>44772
    Yes, please, all of those, in that order! XD

    No, seriously, all of those sound great, if I had to pick just one, I’d probably want you to start with nr2 since that’s one of the things that we’ve already discussed here, but all of the options are great, so no matter which you do I’m here for it :)
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    >>44772
    Я за №1 голосую, пускай получит по полной, ему было обещано что он литься своих яиц, или еще чего вместе))
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    Looks like my series have quite some resemblance to this guro/horror game Dream of Gluttony
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4YPs_QbwQjY (lets play video version)
    and it totally could be this village :)
    They even have older boy and young girl living in the house like that alone who occasionally kill guests (and everyone there kill their guests ;)
    So you could imagine that some characters like in that game exist here too :) It even has those 2 twin sisters that I was planning to introduce.
    So pretty big coincidence and it may be worth checking that game as it is pretty interesting concept.
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    I'm in favor of pony play and sex
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    >>44755
    I almost thought so. :)
    BTW, residents of Groundhog Day Settings should make sure they're up to date every morning. There's nothing more annoying than dying after missing the end of the loop.

    >>44772
    With CBT on the scedule it would make sense, if he becomes the "cow". At least he has the teat to milk him. OTOH, she might be more tastier as suckling piglet.

    When treated individually, identical twins offer the opportunity to make a nice before and after comparison between their treatments.
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    >>44777
    He may become a cow in the cow farm :) You know, cows need to be properly inseminated to produce milk. but in this cbt setting it is something different :)

    >>44774
    He is not going to lose anything this time :)
    this is for later when they will show that secret recipe to those twin sisters

    >>44776
    at least someone wants non guro stuff on gurochan :)
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    I could see a continuation to this storyline, where because she's bored and quite enjoyed her brother's dick, she plays with a pole as a replacement, going deeper and deeper, and ends up impaling herself on it (maybe the pole is tall, and she has to climb on some bales to stick it in. She accidentally looses her footing during orgasm and falls, impaling herself. Or maybe it's intentional play, exploring how deep she can get it into her, spicing up her own sex play).

    As for your proposals, tons of possible ideas here. As icy said, all your proposals sound absolutely lovely. I quite enjoy the direction you went with using her in animal roleplay. So I would probably go that way first.

    Here's a few alternate ideas, kinda mixing several of them.

    She becomes a cow. Because she has to be impregnated to produce milk, the have sex and he impregnates her, ending up using her for milk and fun for a while before slaughtering her for meat.

    Or maybe a farmer turns her into a cow and him into a pig.

    Or even, if you want to go fantasy style, you could go full interspecies sex, where the farmer would impregnate her with an actual bull, and get him to impregnate sows, something like that.

    Great work as always. You produce great content as such a high rate, it's quite impressive !
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    >>44783
    That pole scenario rather gives me quite a sinister idea on how to punish her even more.
    Like she does what but just using a bedpost in her room she does not get skewered but when it slips into her pussy she is left stuck on it for all remaining time of the day and cant even go anywhere It can't get any more boring than that if she will not find a way to kill herself.

    I may not spoil all details, but my story is a bit more twisted than that as for now they are a bit uncomfortable with sex so I rather think about artificial insemination :) and the it will be rather focused on her breasts :)
    sex will be for the farm scenario with many girls :)


    as for pig scenario I still don't have much details besides some imagination how they could look like. the problem if they both become pigs You need another character to slaughter them.
    also I think how it woud look if their hands and legs get shortened and replaced with pork trotters for better authenticity :) But this requires extra character as well.

    The general idea behind this village is also that they don't have any real animals since humans make way cheaper meat and also can be used for other purposes like horses :)
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    >>44785
    Ohhhh, I like the way you think !
    If she gets stuck with a bedpost deep in her pussy, would she reset the next day or is that just when you die ?

    I think we've determined that not everything resets, if the corpses stay.

    If it's just upon death, that they reset, then her brother would find her stuck on her bedpost the next day and would certainly seize the opportunity to inflict all kinds of tortures upon her. I also imagine that if she's alive at the end of it, to free her from her pole, he would certainly choose to decunt her.

    Oh, I like the idea of totally replacing animals with humans. That's fun and makes total sense in the context ! Although I could imagine them having some pet animals.

    I would argue that them being uncomfortable with sex wouldn't preclude them having sex, if a third party is involved and converts them both into breeding stock, forcing them to do it.
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    >>44787
    I think things should reset only when they die although in that case it becomes unclear to which point they reset.

    But if she will get stuck on that bedpost she will be very tired next day for not having any sleep feeling worse than from any other torture so she will be begging to kill her.
    her brother is not that willing to inflict horrible tortures on her, He loves his sister after all.
    But if he takes her from the bedpost like that I think her cunt will be like a gaping cavern at that time and she will be embarrassed to death :) so maybe it is not that bad idea after all.

    Keeping pets is possible although I doubt if it is necessary to have anything cute when they have cute girls. Maybe they keep some pet alligator, pet python or maybe some pet dog whom they feed human meat. :) Some carnivorous plants or tentacle monster also may exist :) If someone is interested But then it will probably be another series of girls feeding animals :)
    Just that for now they don't have that many people around but village probably will expand in the future.



    When you are uncomfortable about sex you do same as everyone does: pretend that it is not sex :) Or they can be forced to like in that cow farm :)
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    >>44772
    So, got a plan yet what you’ll be making next and maybe even when you’ll make it? I gotta be honest, I don’t envy you, everyone’s suggestions are so good that making a choice would be hard for me :P
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    >>44796
    I will not be at home this week so nothing will be posted but think I will continue with that CBT episode as it is not going to be very long
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    >>44806
    that makes me both happy and not so happy at the same time. happy because you'll do cbt next, not so happy because it'll be short XD

    ok then, i'm looking forward to it when you're back home :)
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    >>44779
    >You know, cows need to be properly inseminated to produce milk.
    Its the advantage of "male cows" that they don't need insemination – only proper stimulation… :D

    >>44785
    >the problem if they both become pigs You need another character to slaughter them.
    Not really. There is this incredible invention, called "Jessica 3000". And I heard even of a 5000-model. I can imagine that … (ehm, did I miss something or do they really have no names?) … she would be curios and enthusiastic.

    >>44793
    >I think things should reset only when they die although in that case it becomes unclear to which point they reset.
    And another question would be, if they both have to die or the whole village or only the people involved in the ongoing event or in the surrounding of the barn or, or, or. How about the mechanism in Forever:
    >Each time he dies, Henry disappears almost immediately and returns to life naked in a nearby body of water, […]. He has also stopped aging. [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forever_(2014_TV_series)]
    Henry lives in New York and mostly climbes out of the East River, which adds an embarrasing twist to the story. There is an another immortal character in the show and they revive independend of each other. The same would be a nice explanation for the "mystical" about your little protagonists.
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    >Its the advantage of "male cows" that they don't need insemination – only proper stimulation… :D


    yes but you will not milk that much from just one boy like that :) he may need some drugs to enhance productivity.

    In that technologically impaired village it will be hard to find something as advanced as that machine ;) but it is possible. "fully automated pig farm" LOL
    however unless someone takes them out they will be stuck there at least until the next day :)


    in this story the idea is that immortality only happens to everyone in that location while they have to be careful in other places. and they wake up in the bed where they were sleeping last time.
    since I want everyone to get accustomed to it gradually and maybe stay unaware of it for some time too :)
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    >>44917

    >[…] he may need some drugs […].

    … of course with some funny side effects.

    >[…] it will be hard to find something as advanced as that machine

    Yep, that could be difficult under these circumstances. But even the ancient Egyptians had their ingenious inventors. And despite it is a technologically impaired village, it looks like Leonardo da Vinci may have already lived. Why not let them stumble across an old weird machine?
    OTOH, I understand that – from the artist's point of view – the "reinvention" of such a device takes a lot effort and time, which is lost to the progress of the story.

    >[…] they will be stuck there […]

    Uhh, that's a real issue – it would be a total waste of fine meat.

    >in this story […] they wake up in the bed where they were sleeping last time.

    Thank you for the clarification. And BTW for your stories too.

    >since I want everyone to get accustomed

    The characters or the audience?
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    >>44949
    >… of course with some funny side effects.

    I rather think those will be *intended* effects :)


    If everything will go well, they eventually may find some interesting stuff there :)
    I think this village may be some ghost town with quite some stuff to discover.



    >The characters or the audience?

    The idea of this village was that you may live in the nearby town with all technology and stuff or in this boring village with just few people where you don't die but don't have anything to do which is why they behave so weird :)

    But it is not much fun if nobody cares about dying at all so I think if characters discover it slowly will be more fun.
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    >>44806
    it's not like i want to rush or pressure you, but… the week is over :P

    do take your time, just know that my interest in this hasn't died down in the slightest ^^
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    >>45026
    Not does the interest of your followers on Lolicit…. ;-)
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    This will be the beginning. :)
    Not going straight to action immediately :)
    After finding out on internet that 1 of 4 girls get raped she wants to try it herself :)

    >>45041
    I wonder why they don't come here :)
    Or also i will be on ATF

    >>45026
    God listened to your prayers LOL
    But speaking about god i got interesting idea for the very short story just not sure how easy it will be to do :)
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    ATF…all the fucked?
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    >>45050
    jesus in the background be like: "please seek professional help!" XD

    >>45053
    praise be! i can already see that this will be a lot of fun! :D

    i'm curious if she ends up being raped who does it. you mentioned an uncle earlier, but it'd probably be a good option if her brother did it to teach her a lesson or something… maybe he puts on a mask and sneaks up on her so she doesn't realize it's him at first?

    just gotta hope that if it does go down that route, she doesn't enjoy it after all and it turned out to be just another one of her stupid ideas gone wrong :P
    the makeup is also a great setup if she ends up crying, that'd probably look great as well…

    so many possibilities…

    i'm very much looking forward to see where this leads! :)
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    so she got back home from her adventures:)

    but at this moment it is just a text story. which is based on the "dream of gluttony" game scenario to some extent
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    she's right, they do look quite difficult to walk in :P
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    yeah

    I just messed up picture order a little as one got skipped
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    >>45093
    aaah, now it makes sense… i was kinda confused why someone that seemed like a british lord who would teach her about tea ceremony and so on would also have piercings in his dick :P
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    so we're not going to see the cbt? or does this inspire her brother to also give it a go? if so, then i can't wait :P
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    >>45099
    You are going to see it of course :)
    this is just pretty long introduction
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    >>45100
    [fun isn't something one considers when browsing guro-chan, but this…] this does put a smile on my face! :D
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    Shit just went from 0 to 100 really quickly :P
    I hope they recreate it faithfully and in great detail :D
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    >>45110
    hehe, not so quickly it was entire 26 pictures of just talking LOL
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    >>45111
    I mean… that’s also technically correct… what i meant was that it escalated within one speech bubble from “just” cbt to probably lethal injuries :P
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    This will be all for today
    Actually in this story is pretty hard to invent something at least reasonably believable :)
    Like why they are doing it if he is suffering so much
    Also to tell the truth I don't know how does it feel to be hit in the balls like that and how much pleasure those guys who like it being done to them get :) so some info would be useful.

    so let's hear other opinions on how it should continue, How much pain and pleasure boy should get from all that ;) or what kinds of ball tortures he could experience (but his dick is going to stay unharmed this time)
    and meanwhile I will be doing few commissioned pictures
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    she could promise rewards if he endures x amount of kicks.
    And as to what is pleasurable, for me it is the power dynamic, having a woman hurt my balls while I have no control and she could do anything is a thrill
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    >>45138
    Ah, I see. For now her reward is rather promise that it may feel good somehow if he endures it ;)(which we may decide here if it does or not) as there is not much that she could offer as reward.

    also In this situation even if he decided to stop he would be just walking with sore swollen balls until he somehow offs himself :)
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    Can't wait to see her finish him.

    Being hit in the balls is not just site pain, it radiates into your abdomen, making you feel queasy or sick. It's a pain that sits inside you for a while, not like a muscle you can massage if you get hit there.

    The erotic factor can go different ways for different people. The mainstream attitude is just getting off by being dominated by a woman. Some get off on feeling their genitals are worthless, and having someone treat them that way is validating that view. There can be a "call of the void" temptation to lose it all in some last erotic session that will end your manhood forever. Some enjoy being sissified - their maleness diminished and ridiculed.
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    >>45137
    i think the answer to why they're doing it despite him being in pain is simply that they're both bored and she doesn't care too much / honestly believes he'll enjoy it in the end.

    i also don't have much experience in the subject, but i'd imagine what the others have said is quite accurate. as to how it relates to their situation, there could be a moment where he wants her to quit and she gets him to continue by saying something like "How do you know it won't feel great if you just keep going" or something.


    generally, i'd prefer if he doesn't *feel* too much pleasure from it, but still ends up ejaculating unwillingly as his balls try to save his offspring (he has ejaculated before, hasn't he? if not, then forget about that point). there's this lovely video of asa akira i think where she strokes a guy and when he cums she "helps" by going to town on his balls, leading to him shooting in a confused mix of pleasure and pain, so maybe something like that would work here as well?

    another idea would be that once she's beaten up his balls quite a bit, he's in so much pain that he begs her to finish him, which she takes to mean finish his balls and squashes them between two bricks or something like how they castrated slaves back in ancient times…

    lastly though it's a bit far fetched, there's also some great artworks by noise concerning the ways of cbt with one standing out to me in particular being where a woman uses a clothes iron to iron the boy's balls so as to remove his dirty semen from his balls… it's a real shame noise doesn't make stuff like that anymore :P



    whichever way it goes, i think he should end up castrated, wether by accident or on purpose. that'd also give him some motivation to do more stuff to her in a future episode, so it's win win XD
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    >>45136
    also i just realized that if the discussion that was on here earlier about her sitting on the bedposts was about *these* bedposts, then i'm not sure if she would actually survive that or if it wouldn't just be a slow, painful impaling… they're tall enough to come out of her mouth if she does it, which would be quite lovely to see, wouldn't it? :P
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    In this situation I was rather interested in those guys who are into pain itself and love torturing their balls like squashing them or nailing them and the somehow even come from that pain there are even hands free ejaculation challenges on internet where guy cums from painfully beating his balls :) Some people just love pain so much, that her adventure is not even fully fictional ;)

    but story she told was from the game I mentioned above when main character Sissy plays a game with a guy named tomato throwing stones at him to make "tomato juice"
    the british lord story also comes from that game but I think about possibly replaying it too ;)

    that game also had other characters like some kind of criminal/murderer Dumpling
    crazy cannibal girl Candy
    transgender serial killer Cinnamon
    and those 2 characters here would correspond to the pedophile Bread and his little girl Butter
    also there are some more.

    the idea of that game is to hide insane horror setting behind most wholesome cutesy representation. where Sissy has to pretend that it is all fine


    In this episode I rather think he may cum from his balls getting squeezed so hard that contends of them will squirt out LOL
    but in the end he is going to lose them ;)


    >>45142
    yes i was thinking about those bedposts :) but not those sharp ones in front rather those blunt thick balls in the back :) this time I think it woud go into her pussy rather than ass and it woud stretch it lot probably even entering her womb then she would stay like that for quite some time :)
    impaling herself on those in front would be even tricky without help as she need to climb on them somehow. while tosse blunt one are conveniently better shaped ;)
    so in that situation I think it cloud rather work as some kind of "escape challenge" or if she really gets punished by her brother.
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    Nice ballbusting. You try for something reasonably believable? Oh come on. Remember that time in Zamboogie when the tribal leader forced you into sex with a zebra? You sure earned your stripes with that one.
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    >>45141
    Once there was a greenhorn in the Wild West. He was informed by an old cowboy about bricking.
    "What is bricking?" he asked.
    "That's how we turn bulls into oxes. You take two bricks and smash the balls." answered the old guy.
    "But doesn't that hurt?" wondered the newbie.
    "Not at all." replied the cowboy. "Just make sure to keep your thumbs on the outside of the bricks."
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    Awesome ballbusting!
    She could start getting cocky too and end up on the receiving end of some nasty cuntbusting to even things out. Both could end up wetting themselves in pain & pleasure, from this new experience.
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    >>45156
    That’s a good idea as well, it could even be that she allows him to kick back as a way to motivate him to keep going and they escalate back and forth until his balls are no more :D
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    >>45157
    At that time he may not have anything left to bust there. :)

    Later he definitely can take revenge I just wonder how it will look like if he will be doing that when his balls are completely crushed :)
    Cuntbusting can be done but I think it is not even remotely as painful so he will need some better way :)
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    Do one where he or she is cut in half and force to eat it as a nice dinner? That be greate… To see and read
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    >>45192
    Well, that sort of happened already ;)
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    >>45191
    Oooh, i like where this is going! :)

    It would be fun if she just dropped the brick on his balls, but then it’d probably be over a bit too quickly :P
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    >>45208
    Yes that would be to simple but also not sure how it woud be even possible to drop it on his balls ;)
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    When he asked her to cut his head off, I expected her to say "as you wish" and cut off the head of his dick :-)
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    >>45219
    Hehe, I guess since that did not came to my mind a young girl like her also could not think about it LOL
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    >>45209
    Got any plans for when you’ll be able to continue? As it is right now you’re literally blue balling the poor boy, you can’t leave him like that forever :P
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    >>45237
    Maybe I will even post something today when i will add text. But next time may be delayed a little as I have some other work to do
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    This is all for now and also all of the soft ballbusting stuff ;)

    Not sure when next update will come but I wonder if anyone can guess when will happen as it can be seen already
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    >>45257
    I'm game. I have 3 proposals.
    - I do notice the bed has some very nice and tall bedposts. And she didn't manage to get raped. She must be pretty frustrated right now. Would be a shame if she got raped by a bedpost, getting stuck and giving her brother an opportunity at cunt-busty retribution in the process.
    - I notice the cross and religious icon in the bedroom. This could give them ideas and nail her to a cross to expiate her sins, or use her as a sacrifice in some kind of religious ceremony.
    - Last notable thing in here is a lamp. Maybe she breaks his bedside lamp and since he needs a new one, he uses her body to fabricate one ?
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    >>45238
    i hope it won't take too long :P

    >>45244
    at this point he may even have been better off if she was still wearing her horse shoes… visually this setup reminds me of one of those pliers used to remove the stones from cherries with the hole in the brick and her heels being about the right size to place one of his balls on a hole and step on it with the heel, pushing it into the hole until it's removed from the sack and possible skewered on her shoe…

    >>45253
    i just love how she "motivates" him to say things he'll definitely regret dearly by dancing around on his balls. though i'm honestly unsure if this wouldn't already crush them permanently since she's putting all of her weight onto a very small area. i don't know how much force it takes to crush balls, but this is probably at least very close…

    >>45257
    this is one of the great parts of this site… normally what's happened so far would be some of the most extreme stuff possible and even then if you did it irl, you'd probably need to see a doctor afterwards, but since this is here, all of this has just been the "soft" part XD

    another good idea would be to have her insert one of her heels into his dick to stand on his balls better and then maybe jump on one leg for a bit… though that would probably put too much focus on his dick and not enough on his balls, so maybe another time.

    either way, i'm really excited to see what will happen next, i hope you'll be able to do it soon :)
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    Love this series.
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    >>45258
    I am thinking about that sacrifice thing as maybe they try to summon a devil by sacrificing a virgin girl? :) not sure what that would be yet.

    also she may get "raped" later after all

    >>45259
    Looks like you got it right what will happen. Now just need to wait and see how it happens.

    I think he may be very relieved to lose his balls as then all that torture will finally end :)
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    >>45265
    It could get interesting if the sacrifice worked. I'm sure a demon would have a lot of fun for them.
    Teach them a few things about hell.
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    >>45266
    I think it would work :)
    Just for the story there is a problem that if girl dies the boy sort of will be left alone with the demon and if not we will have some half sacrificed girl.
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    Love the series. I sacrificed a virgin once to the great god Priapus. Things were tight then, but we managed to push on with Vigor. You remember Vigor? Tall guy from Prague.
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    Vigor a Czech? I really thought he was Dutch…..
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    45271 You are thinking about his mother, Viagra. She was Dutch and a real hard-case.
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    >>45274
    Dutch viagra? O, you're talking about that orange eco viagra! You take a carrot and tie it to your dick. ;D
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    45317 Yes. Carrot works much better than the sticks from orange popsicles firmly held in place with adhesive tape.
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    >>45238
    Any plans for when you’ll be able to continue?
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    >>45326
    I think somewhere on the next week.
    I have some unfinished images from before but more have to be made :)
    Also good news for you may be that I may get 3090 soon so things will go faster
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    >>45327
    You really know how to keep your followers in suspense, do you?
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    Oh cummon guys. As everyone knows, Onix is an international spy. Secret. Don't tell anyone, but he had to leave for Japan to fight Gorgonzolla the Cheese Monster for the evening news and will return when he's done. We hope?
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    well neglecting irl work and making over few hundreds pictures in one go came with consequences now I have a lot of stuff piled up and it is taking longer to finish than expected
    so the best what can be expected is next week
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    >>45407
    I’m sorry to hear that, thank you for sacrificing your sanity like that for our sake :P
    I can only speak for myself, but I don’t want to pressure you to make more, you can make it whenever works for you, I just want to make certain that you know that there’s people who are interested in this and that I’ll be here whenever you can continue :)
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    So finally here is some update :) more will follow later
    Most detailed 3d "castration" ever LOL and it was pretty hard to do so tell me how well it came out.
    although this girl must have next to divine acrobatic skill to pull al that off with such precision while standing on the brick LOL
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    >>45424
    I thought so as well, the accuracy needed for that is beyond next level since she needed to hit both balls dead center so they can’t just slide to the side a little to avoid being pierced.

    As for how well it came out, I can’t speak on it’s anatomical plausibility, but it looks really great! I don’t know if the testicle would remain “intact” on her heel after she puts in enough force to break it out of the sack, but it’s at least conceivable that that could work, so it’s probably fine :P
    I’d imagine right now every minuscule movement she makes with her heels would lead to pain beyond imagination for him, so if you’re ever going to add tears to his face like you’ve added to hears in the past, now’s as good a time as any!

    Also I don’t know if you plan on having him blow a final load or wether that’s already kinda happened and was just mixed with blood, but I’d probably have put it on the moment she pierced his testicles, or maybe when she tears the first one off? I like the idea of “the final load” since for me at least it also kinda brings the implication of some post nut clarity for him, making everything about his situation that much worse since being horny can provide quite a lot of increased pain tolerance i think… It’s the small things :P

    But all in all: thank you for blessing us with this on this wonderful sunday (for me at least it’s sunday), I look forward to what’s next whenever you find the time :D
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    >>45428
    Actually anatomically it is pretty accurate :)
    The main problem is that it is not possible to show pain in daz because face/body always looks very relaxed.
    I think after his balls get pierced and destroyed it will become less painful as there is nothing much left to feel pain and he is used to it too :)

    next part will come out pretty soon too
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    >>45429
    i'm not sure if the pain would lessen so quickly, since at this point i think the nerves would still be attached and firing with all they've got

    also that's music to my ears! i'm excited to see where the story goes and what she does next ^^
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    >>45430
    I also don't know how exactly it would work as nobody did anything like that to my balls LOL but from other situations i can see that once you abuse some place for longs enough all that pain sensitivity goes down a lot.

    I wonder how many people woud be willing to try such thing like there without being masochists just to see how does it feel if they knew that they will be fine next day :)
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    >>45431
    i think even if i knew i was in such a situation, i'd still be the greatest scaredy cat and party pooper known to man XD
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    There is not much text this time but his suffering did not end yet :)

    >>45432
    This is the whole idea and the reason to do it that it is quite scary ;)
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    Oh that's hot. Wish I was him. Too bad he did't get to cum before she nutted him! He can't now.

    Well, until he regenerates in this world. Might be an interesting point later. "Look sis I can shoot again!" and demonstrates.
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    >>45443
    Hmm, what are you saying? he did cum although hard to tell if he did or if she just squeezed everything out with her heels LOL
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    Now that she's got the oysters free, maybe she could pan fry them up for a light snack?
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    >>45443
    Ok looks like you were right after all. I accidentally skipped a part where he cums.
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    They are supposed to go there
    >>45416

    It is even strange how I managed to miss the most important part LOL
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    >>45443
    > Wish I was him.
    May be you could provide another answer to >>45137 (assuming you are not the same Anonymous as in >>45140).
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    I’d love to see both of them getting cooked whole and alive, if possible
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    >>45453
    That kinda makes sense, I wondered why there was suddenly blood splatters on him :P

    So that is his last ejaculation (of the day) then, right? Bit mixed with blood, but that’s probably to be expected at this point XD
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    >>45455
    This will require introduction of more characters to make a story
    But I may include a picture of them getting cooked as some "imagination"


    >>45457
    So you all see that something is wrong and don't even bother to mention it? :)

    Well anatomically you don't need balls to ejaculate :)

    >>45448
    since you mentioned it, maybe :)

    Sha can continue humiliating her brother for a little bit longer :)
    or maybe we should move to the next story?
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    Looks like I could not post it right even from second try as I forgot to save text :)
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    Great work! Fingers crossed for some cuntbusting now, so she gets a taste of her own medicine.
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    >>45474
    maybe that could happen too :)
    But in that case let's ask everyone a question:
    If the boy should get really angry for being treated like that and lose all control and lash out on his sister or he should do it calmly with a smile on his face?
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    Why, what's there to get angry for? It's all in good fun!
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    >>45475
    Regardless of his facial expression, I think he should make good use of one of those bedposts.>>45475
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    >>45476
    You are absolutely right as in fact she is trying to make him feel good with all that ;)
    But you know that women also love when men lose all control and really get into it with passion rather than staying calm or pretending ;) so she would really like it.
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    I like the idea of seeing him get angry and "return the favor", for a change.
    Then the more he vents off and dominates the less angry he feels, until he does it to tease/get back at her, like she did to him.
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    >>45479
    I also think that it could go in that way as he gets pretty angry then beats her badly and in the end starts apologizing :)
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    >>45480
    I'd like to see her losing another front tooth. A black eye would be nice too.
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    Minority opinion I guess, but acting emasculated is pretty hot after what she did to him. She has the balls now!
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    >>45482
    Yes, she has, but does she know what to do with them?
    No.
    All she can come up with is 'fried tomatoes'. I can't call that empowerment.
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    >>45483
    Eh, she's only, like 6?
    I do call eating them a power move though. Eating his nuts makes them a permanent part of her!
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    >>45451
    Perfect! Love how she puts her finger through his ball while it's still attached to him and he can feel it. I wonder how it would really feel to have a girl touching your bare nut.
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    >>45483
    I wonder what more powerful she could do :)
    This is not finished yet :)

    She is only 6 but as her brother said, she a bit smarter than normal 6 year old ;)

    >>45485
    Nice to see that you like it :)
    I also don't know how it woud feel but probably not too bad :) at lest in comparison to what she did before.
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    >>45481
    I will see about that but i need to think how that could be done

    I was thinking that maybe she can even lose entire eye but maybe that's a bit too cruel :)
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    >>45468
    i wonder how much strength it would take to rip off a testicle irl… you'd think it'd be a bit hard to "pull off" (get it?), but i really don't know…

    >>45479
    i agree, but it should probably go beyond "just" cunt busting since she didn't just do some light ball busting to him but instead ended up castrating him, so it'd be fair if he somehow also went a bit above and beyond :P

    >>45481
    that would also be fun, but i'm not certain if it would fit the theme of this particular episode too well… but definitely something to keep in mind for later ones…?

    >>45486
    there onix goes again downplaying pain… sure, it'd probably be a step up from literally getting your nuts pierced on high heels, but there's a ton of nerves in them and they're probably all still attached and giving it their all, so "not too bad" would probably be a similar kind of "not too bad" as trying to keep your hand on a hot stove XD

    >>45487
    loosing an eye could work, since in a biblical sense he'd have to get some serious revenge after loosing his balls and it's not like she really has any balls to loose… one way to go about it could be that in revenge for her eating his testicles, he wants to eat a part of her as well and so he takes out one of her eyes? maybe a bit disgusting though, but i'm not sure eating testicles is much better :P
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    also i saw that you're following my pixiv now, thanks, i feel truly honoured! :D

    never thought i'd see the day… :P
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    >>45489
    I had no clue that you have pixiv page but somehow pixiv recomended one of your pictures to me

    >>45488
    >i wonder how much strength it would take to rip off a testicle irl… you'd think it'd be a bit hard to "pull off" (get it?), but i really don't know…

    In reality she probably would be able to hang all her weight on that testicle :)

    >>45488
    >there onix goes again downplaying pain…
    nah, all that pain is way overestimated in BDSM and guro some of those things that looks very horrible are pretty painless and some things that look very vanilla like spanking are actually super painful.
    I even made one more story about that which I named "mythbusters"

    >>45488
    >losing an eye could work, since in a biblical sense
    hehe, I think he will not be too upset about losing his balls he would rather be angry about getting teased, humiliated and about his sister gaslighting him all the time. :)
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    >>45490
    >pixiv recomended one of your pictures to me

    mind if i ask which one? i didn't know pixiv ever recommended my pictures to anyone :P

    >>45490
    >In reality she probably would be able to hang all her weight on that testicle :)
    part of that is probably that she wouldn't really weigh that much either XD

    >>45490
    >all that pain is way overestimated in BDSM and guro
    i don't know, i think most guro i see makes things look like they're not that big a deal when in reality you'd probably pass out from the pain… best example is when someone gets cooked alive, often they're all casual and fine with it like "oh, just another tuesday", but if you put your finger on the hot stove for a split second you're already in for a world of hurt, so scale that up to your entire body and you'd probably loose your mind… maybe you've got more pain tolerance than me, since you go stepping on nails and stuff like it's nothing, but i'd imagine especially the younger characters are probably less hardened towards pain than you :P
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    >>45491
    >mind if i ask which one? i didn't know pixiv ever recommended my pictures to anyone :P

    I don't know which one it was but when i was viewing something cannibalism related, your picture was in the list below, which made me wonder if it is not the same guy as here :)
    I think i even saw your pictures before when you were "I can't draw" but not you have wasy more content

    Pixiv is recommending other users pictures with the same tags as the picture they are viewing so if you want more views be sure to put as many tags as possible :)

    >>45491
    > i think most guro i see makes things look like they're not that big a deal when in reality you'd probably pass out from the pain

    well it does opposite too :) as yes being cooked or just getting burned would be super painful but sticking needles into breasts would not really even count as torture in real life. Also it very much depends on where it happens because fingers are very sensitive in other places you may get cut and not even notice that your guts spilled on the ground
    you can see videos of people getting cut in half or being impaled and they are not really bothered with pain at all they rather think how much more time they have left on this earth :)
    Also it very much depends on attitude as when you are not worrying about your life and potential damage, pain actually may feel pretty good similar to eating spicy food where it makes you shed tears but you still continue :) if we think like that we sort of like the taste of pain
    So i think if death was non issue we could be treating pain same as hot sauce and doing things like that may even be fun :)

    Yes younger characters would have less tolerance but I think gradually they may become more tolerant too :)
    And some people like that stuff quite a lot
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    >>45492
    It’s not just if there were no consequences, i remember some years ago when people did “challenges” like lighting themselves on fire XD

    Also it’s quite interesting to hear about that side of pixiv, since other than seeing the view statistics and the occasional comments i don’t really get much feedback… I’ve been putting out at least one drawing per week since the end of 2020, so yes there’s quite an amount of my drawings floating around, i think one of them has even managed to find it’s way onto gurochan once :P
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    >>45493
    well some people are lucky enough(or unlucky enough to have life that horrible) not to care about consequences :)
    Buy since you mentioned I also got an idea about some playing with fire thing from one guy on ATF

    Now am browsing your pictures on pixiv looks like you sort do the similar things as me there but a bit more cannibalism.
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    I second Aoi Hikari's approach in >>45476. They are playing games – wicked games, but games. And the boy didn't object when they ate his wiener.

    >>45488
    In the biblical sense it would be an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth. Ok, you could say he lost some balls, so she is going to loose a(n eye)ball too. But you could say he lost some eggs, and she has millions of eggs … Got the idea? ;)

    >>45491
    > "oh, just another tuesday"
    Is this the reason why a lot of american girls are called "Tuesday" or "Wednesday". Are they already "prepared" for Sindney's restaurant? :D
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    >>45496 To be perfectly fair, it would have to be uterus/ovaries for balls. Which I'd love to see while she experiences some punishment as well!
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    I'm thinking of him being all malicious-playful about it like "oh you think it's nice? let's see how you like being on the other end" and she has to agree that's fair
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    >>45503
    >To be perfectly fair, it would have to be uterus/ovaries for balls.
    This is what I tried to mention. "Ovaries" derives from latin "ovum" meaning "egg". In english "ovum" is the technical term for "egg cell". Masses of these are stored in the ovaries. And as a little smartass I know that at least in german slang the testicles are sometimes called "Eier" meaning "egg". ;D

    >>45506
    > […] she has to agree that's fair
    She not only "has to agree", she will be eager to agree. :)
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    I don't think he should really loose his calm. The whole vibe of that story so far is that they're pretty relaxed about pain and killing, even when they take revenge.
    I think he should calmly decide he needs to each her a lesson and start acting up on it.
    He would probably enjoy it, and be sadistic about it if anything.
    I could see him loosing it to the sadistic pleasure and go overboard torturing her a bit more than he should, if anything. and maybe later apologizing for going too far, but even that, they've been both pretty unapologetic so far.
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    Also I definitely second him doing things to her "eggs". I'm hesitant whether he should get them through her cunt or open up her belly.
    I guess if she's being half impaled on a bedpost, logic would suggest cutting her open and starting to toy with her cunt from the wrong side. Although it could be more painful if he went in through her pussy.
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    Well yes as I said before she woud like her brother to torture(rape) her but also she woud like him to take initiative for once rather than begging him all the time :)
    So she woud be pretty pleased if he would attack her But either wasy it woud be not because of what she did to him but for other reasons :)

    Maybe he can rip out her ovaries and make her cook them for him :)
    as ovaries look more or less same as balls
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    >>45511
    > […] ovaries look more or less same as balls
    But the microscope to prove this would be hard to chew, wouldn't it? :))
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    >>45512
    Hmm not sure why you say that because we talk about ovaries not eggs. eggs are produced about the same wasy as sperm
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    Ah, I see what you mean. Then, yeah, I could see him remembering that she wanted to get raped and used and that she was frustrated she couldn't find anybody to ravish her, and deciding to ambuscade her and treat her to the pain and anguish she deserves.
    Obviously, he'd need to surprise her with stuff she clearly didn't want so she can properly feel used and powerless.
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    At the moment I wrote that I considered it funny. But to be honest, I was very tired and I'm afraid my mind got a little bit twisted. So I mistook ovaries for egg cells (ova), which are the really microscopic things. The idea was that she would cook them and to check their shape a microscope would be neccessary and this might fa ll into the pot and whatever … – it's weired, just forget it.

    Having said that, I'd like to try some clarification.
    Although testicles are called balls they have the shape of eggs (which might explain that german slang word). Ovaries (not ova) also have the shape of eggs. Therefore your conclusion that ovaries look more or less same as balls is totally understandable.
    I just wonder if the word "balls" for testicles was inspired by the rugby ball or the football or something completely different.
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    I’d assume you’re still quite busy with work, but if you find the time to make some images, I wouldn’t mind :P
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    Yes, i got quite busy again because the work i did was returned by the client to fix
    But actually I have something left :)I started to think that the way the story ended is actually better :)

    but probably those pictures should be uploaded anyway and it will be the end of the current episode
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    So this will be the end for now

    Next part will be in the kitchen or rather outside where she already cooked his dick.

    And for you all which outfit you prefer for her to wear?
    current one
    or those naked overalls
    or something else

    I may not have time to continue this story for some time, but I have some other stories half made just without text for now so maybe I will be posting those later on some other thread.
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    >>45613
    Please tell me she means he’ll be cooked for dinner! :P

    >>45614
    If there’s gonna be some cooking, the naked apron combo would be perfect for that, out of all the outfits she had so far that’s probably my favorite, followed closely by the horse “outfit”, but that one probably doesn’t fit to whatever you’ve got planned next… so i’d go with naked apron, that’s always a win :D

    So, now that this episode is finished, here’s some feedback if you want it: firstly, I really love it! Both the general idea, the execution, the level of detail, everything. If I had to be really nitpicky, then the fact that there’s a lot of details in her description of what she did to the other dude earlier that are missing in their “reenactment” means that there’s still more to be done, though i understand perfectly well that when making a story not all ideas can usually be fitted inside and it’s a tremendous amount of work anyways, so making the story twice as long only to add minor details would’ve probably not been the best idea…

    But yeah, overall it’s a great episode and i look forward to the next one! I hope you don’t mind if i’ll be poking you every now and then to see when it’ll be there XD


    P.s. if that’s what you’re considering, then please do have him cooked for dinner next time, we’ve yet to see someone in this story actually being cooked in someway and not just having a small part of themselves cooked or pieces of their corpse or something… cooking someone whole, that’s where it’s at! Well, as whole as he is currently would do as well :P
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    >>45617
    well this time I was not thinking about cooking him as how we discussed before it is rather him taking revenge :)
    and even if I decided to change scenario I don't think she will be able to cook him alone.

    But since now I can do way more complex settings with many characters
    It may be a good time to introduce more characters
    so if you want to see some cooking probably I should put second part of this episode on hold and do next, which will include those 2 girls
    https://boards.guro.cx/3dcg/res/42308.html
    Or maybe I will finish second part at first as it should not be too long anyway.

    It will be pretty intermeeting situation that her brother will be the first who gets cooked like that but maybe next time his sister and those 2 girls will bring him a present too.

    there are some questions on the logistic of that cooking as they dont have any oven big enough to cook entire body
    it probably could be some as spitroasting on the ground or some partial cooking if he is made to sit on fire or getting drowsed with gasoline
    So far the most logical way to do it is if they spit roast him on the spit while using gasoline and some pieces of wood as flame source.
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    >>45619
    > […] will include those 2 girls […]
    They look to me like sisters of this girl – especially the one with the tooth gap. Did you kind of reuse the model as you explained in an older post in an other thread ( >>36042 ):
    >Just like in my series where same girl already died 3 times LOL. You die - you just end in another story as a different character.
    BTW. of which series were you talking?
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    >>45631
    Yes she is same model as those 2 with just different hair :)
    But she is different character It would be way too hard to make everything unique.
    I did not expect them to get together in the same story, so did not bother to make her more different.

    If I got your question right, it will be those series
    https://boards.guro.cx/3dcg/res/32494.html
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    >>45632
    > […] it will be those series
    Ah, this one. I already had read this a while ago. The girl seemed to me a little bit crazy. But it was funny when she gave head – literally. :))
    And in the end she died four times: three times as girl and one time as little devil. :)

    In that thread is a picture of the "perverted sisters" which reminds me of the open end of their story. Did they ever have some fun with the police officer?

    > I did not expect them to get together in the same story

    But when this happens who will be the big and who the little sister(s)?

    Whatever, I'd like to see them on the menue rather than the boy (hehe, "nomen est omen"). May be they could be tenderized by the boy; or why not by an adult helper/cook?
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    >>45639
    In that story I still did not even decide myself what happened :)

    as it just started with idea that she jumped down because she was too lazy to climb down the stairs and she was trying to convince her friend to jump together :)
    But eventually it turned into idea that she sort of knows that she will be fine again on the next episode while he does not know that :)

    perverted sisters story did not finish because I found out that it is too hard to do what I was planning

    Nobody will have fun with that police officer as he exists to enforce law. very literally :)

    >>45639
    >But when this happens who will be the big and who the little sister(s)?
    Those girls are not sisters they are from different families. Also those twins have mom who is quite a slut and drinks a bit too much :) but she is a single mother and has to take care of her daughters so not much time to have fun. In some wasy those girls are like Cartman and his mother in south park :)


    >>45639
    >Whatever, I'd like to see them on the menue rather than the boy (hehe, "nomen est omen"). May be they could be tenderized by the boy; or why not by an adult helper/cook?


    Hmm icy requested that boy should be cooked :)
    so how do we decide where to start? :)
    but since those girls are not even introduced yet I think it will be to fast for them and i don't have any good context while cooking the boy quite well fits my plans for the next story

    and next time his sister could get cooked
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    >>45640
    >so how do we decide where to start? :)

    i'm fine with either, but since there's usually a looot more fem can than male can, i figured starting with the boy would be the best for some "equality" in that regard XD
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    > […] idea that she sort of knows that she will be fine again on the next episode […]

    So it's kind of a precursor of "boring summer".

    > […] enforce law. very literally :)

    But isn't that the fun here? ;b

    > Those girls are […] from different families.

    > Also […] mom […] is quite a slut and drinks a bit too much
    This means it cannot be ruled out that she had something with the father of the boys and the girl. In the family chronicle of latter may be written: The father was a tailor and the mother is unknown. :D

    > […] cooking the boy quite well fits my plans for the next story

    > and next time his sister could get cooked
    This sounds reasonable. Another point to do it this way is the fact that she is experienced as a chef and he can learn while being processed, It would be a pitty when she gets messed up by her clueless brother, wouldn't it?
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    >>45644
    >So it's kind of a precursor of "boring summer".
    Well it sort of evolved into that :)

    >>45644
    >But isn't that the fun here? ;b
    If you enforce the laws literally it can be quite fun :)


    >>45644
    >This means it cannot be ruled out that she had something with the father of the boys and the girl. In the family chronicle of latter may be written: The father was a tailor and the mother is unknown. :D

    I don't know their geneology :) but mostly in all my stories children have no fathers. just single mothers of some sort.

    >>45644
    >This sounds reasonable. Another point to do it this way is the fact that she is experienced as a chef and he can learn while being processed, It would be a pitty when she gets messed up by her clueless brother, wouldn't it?

    My idea is that his sister wants to show that special recipe to those two girls who also happen to come to this village. so she asks her brother for help. At first the plan was to end with just cooking his dick again But since icy requested him to be cooked as a whole it is pretty reasonable to continue in that direction

    More globally this story should connect with that other non guro story about Wendy and her friend where characters from that other story went on a hike and ended in the camp near to that village
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    >>45614
    been about 3 weeks, so here's your irregularly scheduled reminder that the interest in this is still there! whenever you come around to making more :P
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    Since this is all what I made so far you can still tell how girls should be dressed :) as same as before everyone wearing same appron or something different ?
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    >>45908
    I would prefer the girls in the menu, an quite willingly.
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    >>45909
    This is something for the next time :)
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    See through clothing is pretty hot. Especially with no underwear underneath.

    They gonna cut and cook everything between his legs?
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    >>45908
    i've been looking forward to this! with this, you may write history! :D

    i feel like there shouldn't be enough aprons for everyone to have the same one. the sister should be fine with the half apron she wore before, but the others may need to find something else.

    >>45912
    i agree that a see through apron would be quite hot, especially if the girl wearing it is embarrased by it at first. though in terms of balance the see through apron should probably be full size and cover her chest as well.
    as for the third one, i'd go something along the lines of a pink somewhat skimpy apron with frills if those are possible… coverage should be a bit more than the sister's but not a 100% full apron either i think

    i can't wait to see how they're going to cook him, i hope it won't be just parts of him! and also please do take your time with this, things like this cannot be too long or detailed in my opinion XD
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    >>45913
    >i can't wait to see how they're going to cook him, i hope it won't be just parts of him! and also please do take your time with this, things like this cannot be too long or detailed in my opinion XD


    Yes he will get cooked all. Just I think his dick will be cooked first either by getting cut off or still attached to the body :)
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    >>45914
    I think it would be better (for us) if his parts would be cooked still atached.

    Since he is not circumcised, I think you can use his foreskin for girls' amusement. I wonder why so many

    artist forget to play with this thing :)

    They can tie him up to some post, so he won't be moving, then tie his balls, pull them over the gril (or

    maybe pierce them with some rod and then tie and pull it (away from body), but first before using

    flames, girls can tie the end of his foreskin tight.

    You see, grilling his scrotum would be for sure with some pain, and there is a very high chance, that he

    will pee himself into the foreskin.

    So when it has a baloon prepared (which is also kind of painful if you don't expect it and can't stop it

    on time, believe me), they can tie his cock at the base, which then will expand and thus make more pain

    to foreskin. And when grilling begin, the water will also expand and boil. When finished, they can tie

    the foreskin just before the glans very tight (and painful), and them simply cut the foreskin first as

    little baloon and then his cock.

    Since I know story of these two girls, I think it would enjoy it that way. Why make it easy for him.
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    >>45918
    That's quite a story :)
    But I think they will not bother with his balls this time
    Not promising to do exactly as you described but I can try to do something with foreskin too :)
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    >>45921

    No problem :) I don't want to interfere much with your artistic idea.


    This story would work without balls too (or I should say with them intact) :)

    I.e: they can just lighly prepare his cock with foreskin tied so his glans will boil, then remove all his foreskin*, so all the cock will be available for final roasting (I think he will loose it eventually anyway, right?).


    *) I originally suggested tying it at the both ends so he can "enjoy" it more (you know, just to try to squeeze filled foreskin isn't plausible, so what can tying tight it to almost nothing so it won't spill after removing could be challenging for girls - maybe then even pull rope rope from both side to get extra strenght as if they play a little tug of wars**), and it could be some "creative" way to remove as much as skin as possible without need to do some surgeon type time-consuming render ;)

    His sister probably don't want him to suffer (that much), even though she may be still a little in the revenge mood after what he did to her in the hang story, but then.. these two girls, since they don't mind to make that boy suffer with dildo (and I think his sister also didn't mind when she cut his cock first also), it would be somewhat probable in this reality. And he won't like it probably as much either, since he knows now, what will happen, but this make it more a unpleasant surprise to him. And maybe to give him some "motivation" with her in next story as other people suggested..

    **) One could be surprised, what can (some of them) very little girls (and boys) do, when they have chance to tie some other little boy's balls or torture his foreskin, since they are curious and at the same time not so caring about what you can feel. I'm not saying that in reality one sister castrates her brother like it was nothing, but even if it was without after-effects, it was a quite painful "playing a doctor" long time ago :D


    But of course, whatever you do would be fine, I guess :) Thank you.
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    >>45924
    Oh, and I would like to apologize for almost unreadable long sentence in my last post before ** sign. I was probably too excited when I wrote it to notice autocorrect made a mess of it. I was just thinking too much about your last image as: hey, these two girls, especially the one on the right, are looking to be very interested in this, so I hope they won't be just looking at the action and also give a helping hand :)

    I was thinking how easy or hard would be for them to tie his thing. The very tip, no problem, but the foreskin after it would be very inflated? I don't know, but it it could be a challenge. So I imagined his sister would take a long string, tie it just behind the baloon, give both girls loose ends - one from left, one from right - and let them slowly pull it. It begins to tightening up, his glans inside pushed more towards body, and after a while - voala, very tight knot and the baloon is ready to be cut off. Not so funny for the boy, but I think he kind of deserve it. I imagine how his cock would then pop to the light almost like a spring, ready to be cooked naked :)

    Of course, only if others find idea interesting and you will have fun making the story ;)
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    >>45926
    I Think this inflation thing is not very appropriate here in the cooking context if i understand your idea right
    You probably don't want to cook a dick with a pee inside :)

    Your idea looks pretty complex to be worth done as separate story. If you want to see it you should think about some explanation how they come to that idea.

    But yes those 2 girls will be doing most of the work here and they may not follow the original recipe
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    >>45927
    Well, I'm not pushing it at any cost. It is still your story and your hard work I like even without my ideas ;) It just occurs to me there are not so many things left you could cut off them of him being repetive. It's not that I'm complaining to see his dick removed again :)

    I've been looking up some recipes for preparing meat, and some of them mention you can boil meat before roasting or smoke it. His sister maybe can know that, but since you mentioned the twins are here with their mother, they could peep at her while in kitchen and understand the situation wrong.. After all, there are many recipes to prepare meat in its own gravy and some sausages has to be peeled off. After their story being doctors even though through their imagination I can overlook a tiny mistake they could make by forget to detach it from the body first :) So they could have room for these ideas.

    About the hygiene, we can simply overlook she also didn't bother to wash his thing in the older story ;) but puting aside that most of pee will be cut off with the foreskin, cooking or grilling it should remove most of it if not all - but then again these girls may not knowing it. Of course it would be more cleaner to simply flush water in with some hose, but I' m not sure if there is any nor it would be complicated for little girls and would make the story more unrealistic. But there is one fact we can take into account, and that is his thing will be much cleaner for cooking without foreskin than with it ;)

    Again, please, don't take this as I'm dictating you some screenplay. These are simply ideas, even though maybe overthought, which you can use, be inspired by them to make some different side details to this story or another, make any other excuse to process them, or discard them all. I tried to keep them both usable for "child story" within your limits and limits of guro.cx, but of course, I could have been wrong, and in that case I'm sorry.

    So I'm going now to not interfere any more, and looking forward to your story, maybe with some ideas from others which can still come :)
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    >>45928
    You don't need to worry about interfering and all your requests will we taken into account.

    I wonder what others think about being "repetitive". As of course cutting of his dick with a knife like before is not going to happen,but how many times do you like to see it being cut?
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    >>45929
    You could have the twins turn on the little sister and douse her in gasoline and throws a match at her and she runs around the yard
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    >>45929
    Gee Onix, I dunno exactly.
    How many times did Bill Murray wake up in 'Groundhog Day'?
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    >>45929
    There is probably some point where things would get too repetitive, but i think we’re far from reaching it :P
    True, there are only so many ways to cook someone, but in this case just through the context and the fact that it’s a boy being cooked by his sister and two other girls, I’m certain I haven’t seen something like this before. Stories where men are being cooked are rare enough already, so i don’t think you’d need to worry about being repetitive when making one about cooking a boy
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    >>45929
    Well :) If knife is not involved it is not repetite for me and probably you will surprise me in good as usual.

    I can also give some more alternative ideas to be choose from:

    In case pee is still involved, after boiling and removing skin grils can simply wash it, or simply use some garment to clean it - why not polish it like you are polishing your shoes - girls don't have to realize it will somehow "burn" his glans more.

    They then can also clear his thing inside with something like cotton stick for clearing ears.

    And why not to pour some sause or grease over his dick so it won't burn, and also put some hot sauce in inside too - something they can know from their mother also from kichten :)

    But this would need to have at leasr some basic tools for cooking, and it also depends how long you would like your story long to be and how much of it remain for cooking him whole ( some stories as with horseshoes are long enough and if this bother you, I would not minding being it long as long as there are enough different situations ).

    In case you would like to avoid pee at all while others ideas could be keep, girls can be inspired by stuffed turkey - you know, instead of thick hose with water, which has big pressure ( which is good ), but it could be hard to put into while still be able to tied it and leaving enough skin to make a baloon at all, there could be available ( or girls can bring it from her mother ) some tool for decorating cakes with narrow end:

    Then can stick it to the foreskin, while tying it tight at the end, push all the content inside or at least what it will allow them ( foreskin won't burst, it can make a lot of pain for him but I think this isn't something that would bother girls) - mixture can be something with more water to boil the glans, and would then make something like small sausage ( filling inside skin ), or something else as they would make something like a filled praline.

    I thought they can have some candies which when in mouth or other wet place will expand and/or be cracking, but while being it faster to render ( simply push it inside and then tie it ), I think it won't make that much of a volume and there is also question why would girls do it considering the cooking ( yes they can simply want to torture him, but then they have also special place between his sister's legs - like they could want to try another operation and make her "dick" grow to be as big as his brothers be tying it and pulling, but this isn't fitting into actual story)
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    >>45933
    >>45934
    One could brighten up that dinner with a side dish of young girl's nipples an labia.
    And don't you guys worry about that pee. If the guy is healthy that pee is sterile. Most of it will evaporate during cooking, leaving a slight salty taste, so less seasoning will be needed.
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    Personally I think the thing with the pee is too much. I was hoping all this time to see his sister chopping off his wood and balls on the chopping block. Nothing too complicated is needed, just him putting it on the block and her just using the axe.

    Cutting off all of his package will never be too repetitive, especially when there are more girls involved. When you have axes, knives and scissors it is simple and fantastic.

    And it would be much appreciated if they would also use his balls for the meal this time. Just sharing my view, it's my first comment on the forum.
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    >>45930
    I don't want to speak for Onix, but this scenario could be time-consuming for rendering? Probably would be OK for ending the story, but otherwise it could end it too soon. I don't know how pain resistance his sister isy but normaly too much heat could put you unconsciousness and if not, too much skin burns will soon or later kill you, and thus story can't continue.
    I.e. I tried to keep my ideas in limits of not only what these kids could do, even in this type reality, but also how it would work in reality. With the foreskin I based it on real life experiment with paper cup and flame - if you fill the cup with water, and apply heat to normally flammable paper, heat will be absorbed by water and thus paper turns black, but otherwise is not damaged. Thus, if you make skin thin enough ( with max inflating ) and fill it with liquid, some decent heat source would be painful, but won't damage this skin too much, and still can transfer heat to inner parts but not too much to i.e. burn all, so when they continue to work with his cock, it is still sensitive enough for story continue with boy being still very part of it and not just only a onlooker.
    It is not necessary to use this extreme method in the story, but taking account current situation, actors and their history, I do not have problem to advise a virtual solution to this virtual story, which I would normaly be vomiting in real life ( for example I'm not much into sex thing or eating meat, but some things you can study from books and then simply choose anything what would fit into story and it's length you would prefer to)
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    >>45936
    Well, there is still a chance that Onix decide to end it this way in this story or another.. But for me it is to fast. You know, in the extreme there could be story like this:
    1. frame - happy clothed boy
    2. unhappy naked boy
    3. shocked boy with his package off
    4. frame - dead boy with his head off

    It all depends how long story is wanted by Onix ( as for that it is the only thing that matters - as long as Onix is happy and have fun making it, it more likely produces some original never seen story we can enjoy ).

    He is not probably still not so used to being neutered and castrated, but also would not be shocked when this simply happened - he would be like: so what, tomorrow I'll be fine. On the contrary, if there would be some new very young boy coming, his shocked behavior could bring some new elements into the story. And for example if he is somewhat different than current boy, there can be even more original interactions not used in already posted stories - one od them could be girls having trouble to pull his foreskin because of his phimosis, but after some try and hard push, they'll triumph and when boy thinks nothing worse could happen, they can continue to mutilate him more - we just need to think of why).

    I agree that there can be a hundred stories of how he will loose his parts, but if it would be al time almost the same, it would not be as interesting as it could be.

    Also there are methods which could more complicated than others - i.e. need for create a new model when belly is opened could mean there will be less time to play with the already made models, and since using scissors could be interesting - why just cut his scrotum off with balls when you can push the balls to body, then use scissors to snip all the scrotum skin, and then push balls out and.. who knows..

    There is also one thing I personaly prefer in the story - tempo. Not so slow, in meaning you spend two pages describing just how a person is thinking at one moment, not so fast, which would simply means story will end now.

    If you just take the boy, cut his penis and/or balls, the story is practically over. Even when the girls would then process it in no matter what way, the boy is just only a onlooker. Basically not needed for story now. He can't even feel sadness because of loosing it, since he knows about the time-loop.

    On the other hand, if the story is "complicated", and no matter what girls do to his parts, since they are still attached to him, he ca feel it, and so he is still very important part of the story. So, the more they can do, but without too much damage it, it CAN make story more interesting.

    Thus, my idea, although it may looks not so tolerable, is one of way of the keeping boy in the story longer. Also, I later understood the pee isn't needed for it to works - it is just the simpliest to make, because it don't need more tools, and all is needed is to inflate and lightly colorize a small part of the already made model - of course it would work better if he has longer foreskin - and if he is not a masochist, I don't think he will get any knowing this would be a long day - that is until his cock will be tied very tight at base anyway, otherwise he would bleed out after it is cut away - but I think ANY filling under big pressure will at least little prevent his erection to be too big for girls to be unable tie another tight knot, which also don't need to render anything too much new ( blood ), but it can bring all girls into the action in all frames at once). Still it is not sure, if Onix will use it at all or how ;)

    Also, it may be just me, but stories when boy would voluntarily agree with his neuterization, which he probably would if it would be just that, is not that interesting, as if he doesn't agree with it - maybe he will let them to tie him somewhere near the small grill ( which will not damage the rest of body ), but when they change their mind, i.e. after the twins will recommend this secret special receipe should be improved, and when he realize they would proceed all while he can still feel it, he can start to protest, be afraid or maybe we can even see him cry… And after there is not much to do, they can use the pole he it tied to put him over bigger grill, put sauce on him and start cooking him.

    We can only speculate how many wonders will Onix put in the story, if his sister would also get taste of her own medicine from the twins, and so on..
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    >>45908
    If approns are necessary at all (to keep your clothes clean it is sufficient to take them off) then they for sure should at least be "see through".

    >>45918
    There's a lot of pain in this otherwise interesting script. Why should he suffer. A little pain might be unavoidable, but it isn't the purpose of him cooking. It's all about discovering and having fun – for him too. Or did I get something wrong, Onix?

    >>45935
    > If the guy is healthy that pee is sterile.
    Sorry, but that's an urban legend. Pee is a body's liquid waste. While the pathogens contained in fresh urine from healthy people rarely pose a health risk, consuming pee is not completely safe. Masses of germs in older urine, Hepatitis A [1], Schistosomiasis [2], Urinary tract infection [3] and other deseases can be transmitted from person to person.

    [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hepatitis_A
    [2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Schistosomiasis
    [3] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Urinary_tract_infection

    >>45936
    > Cutting off all of his package will never be too repetitive
    That's right – it can happen only once. ;p
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    You, Onix, has a "bad" influence on me. I was thinking all day about my slipped note of phimosis and how it would work. So I've read all your stories with these two and the twins, found some ideas which haven't been implemented yet, and tried to create story for them. No peeing this time, I promise. Also last long post for a while from me, since now I finally have my head empty :)

    If you don't like the ideas, feel free to discard them…


    Tldr; Milk cows :) See no.3


    There are three scenarios I was able to think off so far: Not needed to read these stories to avoid spoilers if Onix decides to be inspired by them! :)

    Note: these would probably fit into some new story, if found useful. Not the actual story.


    1) if twins would ever leave the camp ( why would they? I think they will like it here and if their mother want to leave, they just need to find a way to kill themselves and have another day), they can meet that little boy again, and since they would be full of new experiences which they maybe like to try again, they can play again doctors, but this time for real. I don't suggest they would castrate him or anything like it, but pulling his foreskin for first time in his life for girls to study it won't leave any too much visible damage for others to blame them, so they can get away with it even outside the camp.
    One problem could be her or his mother won't want them to meet again after they were catched by the adult. So maybe they would meet to his dismay alone in the school? But what if her mother believe their excuse it was his idea? He probably got spanked and still be next time given for girls to babysit by them instead since he "failed" being in charge :)

    Or, his mother could be with him in the camp also, unknowing to each other, and sister of the boy would find him as another "victim" for her amusement, bring him to the group, where he meet the twins - not so happy about it. They, on the contrary, won't mind :) I based this unwilling situation of your short story, where they bring another girl and cut her head off even she don't like it.

    Or it could be a younger brother of this older girl? It would open possibility if you someday run out of ideas, to implement unbirthing ( mentioned in this thread). I won't process it now, but if somebody would like it, axe would be definitely need to make the boy smaller ( look! No hands! And legs) and still her pussy would probably need some help to stretch out before tough work, but they probably won't succeed anyway ( if body won't fit, use (his) head!)


    But even if he isn't involved in the story, her brother would just be enough, even it would be just fine for him, at least to some extend, because we know his foreskin could pull itself back when he has erection, but maybe ( not sure ) not fully retractable, which can girls help him with ;)


    2) If there is another cooking story: girls may notice after tasting the last recipe, the head of his dick may want a care of its own ( different temperature or time ) - I'm just expanding the quote " there is only so many ways to cook a boy " here.

    So they may not only tie his cock at base, but also they will cut the glans off first, and for that foreskin needs to go - but they don't have to bother cutting it this time, and also his dick could go off right after it - and to fullfill one wish from Anonymous, it could be with axe while put on some log block ;) And if the second younger boy with tighter foreskin is present, well, no exception, head must go off so they can compare tastes, and thus his foreskin must be pulled at any cost, even if it might crack a little.. well, if he die then later somehow, he will be fine even if he doesn' t know that now and his mother won't know so girls won't be in trouble.


    3) this version is adapted to previous discussion about the milk farm:

    Big boy's sister can find some portable equipment for machine milking cows - you know: the vacuum compressor with four suckers, for better they could be independently open or closed when not used all four at once ( otherwise it won't make any vaccum). I assume there is electricity available if there is a wifi or mobile net present, but even if not, their cottage could have some photovoltaic power, or the equipment runs on battery - we don't need to see it rendered, just text note is enough if needed.

    Well, girls may want to try it on boy/s but boys won't like it first. They may then bet, if his sister would go first, they'll too. I don't know how much or if at all it would be painful for the girl, but since we have seen her withstand nails in her legs, she would probably endure and the boy/s will lost. Even when they can try to suck on her flat breasts, and when nothing happens, push trigger to full power, and/or maybe to put the suction tube to her clit. This could cover the one wish to be it a girl :) I would not myself use any drug, it would prolong story too much or another person ( adult ) would have to be present ( rendered, but too many persons in one scene could be bad to story). She may end with enlarged nipples and long clit, but if was able to pull out her nipples just to get access to tablet, this should be like walking in park.

    Boys then could be tied if needed for easier manipulation, but since you bring up the hygienic view, why not include it in the story :) After all, cows need to be clean before milked, who would like to have milk contaminated, so girls can go through it very thoroughly, and clean his/their dicks with some toothbrush, and of course under the foreskin behind the glands especially. Your foreskin can't be pulled? Well, it will now!

    To avoid milk being spilled out, cocks can be tied at the base before cleaning, and their scrotums too just to be sure. It hurts? Well, milk is too precious to risk anything. In the beginning of this thread there was an idea how to make balls bigger by spanking them. Well, his sister now knows ballbusting can make them bigger, so she can think - bigger balls mean more milk. What can they try? Spoon? Well, it doesn't do anything, so maybe some flat long wood to be on topic with the thread name? It is good boys or just her brother is tied, otherwise they/he could delay girls by putting their hands in the way. Cows need to be calm and not moving when milking, right?

    After cleaning, their cock will be put into suckers ( let's hope there will be smaller versions, so it would fit tightly and their foreskins will remain pulled back), started with full power and strings released from genitals.

    Her brother could cum probably very fast, as we saw in first cooking story, but he won't last forever. Any younger boy, if present at all, will not cum even if he can feel orgasm. The story can ends here with nobody loosing anything.. but if it is too soft, girls seeing the result, either way won't be satisfied, and may decide if boys don't want to give them their milk, they'll get it anyway. Not knowing balls aren't bottomless/they can't produce anything till certain age, why not squeeze it out? Just find some vice and start to tightening it. But I think boys will still not "braverly" give them any(more) and it ends by girls crushing their balls to flat (correct me, but I think this hasn't been also used in your story yet - that is, if you weren't avoiding it in purpose, but it is hard to figure your comfort zone, if it exists, after reading the last cbt story :D )
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    >>45950
    About the pain: maybe I'm the one who got it wrong, but so far reading Onix's stories I've got idea that the boy is the one who usually suffer while his sister can withstand almost any pain like a boss, and while she doesn't primarily want him to suffer ( well, maybe except when she wants to take revenge on him ), the things she does to him ARE painful ( just guessing without it there would be less expressions and more boring story?? ), and she doesn't seem to care that much about it like the time she cut his cock out of nowhere, and be like: all it matters is I have fun, and sometimes she even thinks he may like it too.

    Even though cooking is the main purpose now, she can do these extra things just because she thinks ( or would be pushed into it with evil twins telling her it would be more fun or better recipe ) it would be for good - she even maybe offer him the result being the good sister she "is".

    Also, I didn't invent to cut his cock here ;) and even if heating his foreskin while filled and his cock expaned by tying, all this before another tying, cuting and then roasting the remaining cock could be seen as prolonging his suffering, she can just think it is necessary for the better recipe like she continue to torture him in CBT story. These things can be and are painful, even though I think final cuting of his foreskin off will be with smallest pain of all of them in this story - really, he is going to be probably cooked whole, and nobody until now brings up the question if he will be dead or still alive at the time?)

    Fact is his cock was already cooked after being cut in early story, and cooking it while attached (as not so repetitive and more original and still realistic idea IMHO) was offered by Onix, and grilling his balls still attached was used by me simply copying it from another idea earlier in this thread, only to accomplish balloning, and since it could be omitted, there is of course room to make it in another way, so I'm still looking forward to whatever final result is, even if isn't anything near my original idea ;)
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    >>45950
    I've been thinking again about what you wrote, especially about him having fun, and you are absolutely right.

    Even if I based my ideas on existing stories, i.e. how much chopping in one story and how long it could it take is too much? Based on the first story and the last, there is probably no limit, BUT in the first story it was her idea and he was doing it to her, even she maybe didn't think properly every aspect of it in the end. In last story he was at least willing to try.

    But I can imagine, even if he isn't at first thrilled about the idea, after she may go with "pretty please!?", he may give her cautious permission. Maybe he is courious too if it is good - after all, he ATE it in the end, and if promised it could be even better ( even it may be not ), why not - possibility from boy who willingly let her painfully castrate him. Or he may be like: Oh, another day, let's get over it soon – little knowing the "soon" may take a litle longer than last time.

    On the contrary, if there is for example a new unknowing boy, seeing all this, he will be definitelly "are you nuts!?!" to her brother. ( Well, he is, at least in this story he can keep them :) ). In this case story would probably overally not go with unnecessary torture, as girl/s just go after their goal - being it cooking, milking, etc. - together with having fun and being currious ( I'm not saying boys are having the same amount of fun as girls in this case ). But they probably do it very causually, as she did when simply snip his sock.

    That doesn't mean it has to be fast all the time - i.e. pulling forskin - it is not they want to torture him, but if the thing of their interest lays inside, not wanting to simply cut if off ( again and again and…), it could be a challenging obstacle ( they will have to try more, use their strength this time, maybe even need to cooperate with twins - and of course it isn't painless, but not as bad as loosing all hands?).

    Even in that 2nd story she took her time to prepare it properly ( stimulating, tying it ), because she believed it will help the receipe. By the chance boy liked it then, in the CBT story, almost the same situation, not so much. But he tried to endure it, maybe just for her to having fun, since I think he must already know it won't work as she thought it would be. There can be hitches along the way, which for us may look as prolonging his/their suffering, but it is just a challenge for the girls in the story, which they try to find an original sollution to overcome..


    Still, thank you for pointing that out. That is, more fun for me - I had some ideas, and people found some possible problems in them, so I need to go and do some research and find sollution to it. As long as it helps/entertains others, and nobody is hurt ( I mean in real world ;) ), please feel free to make a fool of me anytime :)

    Maybe I'm thinking too much about it? :D
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    >>45953
    >About the pain: maybe I'm the one who got it wrong, but so far reading Onix's stories I've got idea that the boy is the one who usually suffer while his sister can withstand almost any pain like a boss, and while she doesn't primarily want him to suffer ( well, maybe except when she wants to take revenge on him ), the things she does to him ARE painful ( just guessing without it there would be less expressions and more boring story?? ), and she doesn't seem to care that much about it like the time she cut his cock out of nowhere, and be like: all it matters is I have fun, and sometimes she even thinks he may like it too.


    Well they both can take more or less same amount of pain but usually they don't focus on pain as main thing. And his sister is just more willing to endure it for fun.
    In the chopping story she pretty much just wanted to play with her brother who was busy while she was bored and also to die in the more interesting way than just hanging herself.
    When she cooked his penis it was somewhat a funny prank and revenge for the fact that he fed her her own meat. But he was also pretty interested to see how his penis tastes :)


    The logic behind all this is that he Bullied his sister when she was a bit younger and she was crying a lot. But now when she got older she found out that she actually liked that, especially his attention :)
    While her brother found out that what he did was wrong because he loves his sister.
    But as the story is progressing he already knows that she likes that

    >>45951

    >You, Onix, has a "bad" influence on me. I was thinking all day about my slipped note of phimosis and how it would work. So I've read all your stories with these two and the twins, found some ideas which haven't been implemented yet, and tried to create story for them. No peeing this time, I promise. Also last long post for a while from me, since now I finally have my head empty :)


    The things you describe are more likely to happen with other younger boy of their own age who is way more masochistic and loves his little dick being tortured
    as in the situation with this boy he has very ambiguous reaction where just like his sister he sort of likes all that stuff, but reacts rather normally.

    It is not told in any story yet but those twin girls actually like sensation of pain quite a lot but they did not experience anything serious fo far. Their mother is also very extreme masochist who is single mom, drinks a lot and who is into bad guys who treat her badly which is her 2 daughters tuned out with pretty strange understanding of relationships as well and things are not going very well for her.
    But she also loves her daughters and never even spanked them regardless of how they misbehave and cause her problems.
    All of them have ridiculous level of pain tolerance which can surprise anyone.

    Those brother and sister characters are relatively normal. Just that they got a chance to do things that you would not be able to do normally disregarding any safety issues :) and things escalated into pretty extreme level but it was intended that they started with pretty mild stuff where that hanging story was supposed to be the first form all existing so far :)
    But there is is still no story on how they found out that they do not die :)

    At this time where she offered her brother to those 2 girls she is also doing that to show them that in this place you are going to be fine :)
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    Onix, I have a humble question:

    Can I send you a complete "short" soft* story based on your characters via Pixiv, please?

    *) No added violence nor pain, just pure fun

    It is a prank comedy story type.

    If you would like it to an extend you find it worthy to base a rendered story on it, you can keep it till the right time come, and of course I won't post it anywhere ( there are some hopefully interesting surprises that would been otherwise spoiled if others can read it now). Hope you'll have fun reading it ( I have, writing it :) )

    In terms of frame count it could be a little longer than your latest stories, but it is also dynamic. I tried have it to be as compact as possible ( finished today, so it should be up to date with all latest stories )
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    >>45961
    Thank you for explaining it to me. The more you know :)

    Yes, I didn't mean that she does these things to him because wants him to suffer, but whatever reason it is, he may simply suffer in the end..

    All reasons you stated, whatever being it want to play with him more, just to want to know "what does it do", tasting it.. all are very valid for curious little girl (I remember watching very long time ago TV - there was competition of home made videos, and one of them was very little girl with her probably the same aged brother playing naked in sand (something like that won't probably pass today), while girl trying constantly grab and pull his penis, while boy didn't like it - she for sure also didn't want him to suffer :) and may even love him - but I think it wasn't painful for him, he just keep hiting her hands with some shovel-toy )

    Actually, I was somehow able to put that love between them into story while also being mad (you know, ending doing good things for wrong reasons :) - yes, exactly like that). Glad seeing I wasn't completely out of the picture..


    Hearing (reading) that about the twins, should we be worrying about her brother? You know, being young girls who like pain, maybe they don't realize not everyone does (it seems like that when they stuffed that dildo in the boy) - let's hope his sister can protect him :)
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    >>45972
    >Can I send you a complete "short" soft* story based on your characters via Pixiv, please?

    Maybe it can be done, as stories without violence and guro are like 5 times easier to do.
    So send it to me and we will see.


    >>45973
    >Hearing (reading) that about the twins, should we be worrying about her brother? You know, being young girls who like pain, maybe they don't realize not everyone does (it seems like that when they stuffed that dildo in the boy) - let's hope his sister can protect him :)

    Yes that's a problem for their mom too, because it is hard to find someone willing to be their babysitter :)
    Sometimes they may think that other people are enjoying pain too. So in this story the boy will not get away as easy as with his sister who just sliced off his dick.
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    >>45974
    Story sent :)

    Please don't be scary of the piles of text - 90% of it just desribes how scene looks, not what is happening (in terms only 10% of it will affect length of the story/number of frames). I simply had to be sure we are on the same level :) because some of the scenes are more about expressions than action itself.

    There are two stories, but I advise to make (if good) only the second one (longest text). I'm not animator, but I do understand a little CGI, so I write it in way you don't have prepare anything new (characters, new enviroment, etc.) and practically start to render now ;)

    Enjoy.
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    I'm interested about the fact that the sister said they agreed to dress "appropriately", and the fact that he seems rather reluctant to agree.

    I'd suggest in order to agree to it, he may demand them wearing and doing stuff that make it worth the bother for him.

    We've seen he's interested in sex, but unwilling to do it to his little sister.

    He may demand they service him sexually before they get to enjoy his cock. And probably he makes them wear something a bit humiliating.
    Another idea could be to make them wear something they cannot take off without causing damage (butt plug with hooks, or something like that ?). This could be a setup for a followup story where he gets to complete their outfit in a similar spirit as the plow story, transforming them into an animal or an object.

    Actually that made me think, I'd love to see a forniphilia arc at some point, especially now that we've introduced more characters it makes it easier to have fun with.
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    >>45976
    Well if you read previous story the appropriate dress for this recipe is naked apron as described in the recipe :) Or something sexy to make his dick bigger.
    In this story it would be not very appropriate for him to make demands but they have to make his dic as big as before to be allowed to cook it :) as this is what she promised him to make him agree


    I don't know if forniphilia woud work for them as they are not going to stay still for very long :) they are not very obedient
    But transforming them into ponies was in my plans.

    >>45975
    I see it that's quite some text to read
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    >>45977
    I mean, he could argue that the toys will excite him even more and make him even bigger. And that soaking his dick with their juices will make it taste better. That would be a way for him to compel them. As for his sister, as she's asking him, he would seem to be in a position to make demands.

    For the forniphilia idea, I wasn't thinking so much about them taking the pose and sticking with it. I was more picturing them being bound or even further transformed in a way that turns them into furniture.

    If for example they were to be turned into lamps, I could see him forcing a powerful lamp inside a balloon into their womb, then inflating the balloon (and their womb) until they look very pregnant, then tying their legs and arms together and nailing them to the wall in a symmetrical fashion, for example. Probably also gagging them or cutting their vocal cords so they don't scream.

    If they were to turn them into table legs, they could tie them, or if they want something more permanent looking, making crude surgery to render the articulations immobile. This kind of stuff.

    If you want to go even more radical, I could imagine scenarii where the transformation implies their death but also preserves their body (or part of it) so they can use the furniture too.

    Anyway, i think you see where I'm going, and it's enough of a wall of text already.
    I'm excited to see where you go with these new characters.
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    I like this line you seem to be going towards of them having to do ever more daring stuff to reach the mark of making him twice as large.

    I wonder how far you'll make them go.

    I also love that this suggests he gets much more easily excited by his sister than by 2 beautiful, but less familiar girls. I wonder if this implies that when he strangles her and started to fuck her under the pretense of "I'm curious and she's out so she won't mind", it was really that he's fantasizing about fucking his sis and doesn't want to admit his incestuous kink yet.
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    This is a guro site he should imagine his sister or any of them u pain like being cut open to getting limb cut off or getting set on fire etc
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    So he is getting more aroused how much more foreplay there should be?
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    >>46019
    That might be a bit too distracting, but since they are already freely using both brother and sister, they could attempt to get him even harder by making him fuck her a bit… but then they’d also have no way to tell how big he’s getting, wouldn’t they… i’ll leave it in your more than capable hands to decide how much more foreplay they’ll do :P
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    >>46019
    I'd say don't be afraid of foreplay. It's sexy and fun to watch, so definitely not boring, and it helps you set the story and narrate who the characters are.
    It's like in written stories. You could probably summarize most good stories in /lit/ in about 1/10 their actual length, but what makes them interesting is all the fluff and details, the characters, etc. Not just the raw factual action.
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    >>46022
    i couldn't agree more! i wouldn't mind if this story keeps going for a good, long while XD
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    I think they should kill/hurt his sister or (and?) one of the twins themselves in order to get him more excited. Or maybe they get so cought up in it they kill all the girls, forgetting that this way nobody is left to get the reward, lol :-)
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    I mean, they can always get the prize the next day XD.
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    >>46024
    That i don’t really agree with, the focus should remain on him being cooked and not the girls snuffing each other… they could do so afterwards or in another chapter, but I wouldn’t want to miss the rare opportunity to see something like this with a boy for a change :P
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    >>46024
    That would turn all story upside down and ruin all plans :)

    Although speaking about dying they could be dying more often I just don't see a good way of how that could be shown. and also killing someone is not good idea because then you will be spending remaining day alone unless you somehow off yourself too. Which is why they are not very willing to kill each other but pretty willing to die :)
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    I like the way these girls think. Hope they decide to have meatballs with their tube steak.
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    >>46027
    They can find fun ways to kill themselves together. Does the village have a lake or a river? There are lots of ways to drown. Jump off a tall height, etc.
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    >>46029
    Of course it has river and other stuff.
    Probably even including alligators and piranhas :)

    But I already did jumping, shooting, hanging, decapitation.
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    >>46030
    How about drowning or live burial?
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    >>46031
    drowning may happen, probably not even intentionally as they just drown while trying to swim and this may be the way how they discover that they do not die :)
    although not sure how that is going to look like or if it will be interesting to look at if after some splashing they just disappear.
    Same about burial, it sort of looks boring and also almost impossible to explain why it happens, unless maybe they are playing on the beach and someone get buried in the sand.
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    >>46032
    Can you have the brother torch his little sister?
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    >>45996
    Oh, how disappointing: just standard aprons without any transparency! The story will never be as arousing as it was before this joyful anticipation got destroyed. ;D

    >>46019
    According to the opinions of a lot of women foreplays are mostly to short. Therefore I vote for some extension, including a return of the favor to the twins.
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    >>46035
    well you can anticipate further because there is going to be next episode where his sister will get cooked too :)
    But since you was very detailed in your requited I did not give it that much attention:)

    >>46035
    >According to the opinions of a lot of women foreplays are mostly to short. Therefore I vote for some extension, including a return of the favor to the twins.

    At this time he is not going to do anything for those girls
    because that is supposed to happen next time.
    but actually I suddenly noticed that it is not as easy as expected
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    >>46042
    >But since you was very detailed in your requited I did not give it that much attention:)
    Did you confuse me with "Guest", whos posts are really epic, or did there a little "not" got lost in this sentence?
    Well, why should a simple idea be bloated with unnecessary words? I think the less details are provided the more freedom the artist has. This comes especially into play when something like
    >but actually I suddenly noticed that it is not as easy as expected
    happens. But if it helps to get attention I will add some very detailed "Lorem ipsus"-text [1] into my next request. :p

    [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lorem_ipsum

    >you can anticipate further because […] his sister will get cooked too

    I like spitroasting. And not to forget; "Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisici elit, …" ;)


    And now for something completely different.
    Have you noticed that spam in >>45995? Your "Gurovision extreme magic show" is offered on that "Download all for free, but only as a premium user"-site.
    hxxps://forosdz.org/color-comix/7217-el-gran-secreto-comics-pictures-stories-vol-78.html
    I didn't check further, so I don't know if it is only a teaser for a fake download or if one can really get the images. Among a lot of others they also offer works of Drabok and Waldo.
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    Hey artist, i would love to see one art i saw long ago, recreated of possibly, it was 6 or 8 pages long, about a teacher cut in half and showing how sex and how to masturbate to students, plus some where teaching and had a boy to. Possible?
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    >>46091
    Oh, nice to see you again LOL
    If this was already created them what is the purpose of redoing it again?
    I sort of remember seeing those series but don't know where to find them anymore

    But either way I do have half made story about a woman cut in half where she mastubates. Just not sure when i will get to finish it

    >>46082
    Ah those sites are hosting lots of stuff from various artists, although I don't mind if mine is reposted anywhere But it is interesting to know somebody found the interesting enough to be worthy of reposting LOL so I like to know where my stuff ends up.
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    Dear Onix, where can I find (buy) all your works?
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    >>46092
    Will i would love to find it but lost it to. If you could that would be great, i do remember the work you did about the big saw. Still love it
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    >>46095
    Lolicit is a great place to find Onix's work.
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    >>46092
    > […] somebody found the interesting enough to be worthy of reposting […]
    It's not just reposting. They harvest image boards, mix up the collections, credit the works to other authors and try to make money with it. That's piracy - of course unless you are "El Gran Secreto", to whom they also credit your "Cheerleader club" ( >>26831 )
    hxxps://forosdz.org/color-comix/7188-el-gran-secreto-comics-pictures-stories-vol-49.html

    In your index thread you asked to mention it if someone finds your stuff uploaded somewhere on internet and that reposting is OK. But would you really like a piracy site to be promoted?

    BTW, do you plan to update that index?
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    >>46095
    I am currently uploading all my stuff on my atomicloli account.
    But there is quite a lot of unfinished stuff which I do not officially post
    I do not sell my stuff but if someone is willing to donate some money I have buymeacoffe account https://www.buymeacoffee.com/onix


    >>46136
    Yeah I know those guys. They collect works from lots of artists and make money on that.
    I am not even sure if this is good or bad as they sort of act as internet archive of some sort.

    And yes it will be time to update that index thread too totally forgot about it
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    Any plans on when you’ll be able to continue?
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    >>46150
    I am not at home at home for some time but I think I may continue next week when I get back
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    >>46152
    Alright, I’m looking forward to it whenever you can make more :D
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    >>45998

    Just wondering: is dForce working now?* If so, does that omited stripping scene contain something interesting (like facial expressions) or it is just plain stripping?

    Being it the first option, and if it just needs simulation+rendering (i.e. being it already posed), maybe you could, please, finish it too to have story complete?

    *) Last year it was problem with latest NVidia drivers / OpenCL (i.e.: needed downgrade to 517.40 on some systems; some other (temporary) solution was "re-install DForce Companion Add on") but that was supposedly fixed in 526.98; not sure what was it this year :(
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    >>46171
    No there is nothing special just girls holding some clothes in their hands to indicate that they took them off.

    I don't know why dForce is not working now because that bug was really old and everything was fine with my old gpu
    It will need some research on what is going on.
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    >>46172
    Oh, ok. In that case I think it can be safely omited (in my eyes), since there is no added value to the story… :) thanks for info.
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    >>46172
    add dForce: not sure if it helps, and it may be as simply as stupid (but some older thread about the dForce suggested it):

    When you changed GPU, did you select it on Advanced card under OpenCL device?

    That is, I tried to select just my CPU (don't have NVidia card, just AMD Radeon), and while it took 4 minutes (while I lowered Subframes to 4 and FPS to 1 - you know, just 6-core CPU with 8 GB of RAM), it really did something with the dress (adjust it to some pose).

    I also need to set Gravity to 0.1 from 1.0 (otherwise the dress simply dissolve to the ground like fresh paint)..
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    >>46179
    After I rebooted my PC it sort of started to work for no reason maybe windows got updated? But I messed up lots of settings while trying.
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    >>46189
    I’m really looking forward to it! Thanks for the update :)
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    Oh yeah, now we’re talking! Is this still part of the foreplay and they’re just teasing him or are they already getting down to business? Both would be good :P

    >>46198 i’m not entirely sure wether to pity or envy him for being in such a situation. As far as the story until now goes he’s probably still thinking he’ll get out with just losing his dick once again, right? It’ll be nice to see when it dawns on him that they’re not stopping there ^^

    Has it been decided how they’re going to cook him yet?
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    >>46208
    they still not decided to cook him just his dick for start
    But as you see since she asked if he want her to cut off just the tip or whole dick and he said no
    they probably should leave it attached if he wants it that way :)
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    Love how dominant they are over him! Can't wait to see what these girls do to him.
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    >>46209
    I hope they also clean it properly this time before cooking it ;)
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    >>46197

    I wonder of what his sister is so suprised?

    Is she afraid she is loosing control over the whole event, or just unhappy they stopped fingering her? :)
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    >>46216
    Yes she is surprised about losing control :) she didn't expect those girls to get into the role so quickly and her brother did not expect that they will even dare to cut off his dick thinking that he will just get to play with 2 cute girls.
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    >>46218
    Hopefully she regains control. At least she's the chef with the recipe.

    After this episode is finished, I'd like to see for the next story the twins to be processed by brother and sister on the first hand and then her prepared by her brother as dessert. To underscore this request, I'd like to add a "Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet."
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    >>46226
    I don't think he has reason to cook his sister.. :/ Yes, she brings those twins, but the highest of her guilt is just underestimating them. And he already cook and taste her already ;)

    I don't know what the twins are going to do to him, but if it is over the line for him, maybe they would deserve to be punished.

    But I don't know if he can think of something that would be a punishment for them, and not just pleasure :)

    Maybe it could be his sister, who would punish them really for good, as apology to her brother.. and make that a surprise for him..
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    >>46226
    Well she will be cooked next time but not by her brother ;)
    and as for those twins even if they would not mind getting cooked at all but because they are so "evil" they always make someone else to suffer :)

    >>46227
    Yes it is not going to be easy to punish them as punishment may backfire.
    maybe the punishment would be to make them kill everyone and just them stay alive ;)
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    >>46231
    So you tell me that the twins are always spared because of their "(d)evilishness"? That would be bad news. Just consider how pleased your audience would be (at least those guys from >>46226 and >46227 ;] ) if the twins "surprisingly" would get in trouble – perhaps because they got tricked into something to "backfire" on each other.

    Hehe, I'm good when I'm good, but I'm better when I'm bad.
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    >>46256
    While I don't mind seeing them being punished*, I don't need that see it that much especially in current story ;) I think Onix has already many plans as he hinted in this thread, and pushing too many ideas into one story could be delaying possible another future stories ;)

    *) (but that would really need something special, because if brother thinks by his other "brain" for their punishment, I'm worried they would end enjoying it while he would be the one who get punished :D I do not know them that much, but this scenario has a very high probability)

    When they are involved, I'm just fine when they are just "taking care" of somebody else :D Maybe there would be some story, when it is going to fit them being punished, while not enjoying it that much :) I just think it is more fun when they are in charge ;)

    P.S.: I think Onix knows my taste well enough now, he knows when I would be really pleased LOL (and I'm talking about almost nothing in this thread ;) )
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    >>46256
    It is not a rule that they get spared and they do get in trouble sometimes
    But the reason why it happens is because it usually backfires for other people :)
    (Although nothing of that did happen so far as it is just in the future plans.)
    I also had a plan for the future story where they work as meatgirls and are used for demonstration.
    in that story they just get cooked without any story twists.

    I will not be at home for few days again so I will continue with the story later when I get back
    but I will not be spending that much time at home during summer
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    >>46260

    I'm thinking in long terms. That's the reason why I'm talking about episodes. Of course it's not easy to make serious changes to the script of an already running story – unless you are writing a soap opera where even sudden twists are planned. :)

    The little village allows to start over as many times as you want. So it isn't necessary to stuff everything in one episode. Having this said I'd like to express my hope to see some of my favorites ( >>46082 , >>46226 , >>46256 ) and to emphasize it I cite this time Jonathan from Hotel Transylvania with his impression of Dracula: "Bleh, bleh-bleh!"


    P.S. Regarding changes to the script I'm just wondering: >>45929 vs. >>46206 ;)=)
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    Oh, I understand now (I was just not sure, what is counted as a next episode :) if it need the restart or not, because there could be simply another story, where they got punished, while brother is still dead, etc. And it can be in fact considered as one episode, because it just continues from the current story - so I was maybe thinking these Twins maybe got punished in whole different settings - there is probably still farm/cow option in play, but I'm of course fine with every option)

    Regarding the changes, as I understand this, it is just a consequence of idea cook it while attached, which was set even before the Twins appeared, so while we can probably suggest anything, some ideas will be discarded due being too hard to do/render, others may not be fitting into current story or being suggested too late, so we then just hope they will included in some later stories.
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    >>46324

    You joined this thread only a short while ago. Just to be sure: You are aware that they live in a kind of Groundhog-Day-Setting? Or in other words: You didn't look only at the nice pictures, but also at the text inbetween, especially >>44581 , >>44593 , >>44755 , >>44917 and >>44952 ? I'm not trying to offend you, I want to make sure we have the same level of knowledge. :))

    Long story short: We don't have to worry about discarded ideas or the death of characters. They all are able to return in the next episode/story – the protagonists for sure, the ideas if they please the author.
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    >>46328
    No offence taken :)

    I'm happy when others are willing to spent time to explain me what they think I'm wrong about (even if I'm not), as I'm very aware of my very poor ability to explain my thoughts to others ;)

    So.. :) Even if I post my ideas (or whatever we will call that) here only for a short time, I've noticed Onix works a few months ago, and basically read all there was from him :)

    This thread specifically several times to get the whole story, and to collect ideas which weren't realized yet (though I don't remember every word there is, the basic idea of timeloop I do)

    So, no :) I'm not worried about the death of characters :)

    I'm just worried if the current story ends, some ideas might have less chance to be realized in others, or I'm not sure if there would be reason to realize it, that is all ;)

    Exactly as you said: "ideas will, if they please the author" :)

    I'm just learning more about the 3D process of creating for these stories, and if only this would be the only critera :(

    Some ideas looks nice and easy, but when trying to realize them, well..

    Add to that there should be some story around that idea (solid reason why it is happening), and well..

    And even if these all things are fulfiled, THE Onix is only a human (no offence to him) and probably is not able to create thousands of visual stories in his whole life :)
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    >>46323
    Not sure what is that emphasizing idea of writing some crap in the comment as Normally you do it my expressing more interest in something you want. and thinking about details how that will fit in the story

    In the next cooking story those girls probably will get to cook sister in some way

    but eventually they also will get cooked as demonstration in the class although in that situation story plot will be very simple and you will get to decide how those girls have to be prepared :)

    >>P.S. Regarding changes to the script I'm just wondering: >>45929 vs. >>46206 (You) ;)=)


    I think I allergy gave enough hints that he will not get away so easily as the first time :)
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    What is atomicloli?
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    >>46352
    >>> In the next cooking story those girls probably will get to cook sister in some way


    While it can be a separate story, it could be also just continuation of the current story? (it depends on others: would you like to see another cooking right away or rather something different?)

    This way, it would push some other story further to be created, but on the other hand we can save some frames by skiping the "foreplay", because there is already scenario set :)

    After they cook the brother all together, Twins may decide it is so much fun, so why cook just only one body, when there is also his sister?

    She can be probably a little hesitant not wanting to be cooked, just today :) (you know "I don't have time for this, I already have another plans for today, can you cook me some other day?" LOL)

    But Twins may "convince" her, while she is already naked, by pining her laying on the ground and give her "proper" massage to stimulate her body. You know, so she is cooking in her own gravy ;)

    While one Twin can stimulate her nipples, other may finger her pussy/clit and using her own juices as the lotion on her skin for "not to be burned" :)
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    >>46368
    Unfortunately atomicloli does not exist anymore but I found another host cutefunny.art where I will put my files.
    One problem is that I can't even post links on pixiv.

    >>46370
    it is going to be "another day"
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    I've noticed recently that some commenters seem to be very pushy about how they would like the story to go and what Onix should do.

    While it's nice to provide ideas and suggestion that might catch his fancy, and while contributing ideas shows interest, let's not forget that at the end of the day, it's Onix's art, that he provides for free and for fun.
    Being too pushy could even discourage him of continuing if he starts feeling pressured doing stories he doesn't enjoy as much.

    So let's not overdo it.
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    >>46352

    That "crap" was meant as variety to "lorem ipsum" which was meant as an "additive of details" to get a little more attention. For more details and to refresh your memory see >>46082 and >>46226 . ;)
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    It took me a while to realize that this one belongs earlier in the story (the numbers help :P)

    >>46384
    This is really, really hot (pun intended)! If the grill gets hotter, it might be fun for one of the girls to suddenly push his dick down onto the metal to leave some burn marks…

    >>46388
    Glad she oils up every part nicely so far, i hope they keep it going for when he gets cooked entirely, if they have enough oil for it :)
    Though like this i doubt his balls would really be getting much heat right now, so you may want to do something about that sometime :P

    Thanks so much for making this story, just your post today really made my day ^^
    I’m really excited to see what will happen next :)
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    >>46399
    Looks like you guessed what is going to happen next with his dick as i already have that picture made :)
    Oiling him all is possible althoug not uet sure if that should be done when he is still free or on the spit :)
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    >>46403
    Oh yes! This does put a smile on my face :)

    Oiling his entire body should probably wait until he’s on the spit, wouldn’t really make sense to do so right now since they’re still only cooking his dick
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    Now, i know they regenerate or something, but a part of me always wonders if there is a limit to their regeneration of their genitals before they become sterile or damaged beyond use.
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    >>46409
    They do not regenerate but rather "respawn" after some time when they die, remembering what happened before as a dream. So they have to die to get fixed or otherwise they will stay damaged and annoyed with pain.

    In some ways it all depends on their knowledge as if someone is unaware about getting resurrected they behave as if death is permanent but if they die few times and notice that it is not permanent they do not fear of dying anymore.

    I think this place actually could be a purgatory/hell in another world. where you get when you die or when you are sleeping and dreaming. but it is not fully known how it works :)
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    >>46352
    > […] he will not get away so easily as the first time […]
    Ahh, now I see. But you have to admit that the question was understandable at least before the next images were posted. :)

    >>44512
    >>44513
    I'd like to pick up icy's question about labels again. I also noticed these gaps and understand your answer. But there is not only skipping one number or to the following multiple of ten. Sometimes there are irregular jumps. How to distinguish between intentional and accidental gaps?

    @all fans
    Perhaps it would be a nice idea to start a new sience sector, dedicated to the exploration of this universe - something similar to Donaldism for the Duck family. With >>44581 , >>44593 , >>44755 , >>44917 , >>44952 , >>46027 , >>46032 and now >>46410 we have some basic information to start with. Any ideas for a nice name for this branch of sience? :D
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    >>46439
    When making labels I usually skip one number because sometimes pictures need to be reordered sometimes some of then get skipped entirely because they are pretty much the same thing just with some adjustments.
    and when i start entirely new scene I often start from zero

    Unfortunately sometimes i forget to save pictures and then they don't get posted until I notice.


    >Perhaps it would be a nice idea to start a new science sector, dedicated to the exploration of this universe


    Actually I am not fully aware about how all that stuff works myself and i deliberately do not make it fully clear in the story :)
    things that I said before are not necessarily true it is rather my own guess.
    so if there are good explanations how that works it will be interesting to hear LOL
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    when are new pictures coming?
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    >>46779
    I have them almost ready but I am not spending much time at home to finish it
    BUt maybe next week I will managed to post at lest what i already have
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    Hi Onix, where I can view your old stories I remember one that are whit costumes like a doctor
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    Didn't Onix have a work where Halloween was and 2 girls cut off the boy's cock? I can't find this work anymore, one girl had green hair and the other black one with a red bow
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    >>46793
    Those series aged out of the old gurochan pretty must right before gurochan died itself.
    I will put them on the cloud later just one problem that they are sort of ended in the strange moment :)
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    Here, enjoy the update :)

    As usual the boy had to do all the work himself because girls are lazy LOL
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    >>46827
    this picture alone made it worth to get out of bed today! i love it! :D

    >>46833
    i love how they're the ones who want to cook and eat him but they're still too lazy to do it themselves! probably also fits nicely with the attention spans of actual kids

    >>46837
    "uh, so hot", you said it my man! XD (probably not what he meant, but true nonetheless)

    >>46838
    "not that much anymore" seems like it would probably be the understatement of the year… either onix is fortunate enough to never have touched a hot stove or something or he's probably just super man considering how he downplays pain on every turn :P
    i remember just touching hot metal for a split second is enough to hurt for a looong time, even if you hold it under cold water afterwards, so it's hard to imagine how much it would hurt to have continuous skin contact like that for a few minutes!

    >>46842
    looking really good! i can't wait for them to taste it :)

    >>46845
    thanks so much for the update! this just keeps getting better and better! i'm very much looking forward to the next parts ^^
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    >>46848
    >i remember just touching hot metal for a split second is enough to hurt for a looong time, even if you hold it under cold water afterwards, so it's hard to imagine how much it would hurt to have continuous skin contact like that for a few minutes!

    well his dick is being tied for some time and got pretty numb already :)
    Otherwise he woud be screaming of pain.

    Also this is preparation for the next part where he gets spitroasted and that is going to be more serious than cooking a dick :) we don't want to scare him too much ;)


    Now I think how he should present his cooked dick to them like probably on the plate or sitting on the table ?
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    Sitting on the table. And the best way for the sisters to share his best piece is to eat kissing each other
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    Don't forget the balls!
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    >>46862
    At this time his balls did not get cooked but yeah you are right almost forgot that :)
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    >>46862

    Well, considering how close they are - https://boards.guro.cx/3dcg/res/43846.html#q46829 - they might be already preheated at least ;) And if he got cooked whole, I think his balls got some attention too, even if not exactly targeted on them..
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    >>46823
    >I will put them on the cloud later […]
    Please, not just somewhere on the cloud. It'll take a lot of efforts to find them. Wouldn't Gurochan be a nice place? ;)=)

    >>46841
    >Also turn it over!
    Does she expect him to do a handstand? Girls are crazy somtimes. Well, may be not only sometimes … :D
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    >>46994
    I don't think I could even upload thousands of pictures on gurochan one by one.

    >>46994
    >Does she expect him to do a handstand? Girls are crazy somtimes. Well, may be not only sometimes … :D

    I think he did it without handstand :) as what those girls said is not so much to make him do it but rather to explain what is happening in the picture;)
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    we are all happy about your great work onix . I'd like to know if they'd ever put out a game about it too?
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    >>47001
    I do not fully understand whats do you mean by by "they"
    as you expect some story about the game or those series to be turned into game?
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    yes, that you can go certain paths in the game, which can lead to consequences. every decision has different outcomes, for better or for worse
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    >>47003
    Icy had that same suggestion and even made an example.
    It could be done but there are not much decision to make besides choosing which episode you select

    maybe something more could be added to make story gos in different way but this probably can only be done on other episodes.

    and if you are making this kind of request give some example of how if could be done



    also I was planning another game on the different kind of story where you have to help your slutty sister to get rid of her baby.
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    >>47002

    As I haven't been able to found that Icy's idea, and even now still I'm not sure how this "game" idea was meant, but considering options:


    1. if it would be game for us, where we can watch story in interactive way, it would be too extensive to render, because if there is possibility (since we are on guro server) they would be somehow hurt, you would then need to render all next elections twice, and every new election would double that again (i.e. when there is better option to not loose leg and worse option to loose it, in next part of the game, you would need to render it both. And if there is an arm at stake next, for third junction you'll have to render 4 combinations.. then 8.. etc.)

    It would be probably better to let audience to vote, which obstacle should be used next as the worse option and the better option (which in the best scenario would just means nothing bad happens to the participant).

    So the story would became (as I understood it first time):


    2. it would be just game they put together, because they are bored. Maybe some time later in the future, when they are fully aware of this place, and have really nothing else to do :)

    Either it could be some fun Brother would built for his Sister, or even better, something that Sister built for her Brother as in a way showing interest in him (in a brother-sister way). Depending how complex the obstacles would be, it would be either some very easy game as walking on hot coal, or maybe Sister got help from that very friendly neighbour, who could also lend her some material, so we can have better "rides" :)


    And to combine both options, you can include Twins for the fun too. Since if Sister built it, she won't participate, but these girls would be a good satisfaction, as some of us would be satisfied they would be finally "punished" also, and this still gives us an option to "vote" (choose the way). Only the number of combinations is strictly given by number of characters (thus 1-3), as they can't be mixed - but we can choose what can happen to who.


    As for the type of these attractions, they could be thinked off on-the-fly during the story.. but I can give one or two proposal too.. just need to think of something :)
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    These rides were drawn with reference to the future, where they maybe even enjoy pain more, if that ever happen - after so many cycles (and Twins are probably into it already :) ), so there could be more or less of pain (duh)..

    Also, this time their genitals doesn't have to be targeted directly all the time (but they can be just "accidental casualties" anyway)

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    A slide - class old toboggan, but only there, if you choose the wrong one, there is a grater on the way down ;)

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    A guillotine - you had to pick up something through the hole in the wall, only if you choose the wrong hole, you loose your arm/hand..

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    A swing - you have to use a vertical rope and swing over some mud/pool/whatever.. and there is also a horizontal rope full of knots directly under your future line of flight. Only in one case the horizontal rope is much closer to you, so your genitals inevitably got a "slide" of its own :) Probably girls will "enjoy" it more :)

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    A see-saw - you have to use your own weight to outbalance it, so it.. I don't know.. drop some key (hanging out of your reach) to the ground.. But under the place on which you sit there is a hole, and there is a risk if you overweight it too much, your ass or pussy got impaled by some "dildo".

    After all, impalment doesn't have to be only with the bedpost ;) Maybe one of the Twins "loose" on purpose just to try it, not realizing it is bigger than she thought :) Will she even be able to get free by herself?

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    Trap door - if they choose wrong way, they fall to hot water, probably with their ass ahead. Not deadly, as they can get out, but still unpleasant at least.. (they know they are going to be fine tomorrow, but still)



    Yeah, these things are kind complicate to built, but maybe she/they got help from other villagers..
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    >>47013
    aaaw, you remember! XD
    icy's still got that somewhere on his agenda, but he doesn't have much time right now :P

    the idea was to make basically an interactive version of these stories similar to what RenPy games often have with dialogues and so on, but since the stories are linear there'd be no dialogue options or alternative endings

    >maybe something more could be added to make story gos in different way but this probably can only be done on other episodes.

    from a game standpoint that's not too difficult, but it would require additional images to be rendered… if you wanna make that, i'd be glad to help (when i've got time)!

    >also I was planning another game on the different kind of story where you have to help your slutty sister to get rid of her baby.

    same goes for this, if you want help, i'm down! :)


    >>47016
    there's currently no public version of the game, just a prototype i sent onix to see if he would be ok with me making such a "game" with his images :P
    from a programming standpoint the game is basically finished, the main problem is adding the content, since i'll have to add each image and dialogue by hand and there are a lot of images…
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    >>47019
    Yeah I know what it was about :) although in the beginning you suggested to make a game with story endings. but here I think it works better as separate stories.

    that other game would be quite different
    as the idea was that there is just one character and FPV perspective where you can make choice and they either end the game in some way or you continue it like a story
    As in that way you can have different endings without introducing immortality of some sort.

    I sort of already made a start some time ago but then it stopped because of the same reasons why everyone stops :) and I think gurochan died about that moment too.
    your willingness to help may revive that project sometime later when we both will have some more free time.

    >>47016
    Icy already explained what it is about
    >it would be just game they put together, because they are bored.

    I had some idea like that to make a game where they maybe playing cards or something where penalty is that your opponent gets to do something to you
    but probably it would work better just as plain story or any kind of interactivity requires too many renderings

    A game could work if it was same as the story above where they like do something and making some choice leads to the death and game ends and another choice - game continues to the next choice
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    >>47019
    > the idea was to make basically an interactive version of these stories similar to what RenPy games often have with dialogues and so on, but since the stories are linear there'd be no dialogue options or alternative endings

    If there's no choices what is the interactive part then? I don't think it counts as interactive if the only interaction is to click for the next picture to show. It would be effectively the same as clicking between those pictures in the browser or in an image-viewing software.
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    >>47025
    It doesn’t move forward without user interaction, so it may not be the best interactive thing ever, but it’s still what i’d define as interactive (as opposed to not interactive things like videos and images. [though image viewing software which allows you to switch between images is also interactive, but slightly less so than the “game]) :P
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    >>47024

    Oh, I understand now :)

    So it is both linear and interactive - while there are choices, the result is always just one linear rendered story - either the story continues, or it is stopped by death

    (or in the terms of obstacle race/card daring game - while there are more than 1 character, the result is only one possible combination to render - whenever it was decided by them playing the game or viewers watching the story, there is no "coming back and choose the other way")
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    >>47026

    That kind of game is also called "kiketic novel" where you have to click the mouse to progress :)


    >>47027
    Yes and I don't see the reason to make story nonlinear as in that case it gets pretty annoying because you still need to see all endings and all routes which requires lots of replaying.

    Although it is not exactly stopped by death it just ends in one or another way and even that ending may have quite a story of itself. But once you make a choice it is not going to branch anymore
    and obviously you can come back reloading the saved game at the previous choice and juts make another selection.
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    > I had some idea like that to make a game where they maybe playing cards or something where penalty is that your opponent gets to do something to you

    Oh I really like this idea.

    Since there are more than 2 of them, they could for example play strip poker, except they don't stop when they're nude, but they continue to strip until there is nothing left to strip, for example.

    I also really like the ideas proposed as games suggestions for a storyline.
    They could start to build rides for each other, except each ride can be deadly, or has a chance to mutilate the person riding, and they could challenge each other, and try to compete for who has made the best and most devious ride.
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    >>47037

    Since they all don't mind being naked, and girls maybe could strip nude before the game even started, because.. they allways do :) , more likely it would be some daring game.. as in https://e621.net/posts/3193612 :)
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    >>47037
    Poker is abit too complex I was thinking about something simpler
    Like if they beat the card they win if they take it home they will have to face some torture.
    although probably this will not become a game but it will be just a story about a game like that.

    Building "rides" for each other is probably impossible in that village or I don't understand what does it even mean?
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    any plans for when you'll be able to make the next part?
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    >>47039

    Well, you could imagine simple enough things to do.
    For example a climbing challenge, but if you fall, instead of falling on mattresses, you fall on spikes or something.
    Or a game where you have to dodge chainsaws to get to the other side.
    Or a game where you take turns throwing balls to dunk each other, except bellow is a boiling oil tank or something like that.
    Or an obstacle course, except the girls all have a stick of explosive in their pussy, with a slow fuse, and failing to complete the course in due time would result in it getting exploded (which may not be immediately fatal, depending on the quantity of explosive).
    Or maybe a neighbor builds them small carts with lawnmower motors and planks, and they outfit them with blades to compete in a less than safe way.

    I think there are tons of ideas that are doable in a rural area where people are bound to have tools around and that don't require a ton of engineering.

    In a way, the horse thing was kind of in that spirit, except it was formulated as a taunt rather than a challenge.
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    How bout an escape room challenge where they don't escape the room gets incinerated
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    >>47102
    T this moment I don't have any time at all so probably it will be like 2 week later at best unless I maybe will make some pictures but very few

    >>47103
    This looks intermeeting idea but probably 6 year old girls can not build all that by themselves and even the boy woud not be able to do it and they are even too lazy to even make so much effort just to entertain each other

    although I think it could make great summer camp for children
    only problem is that it requires quite a lot of different environments and lots of characters
    could be something similar to Drabok summer camp series juts shorter. LOL
    children who come there would be unaware that it is not big deal to die so they probably woud be petty scared

    We can call it death therapy camp LOL

    >>47110
    I don't know what is that and cant even find with google
    >>47111
    yeah that could be done but again same problem that it requires lots of characters
    if e do it that summer camp way
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    >>47112

    It could be that castration animation you kinda liked, I think ;)

    https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6409386

    (final Fetish is the author)
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    How bout the sister gets set on fire by the twins
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    >>47114
    If you make suggestion like that you have to find a way to incorporate it into the story

    I do have some plans for playing with fire , but not sure how that setting ehr on fire wou work in your situation being is somehow different from cooking
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    >>47112
    take your time, i just feel like checking every once in a while so you don't think interest has died down XD

    >>47115
    i could see the setting on fire part as either a very small chapter or as an epilogue to a different chapter where they want to make a bonfire and the sister suggests that she could be burnt at a stake on top of it.

    possible motivation for her might include that she's bored and the day is almost over anyways or that she feels guilty for something she did earlier that day and wants to be punished like this or maybe she just misunderstands it when her brother calls her hot or something :P

    in general i think if you go down that route, she should probably be tied up since fire doesn't insta kill and she could otherwise run around in an uncontrollable frenzy and set stuff on fire, so for everyone's safety and the best results, she should have no escape from the fire.
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    if you wanted to make it an epilogue or something of the current chapter, then it could be set up that after finishing with the brother they decide to make a bonfire in the evening. the twins spend all evening talking about how hot the brother was (in both meanings of the word) and the sister decides to outdo him by letting herself be burnt at a stake so she can prove that she's the hottest
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    >>47116
    This burning at a stake does not look reasonable or interesting enough :)
    and I suppose the result would be pretty scary :)
    She probably will be screaming a lot too and I will need to render the burnt corpse.

    So it woud be better to do something where it does not end with death or something what requires making new models or textures

    As for this story I already have some idea how it will end
    the hint is that those girls are not very good at cooking ;)
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    how is being burnt alive more scary than the stuff that's already happened? in the first chapter alone the sister was brutally dismembered with an axe and then sawn into pieces with a chainsaw, i think the scariness maxed out somewhere before that :P

    i'm not sure how much burning someone alive you can do that doesn't at least require some burnt skin textures XD

    although going by your hint you may need to render the charred remains of the brother anyways, depending on how bad they really are at cooking
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    Agree with the corpse opinion :) While I know some people are into (and I do not judge them), for me it is not that interesting too, as corpse can't cry, make facial expressions or react in other ways..
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    >>47129

    Well, they may also be that bad at cooking, that the fire would go out and him being so high that instead of cooking he will just enjoy some "sauna" :)
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    >>47129
    In my experience getting burned hurts way way more than getting chopped into pieces alive :)
    So I think in the current situation her brother is not even aware what's coming for him :) he will just be unable to scream to scare everyone. ;)

    As for the rendering issues main problem is hair and face which should be kept untouched and also remaining skin should change color somewhat uniformly.

    >>47131
    It is not that they do something wrong but they don't have enough wood to cook him properly.
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    >>47132
    Erm… what experience do you have with being chopped into pieces and being burned alive? Or don’t I want to know? XD
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    >>47125
    Wait if they can't cook wouldn't they cause a accidental fire
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    >>47134
    Fortunately I don't have any of that experience but if I get cut or stabbed it does not hurt that much to even care about pain sometimes it is even not noticeable before you see that you are dripping blood it is just "oops shit that will take few weeks to heal"
    also if you seen videos of people who get cut in half or lose their limbs their reaction is about the same as that girl, you don't see them being too concerned about pain they seem to be quite surprised and rather thinking how long they are going to stay alive.
    I think there were even videos of people being chopped into pieces alive and they don't look like being in too much pain either.

    But getting burnt even a little is insane pain which does not stop for all day

    >>47136
    what do you think they can accidentally put on fire there?
    although if they use gasoline they can get burnt a bit :)
    And actually it could even be that they all get splashed and burn to death but that would contradict my plans that I have for the future
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    An idea for the burning part could be, since they cooked the brother's dick still attached, that they decide next to cook the sister's vagina still attached too, for comparison.

    Maybe they decide that there needs to be a taste competition between the brother and sister.

    Then they could stick a metallic rod inside the sister's pussy and get it heating in the flame.

    If you want her to literally be in the fire, maybe it takes them a few tries to find the right setup, and initially, they try to have her sit over the flames, but it starts hurting her legs like hell, she can't stand it and they fear her legs might get charred. So they end up having to hold her in place somehow with her limbs further from the actual flame.
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    Now there are pictures where the sisters can satisfy their hunger ? ^^
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    >>47152
    There will be an update soon :)
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    >>47208
    Will there be something similar with the girls? It would be interesting to see them slicing each other's fried labia and clitoris.
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    >>47209
    Probably it will happen just not with those girls :)

    I think their clits are so small that you would need a microscope to do do it
    and they should not even have labia at that age.
    It would make more sense to do it that to their mom
    but after the boy his sister is getting cooked next
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    Time for meatBALLS in cum gravy.
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    Now that its gone they should tease his stump with their pussies and make him lick their naughty bits
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    >>47206
    it would've been really funny if she burnt her tongue and was like "aaah, it's hot! i burnt my mouth" and he's just looking at her like "woman, i burnt my dick for this shit, deal with it!" XD

    >>47208
    it looks delicious as well, and they're only getting started :D

    >>47217
    if you look at this image outside of the context, you'd think they're just sucking him off… great poses by the way! :P

    >>47222
    i wonder what they're going to cook next… maybe they put a skewer through his balls and grill them?


    all in all some lovely images, thank you! it's always a pleasure to see the new parts ^^
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    My perception might be bad but I think one of the twins is looking at the sister
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    >>47244
    Since they are talking they are both looking at the sister and pretty much ignoring the boy :)

    >>47243
    I think you know what they are gonna do next :)
    skewering his balls may be good idea too but that's quite unusual in that situation ;)

    yes that sucking was sort of intended
    I think the story did not go extremely well because the situation is not very reasonable but looks like nobody is complaining LOL

    Also interesting idea about burning her tongue, I just not even imagined that it is possible to burn yourself like that because I never saw it happen on BBQ :)

    >>47225
    Hmm :) that could look good but I need to finish this story somehow LOL will keep it in mind for later
    maybe even with 2 boys
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    >>47028
    Did you mean "Kinetic Novel" (https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/kinetic_novel)?

    I think it's possible to include some really interactive stuff without the need of a mass of additional images. Like in some interactive text adventures on asstr.org the players could choose the order in which the episodes of a story are presented to them. The episodes themself are linear, maybe with some (very) small twists.

    Example: On a camping trip you can choose if you first build a fireplace, visit the lake for a swim, eat something or set up the tent. At the end of an episode your options are the remaining episodes - all or only some.

    Lets see:
    -# You arrive.
    -< Build a fireplace or set up the tent?
    -~ You set up the tent.
    -< Build a fireplace or eat something?
    -~ You eat something.
    -# You are tired an take a nap.
    -< Build a fireplace or go for a swim?
    -~ You build a fireplace.
    -< (no choice left)
    -~ You go for a swim.
    -# It's night and you're going to sleep.

    If the episodes are self-contained, they are independend and can be told in every order. This keeps the amount of images/work at the same level as a linear story, but with the opportunity to make decisions the reader/player gets the feeling of freedom of choice. The author needs no fancy story telling assistant tool and adds just some links/connections at the end of the episodes. Well, the story path will be a little bit wider to cover all combinations, e.g. it takes a corresponding number of pages for a browser game (or a very simple programming for an executable). But the images are linked from the same place and are needed only once no matter what order is chosen. And if the number of combinations threatens to explode they can be limited by packing the episodes in chapters.

    Lets see:
    -# You arrive.
    -< Build a fireplace or set up the tent?
    -~ You set up the tent.
    -< (no choice left)
    -~ You build a fireplace.
    -# You are tired an take a nap.
    -< Eat something or go for a swim?
    -= You eat something.
    -< (no choice left)
    -= You go for a swim.
    -# It's night and you're going to sleep.

    Quite easy, isn't it? :)
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    >>47255
    Yes "Kinetic Novel"

    And yes if episodes are unrelated they can be interactively reordered but this is sort of pointless
    maybe it can be done as some kind of advanced selection but it is not that different from just selecting desired episode
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    When a limb is torn off, the body responds by releasing large amounts of the stress hormones adrenaline and noradrenaline, which - beside a lot of other effects - concentrate the blood in the trunk, hence reducing the blood flow to the residual limb as much as possible (up to complete stop). At the same time probably prostatic acid phosphatase acts as a strong pain killer. While naturally the consequences of an amputation last longer, the actual impact is only short. This gives the body a chance to survive. This is not the case with burning. Not only exhausts the longer duration the stock of hormones, the effect is also more serious. Measured by extent, 15% body surface area burn in adults and 10% body surface area burn in children are considered life-threatening. However, there is good news when it comes to roasting. Grade three and four burns don't hurt anymore because of the destroyed nerves. So to reduce the stress of your piglet you should heat it up quickly. This also closes the pores and keeps it juicy. Ask your trusted grill master.
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    >[…] it is not that different from just selecting desired episode

    Well, basically you are right. That is why I wrote "the feeling of freedom of choice". The difference lies in the availability. The author has a certain control about the order. And because the reader has not the complete choice from the beginning he/she/it has no idea if the selection makes a difference. This keeps the tension. An additional benefit is the option for the author still to add a few dependencies if desired - even later as extension. Something might happen if you eat directly before you swim. Off course it is a tightrope walk between keeping it simple and manageable and doing the big step of "becoming a game design professional". :)
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    >>47258
    Well actually i was thinking about doing that if it becomes a game. But it woud still require at least few extra images for all that selection stuff. it is not that big deal so it is quite possible.

    >>47257
    Thanks for giving icy a lesson about BBQ LOL

    To me this cooking alive thing looks so painful that I even don't feel very good about doing it in 3D LOL

    But fortunately the boy will be unable to scream LOL
    and lets hope he will not suffer for too long
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    >>47263
    >[…] lesson about BBQ […]
    It's for the benefit of all - so, I'm always pleased to be at your service. ;)

    BTW - being a little smart-ass - I wonder about the ones who are so much in tit-roasting. The sole reason for this fetish can only be the sexual aspect. Apart from a small portion of mammary gland tits are pure fat. So the taste is awful, especially when salt water bags or even silicone have been incorporated. ;D
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    >>47276
    i guess it's my turn to be a smart ass: there is such a thing as Lardo which is basically pure fat and some people obviously enjoy it XD

    but in general i do think the entire cannibalism "scene" is mostly about the sexual aspect and not so much about realism, though then again it does make it a little bit less creepy, doesn't it? imagine it was all about actually finding out which cuts are probably the best and how you could go about obtaining them, or how you could maintain the logistics of a global cannibalism system… ok, the latter part does sound fun as well :P
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    >>47277
    Yep, Lardo is more or less (more "more" than "less") pur fat. But I think it deserves some additional “useless information”. ;)
    Lardo (Italian for “bacon”) is a specially treated, fatty bacon. It is made of the firm back fat of country pigs. Only the upper part from directly under the rind is used. Although production is basically the same, it varies slightly from region to region. "Lardo di Colonnata" is a protected geographical indication. A traditional specialty of Eastern European cuisine similar to Lardo is Salo.

    >[…] the entire cannibalism "scene" is mostly about the sexual aspect and not so much about realism […]

    IMO you can divide the "cannibals" into the "real ones" and those with erotic fantasies. The former have their own forums and don't visit guro chan. Probably they try to live it their fetish. The latter are here and enjoy the images and stories, although or especially because the tales are so exaggerated.

    >[…] maintain the logistics of a global cannibalism system…

    This is what makes me smiling most of the time. It may be possible to raise a hairless goat or even a long pig for years to use it on just one feast. But it is very questionable to raise whole human lifestocks to feed the world. The economics contradict this scenario. The same applies to lotteries. Their only reason can be to reduce the number of living people drastically.
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    >> 47305
    I think a few pretty good settings for cannibal world stories are :
    - Population imbalance. I've actually been thinking about doing some writing in a world around those lines, where some disease leads to few boys being born and high boys death rate, meaning that for humanity to survive, you need to have women have as many children as possible (so that enough boys get born) and to cull the excess population so as to be able to feed everyone. Then it makes sense to use those you cull as a supplementary food source to support the population, and to have a free use scenario to produce lots of births. I've been meaning to get the calculation done on what kind of death rates/populations would be needed to support such a world.

    - Recreationnal cannibalism. In a world where killing isn't really taboo, maybe if there is overpopulation, so governments allow some level of murder to happen to keep population under control (maybe you could buy killing permits, for example), you could imagine a small portion of the population engaging in cannibalism, or in killing for entertainment/art. Of course, it wouldn't be so widespread as usually depicted in stories here, going so far as being in danger whenever you get on the street, or population would just drop, but it could exist to some levels.
    - Still on the overpopulation theme, a world where there's not enough food to go around. People might resort to eating others or to sell family members in order to be able to get food, even if frowned upon.

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