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    Hey yall, hope you enjoy. This is my first real animation, there's a lot I would change here but I'm glad to just have something mostly finished. Let me know your thoughts and critiques, learning as I go so any advice is super appreciated.

    gfycat(dot)com/AgileNegativeDartfrog
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    Amazing work! Head chomping is a favorite of mine and while the animation obviously isn't crazy technically polished you've got a good sense for content that's actually hot. Since I'm no expert on animation either the best I can offer for advice is remember to let the blood pool underneath her if you're going to go through the trouble of setting up those delicious sprays.
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    Great job, buddy. We clearly need more d.va guro. Keep the good work
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    >>20408
    This is really well done, especially for a first animation! It's nice to see more SFM guro stuff that doesn't involve scat, IMO.
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    This is really good. For a first animation you did well. All I can say is that perhaps the head should offer some resistance for being chomped away.

    Despite that I loved it!
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    I like it. i hope you create more of these. looking forward in your future projects
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    Hey, same dude working with puzudz here>:D This was lovely. I might have to help mold you too.>:) One thing though, (since this is you first animation and its actually pretty decent) you missed the cum shot. Also maybe he tears the torso off her body right before or after he cums would complete your cencept. And if he split her legs at the end to expose ovaries or torn vag that would also be nice. If you need some ideas just ask on your page and I'll be there:)
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    wow!cool!
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    good beginning, man!
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    more
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    Fuck her a little more after beheading. Maybe til he's finished
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    Looks awesome and the gore blood spatter is done nicely. Can I ask what particle effects you used?
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    i'd suggest using some ragdoll physics. It's easier to animate certain things. But what's with the (dot) in the link?
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    Thanks for all the kind words and advice, everyone. No fucking in this one, just the chomp.

    gfycat dot com /TediousUniformCaimanlizard

    >>20552
    The big spray is advisor_pierce from the HL2 particles, and the drip is arterial_drip from L4D2

    >>20554
    I'll look into that, limp or dangling limbs are the bane of my existence right now

    Also if anybody knows how to post links without triggering the spam detection that'd be great lol
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    Just wanted to say FF XIV is in short supply and less so in the guro niche. Well done!
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    Fucking would be nice tho:)
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    You're superb for a new animator. Looks better than some of the people on Tumblr I've seen call themselves professionals.

    Could you do something with this model, please?

    sfmlab(dot)com/item/2624/
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    >>20555
    Use two Xs instead of Ts in HXXP. They'll automatically be converted into clickable links.

    Also, I like your animations a lot. Please do more!
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    >>20555
    Ok,I am not specialist and if I am not wrong its your second job but I noticed that movements are not completely smooth.You should spend more time to animate each frame and experiments with the light and your animations will look awesome and proffessional.
    Also,thank you for FF XIV awesome game and awesome job,for second one.Keep it up :)
    P.S. Could you do some guro with "Alice" from "Alice madness returns" ?
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    >>20583
    MORE * awesome and proffessional.Thats what I wanted to say lol :3
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    >>20408

    Sincere thankyou goes to you for making this amazing dva film. But i would more appreciate if you fix 2 unnaturalness 1. Some Dva's blood pumps from uniform not from dva's neck. 2. 3D model of Her hair is overlapped with her neck so hiding her beautiful neck. Even though this is your first work, this is the most impressive work ive ever seen. Thankyou again and hope you remake this film more gorgeous !
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    Sincere thankyou goes to you for making this amazing dva film. But i would more appreciate if you fix 2 unnaturalness 1. Some Dva's blood pumps from uniform not from dva's neck. 2. 3D model of Her hair is overlapped with her neck so hiding her beautiful neck. Even though this is your first work, this is the most impressive work ive ever seen. Thankyou again and hope you remake this film more gorgeous !
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    !!!
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    You can make animations for the female Resident Evil character and the zombie GAME OVER, which is great
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    >>21985
    awesome!!
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    I love your work!
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    https://gfycat.com/ScholarlyDearestHerald

    I'm pretty glad with how this one turned out. No promises but I'm gonna try uploading more frequently than once a month. As always thanks for watching and commenting.
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    coo
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    Fantastic! You get a LOT better with each one. I also love how you do mostly decap / vore stuff which is my favorite, so I'm excited to see you improve!
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    this is the best ive seen in a looong time. Keep up the awesome work! Love the decap and tearing apart! Maybe some horrible stuff can happen to laura croft, mileena/cammy/Jade from mortal kombat? Would be cool if they got fucked for a while after death too.
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    It is damn good! It'll be even better, if she were alive before the monster rips her?
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    hope you we can get more dva guro from you! amazing work
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    ya wow... your art is amazing!! i love the idea of getting my head chomped like that :P
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    pls moar dva
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    Can you do something with Brigitte from OW pleaaaase?
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    can we see her lower half get fucked next?
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    Come back :)
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    would love an animation with d.va's cruiser skin
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    >>22430
    Niiiiiiiiiiiice

    awesome work. Only way to 1 up this would be to have him keep goin with her torso so the jizz shoots all over the top half of her!
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    >>26721
    few months old, but
    hxxps://gfycat.com/SaltyHilariousAmericancreamdraft
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    glad you're alive and kickin!
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    Something with Brigitte pleade?
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    come back pls
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    where are you mate ?
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    rip i guess
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    where have you gone?

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