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    New guro series about a girl with older brother who are sent to the very boring but also very special village for the summer.
    Inspired by the "Chopping Wood" story from here https://boards.guro.cx/lit/koko.php?res=16464
    and probably somewhat resembles "Gravity falls" cartoon :)
    Any criticism or suggestions are welcome.
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    Looks like some interesting things could happen on that chopping block :) I'm looking forward to more of it
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    Awesome, can't wait for more!
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    Most excellent as usual. Quality. (But please, if you show the boy penis, don't make it very over large like a loaf of French bread. More realistic size this time.) Thanks for all.
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    >>5569
    was that big penis so scary that time LOL
    But yes this time it will be normal if there will be any.

    also during the process of making the story I decided that chopping off head may wait a little and there will be rather some amputee and baby play fetish intead :)
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    Блин, топор пень и полуголый пацан, я думал сначало девченка отрубит коечто пацану, но если он отфигачит ей руки, то она врятли это сможет сделать, может стоит начать с него, а потом уж он займется ей в качестве мести)
    И насчет размера пениса я согласен!
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    >>5584
    She will take revenge next time LOL
    But she sort of asked for it herself :)
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    Changed text a little :)
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    This made me cum
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    I don't know how she could realistically take revenge with a missing arm, but I could see an alternative story that start the other way around with the girl coaxing the boy into letting her chop his "wood"
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    well, she may shop his wood but I wonder for what she should be taking that revenge?
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    >>5603
    Ah well, I wasn't thinking specifically at the ongoing scene. She seemed pretty willing.

    It's just that dick getting chopped off was the first thing that came to mind when I read "chopping wood". I'm a pervert sue me XD
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    >>5604
    Ah yes that makes sense :) you then have to wait for next episode
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    at the end it would be nice when she would ridin on the axe for preparin herself to burn like wood or to be used for the barbeque
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    Can't wait till the legs are gone too!
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    it won't take very long :)
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    he's back, better than ever. would love him to make the axe 'disappear'
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    Chop more!

    A I hope they get to have some fun before or after she's finally dead.
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    >>5663
    yeah I am back.
    >>5664
    sure, just that mostly all fun is for the girl :)
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    >>5667
    i love this one, she looks so helpless!
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    Slice her in half now, so she can have some fun. Love your work
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    >>5676
    But maybe play a bit with her before (or during) the chopping.
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    >>5672
    Yes, totally helpless now :)
    >>5676
    Since she has no hands she can't do much with her lower half :)
    >>5677
    I think she is going to have more fun than if she had all those hands and legs :)
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    ah and I hope now she looks a bit better with those bandages :)
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    The brother should cut his own "wood" to add to the pile
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    moar!
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    Hey! Hey! Brother!

    I think it's time I bothered you some more!

    I still have body parts that need chopping!
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    We can not rush Herr Onix. As you know, he's an international secret spy and is off on another special mission to the international spy conference secretly held annually in Köln.
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    I was not at home for some time so no news for some time. but here is next part of the story.
    >>5706
    She did not annoy her brother that much LOL but it's getting close to that :)
    >>5719
    I am secret member of illuminati but so secret that even illuminati doesn't know about me LOL
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    Can't wait for the next part!
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    So this is the next part.
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    >>44055
    We've got the next part, but where's the next next part?

    Seriously, can't wait!
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    >>44097
    I already almost decided that nobody is interested :)
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    >>44098
    We had issues on GC for 2~ days, so don't be so certain yet
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    OK
    GC does not allow me to post more now
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    >>44112
    I loved this comic, Sorry been away for a bit, but thank you onix.
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    >>44098 i'm interested, i've been checking for updates at least daily since you started this story, i just usually leave the commenting to the others :P
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    Incredible nice. Hopes he can fuck the parts whilst they still warm?
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    So this is all of it
    there will be next part soon when I will finish adding text.
    >>44116
    I guess it will be left as a mystery at least until next episode what did he do with those parts :)
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    >>44142
    Thanks. Great stuff.
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    I know what I want him to do to this ass, but I have a feeling it won't be that…
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    So time for the next part.
    But I wonder if anyone can guess what is on the menu :)
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    I guess it will be a fried sausage with a couple of eggs
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    meatballs and secret sauce?
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    >>44195

    Ok, that's almost right LOL
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    Awesome I like where this is going!

    Also just saying, tying it works great on the penis, but if you want huge balls you need to beat them up with a mallet
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    >>44211
    hehe yeah maybe :)
    I his balls also may get some treatment later but in another episode.
    For now You can give suggestion what is the best tool or best way to beat balls :)

    And also does anyone has any idea what kind of meat they ate in the beginning?
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    Mom always came at me and my brothers with a large wooden spoon. I think she wanted us to move out of the house after primary school.
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    Balls removed from his sack, cut in half and grilled while still attached. Or just grilled on a long skewer. She collects his last cum to make a sauce for serving with his balls.
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    few more for now

    >>44214
    I will keep it in mind :)
    >>44213
    You mean she was beating your balls with that spoon? ;)
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    Yes. Ball beater. Called it a 'friendly reminder' and it probably made me what I am today?
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    This will be all of this episode.
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    >>44244
    holy cow, you never cease to amaze! thank you ^^
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    Bravo! You're at your best when cutting off dicks and balls.
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    For some reason it felt like it will be the most cruel episode so far :) but probably it is not.

    also if anyone is willing to see dirty stuff here is another picture set on /S https://boards.guro.cx/s/res/31508.html
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    Onix is the master of this stuff, superb!
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    Ever so nice. Nipple Nippers. Next on to Clit Clipper? Toe Trimmer? If you cut off her butt cheeks the story could be 'endless'.
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    >>44330 Yeah it could be :)
    but I think it will be better to do separate stories than endless story :)
    As usual with my stuff if you want to see something you should think some kind of interesting plot why it happens :)


    Also I wonder which woud you prefer: accident or deliberate mutilation?
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    Looks like little sister got upset about washt her brother said and decided to teach him a lesson.
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    She should do a lot more to him. I don't think he's learned his lesson.
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    >>44348
    You think?
    For me it looks like he got what he deserved :) Now she is busy watching something in that phone :)
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    Moar!
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    Please, sir, I want some more
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    Yes we all want more. But you forget that Onix is an international secret spy. Don't tell anyone that, or it will no longer be secret. He's obviously off on another secret mission to South Spazmodia to confront the Evil Ruler Claude Le Boeuff about his failure to provide latrine services to visiting troops invading his country. He will return!
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    I am still here But it does not look like there is that much interest.
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    Just because nobody comment doesn't mean nobody watch. It's more about how GC is made than your art's problem. This site keep dying. Have you considered using ExHentai instead?
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    There definitely is interest. It's just really hard for people to find a specific thread if it's not bumped constantly.

    So make more! We'll be waiting for sure!
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    Onix keep on producing we really do appreciate what you produce. more it of please.
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    >>44400
    There’s a lot of interest, I check this page daily just to see if you’ve made an update!
    If it’ll make you happy, I can start spamming “more pls” every day or something :P
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    Ok then I made another episode But with all those problems on pixiv It will task some time to sort out there.
    So I will post it here.
    also I recently posted another series for those who like dirty stuff :)
    https://boards.guro.cx/s/res/31508.html

    >>44414
    rather than asking for more you should rather just tell what you think about current story what you think could be different or how you imagine it
    as I woud like to know if people even understand anything what is happening there.
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    One guy on pixiv wanted me to do decapitation so here is the story ;)
    Consider it a version of "Children of the Corn" and one other old movie that I saw in my childhood when a lawyer woman visits a town with very strict rules and get arrested for improper licence plate :)


    I think it will be good time to introduce Wendy from my other series to this place as well even is she is not going to feature in guro stories.
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    superb, bet you have some fun before you finish…
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    >>44415 alright, will do :)

    >>44424
    nice, so i take it she doesn't know she'll only be dead for the rest of the day? i hope she doesn't loose her head to quickly, so she still has time to react to the situation.

    also i look forward to finding out what they'll do with her meat afterwards, it'd be a shame to let it go to waste!
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    that was quick, i can't wait for them to show her the "secret recipe" :D

    might be fun to have her body spit roasted or something so that she can still clearly see what she's about to eat
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    this time is was pretty short :)
    Not sure when there will be next post But it may go to /S board

    >>44428
    yes, she does not know that yet and not sure if she will even find out :)
    What they are going to do with the meat is left for interpretation but there is way to much of it to eat :)

    as this universe develops there will be more information :)
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    alright, looking forward to any updates to this universe ^^
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    >>44440
    I think Wendy will not get to taste that secret recipe very soon but It may happen when other girls will visit them.

    since there are so many spitroastings around already that I am not even sure if it is not getting boring already :)
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    >>44443
    spit roasting will NEVER get boring! at least not for me :P
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    I love spit roastings.

    But she mentioned she wanted some "ashed" potatoes.
    I like that typo. Her next death, they could stuff her with mashed potatoes while alive, and then live ash-roast her.
    That would give her a taste of their secret recipe :D !
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    Hmm, it was not a typo It says "ash roasted potatoes" as this is the standard thing to do when I go to the nature with my family :) If you have bonfire you drop few potatoes in it :)

    Wendy probably will not get roasted soon but I woud like to do something as LordofPancakes story where they play some different animals like cows and pigs,(maybe chicken too?) because when in the farm like that it woud be big waste not to have such experience :)
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    Well, there are 3 of them. They could cook a Turducken for Thanksgiving !
    I could imagine each one of them stuffing themselves with the smaller one, and the last one eventually putting all of them to cook, only for all of them to wake up and eat the prepared dinner the next day.
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    >>44456
    Oh god that's really crazy :) maybe even too crazy for 3d ;) But leaving for the next day looks interesting although this will make things wasy too straightforward :)

    I sort of thought about such thing quite some time ago in the meatgirl expo story :)
    about a mom and her daughter who gets back into her belly and then both get cooked :)
    Nika also did a drawing like that :)

    But actually there are only 2 of them for now. Wendy is just a guest from other series :)
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    Yeah, I imagine it must be pretty hard to model ! If you go for it one day though …

    I guess for that to happen, we either need big sis or a baby to show up then :D
    The size difference should help.

    I'd be in favor of a baby if you do that, as I really want to see that little girl get stuffed.

    If we lack characters, we could always go for a cute animal, like a bunny or something :P
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    >>44463
    It is not even that hard to model as it is impossible to fit them into each other :) This is why text stories sometimes are better because you can write things that do not need to be doable ;)


    But speaking about babies or animals I did not understand if you mean that she woud get pregnant or you want that thing literally getting into her her tiny pussy or butt somehow ? :)


    I think this could even beat "the aristocrats" if they find a dead baby and stuff it inside LOL
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    >>44463
    You two seem to be going down some weird, dark and twisted paths with your ideas, and I like it :D

    I did a drawing similar to that a while back, though that was “only” a normal pregnancy, not something being inserted before cooking… Might have to try drawing something like that one day :P
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    >>44464
    I've been posting your new work at Lolicit and it seems that Lolicit Staff isn't very happy with it. :-)
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    >>44466
    And what did they find wrong about it ?
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    >>44467
    It's not about your art itself. It's about the fact that your art survives even though they threw you out. That's what you get when you've got dedicated followers.
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    >>44464
    Yeah, I fully agree the written medium allows you to bend reality a little bit, which is fun. Althou_gh I like when it sticks to something realistic. I've actually got an idea I might write for lit if I find the time and courage.

    I meant inserting the baby into her as stuffing and see how her tiny body handles that sudden "Impregnation".
    She'd likely get eviscerated first to leave room for the baby and avoid spoiling the meat.

    As for stuffing her into the boy, I'm assuming she'd need to get her limbs removed first, and he might need to get opened up and then sewed back. Looking at your pictures, if he somehow can get her head to stick out his butt (which would most likely rip), without legs, he should be able to barely fit her in his belly and lower torso. Leaving him short breathed to start the cooking process.

    >>44465

    Thank you very much :)
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    >>44483
    I think this will be a bit too complex to make fully in 3d in the near future but if you will write it for lit I may do some lustrations. :)
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    Just started a new episode today :)
    according to the story that was available on torturesru forum some time ago.

    I think it should be already evident where it is going
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    Ah, it warms my heart to see kids plowing together in the fields :D

    I can’t wait to see where they go from here! Depending on how well she pulls her weight, he could maybe brand her as cattle and leave her naked in the barn! Either way, I’m excited! ^^
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    Cattle branding is for later when she will be a cow :)
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    >>44511
    Not sure how well she can perform as a cow going by her size… if it does come to that, she may need more reprimanding as well :D

    Also I’ve been wondering, is there a specific system behind how you label your images? You seem to skip a number or more almost every time, is that so you can add another picture in between if you want or is it because you render more images than you end up posting? Or something else? Most curious :P
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    Yes I see that it will not be easy for her to perform as a cow :) but she is not that good as a horse either LOL

    I save pictures leaving gaps because sometimes they need to be reordered so usually I skip 1 number but when there is another setting i may skip to next 10.
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    I see, that makes sense

    I love where this is going so far, I think I may develop a new fetish XD

    Once she’s tied to the plough it might be a good idea to give her one of those gags that’s like a stick, not sure what they’re called… otherwise she’ll probably start to complain again when he starts whipping her :P
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    Not that it’s not painful enough already for her, but shouldn’t horse shoes normally be heated up until they glow before attaching them so they also burn themselves into the hooves? It could be that this way it wont hold :P

    Also it may be more effective to have her use all of her limbs (with horse shoes of course) to pull the plough, she’ll really need to give her all after all ;)
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    Well actually I also wonder how painful is that for real, Because I think it is not really that bad as it looks like :) also if you are in aroused state full of adrenaline your pain tolerance is at least doubled.
    I had some accidents like stepping on the nail and it was not that painful as it was scary not to get infected.
    But in this story it is not the main goal to cause a much pain as possible rather than give everyone certain experience :)

    I don't think heating horseshoes is common practice today as you are likely to burn your hands while handling that red hot horseshoe :) and imagine if she kicks and drops it on his lap LOL ;) better be safe :)
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    You’re the boss! I’m gonna be honest, my “horse shoe” related knowledge is at least 99% medieval or fantasy based anyways, so I really don’t know what the modern way to shoe a horse would be XD
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    hehe, well I did some research on this topic before doing this LOL
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    Indeed, according to what you said earlier, you even stepped on a nail for us. Nothing is too much if it’s in the name of art, isn’t it? XD

    Also I’m not sure if that’s what you’re going for, but with the way the nails protrude from her feet now, he’ll have to be careful not to make her mad, you really wouldn’t want to be kicked in the nuts by her right now…

    I’m excited to see where this goes! :)
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    >>44513
    I wonder if she'll be able to be made into a milk cow. I guess he can at least try.

    I like what you're doing with this farming setting. It's fun and we don't often see lolis in bondage.
    To be a good horse, she'll need a tail I think. and maybe some other fun implements … ;-)

    I'll see if I can write the turducken idea for lit. I think it would fit the universe I'm imagining.
    It's kinda scary though, as that'll be my first full fledged story.
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    well if she won't make any milk then she probably she will be still good for meat :)
    I just think how one is supposed to milk her flat chest :)

    I have no plans for tail this time as you don't get too fancy just to plow a field but there may be more serious ponyplay later but this time she will get to ride it rather than being a horse herself :)
    so you can make some suggestion how it could look like
    I think if ponies woud look better without hands like from that artist on pixiv
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    One question for everyone is do you prefer when she asks for something to be done or teases him and he is not very willing to do it or when her brother initiates it himself?

    >>44553
    here is that other artist for inspiration:)
    https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/101030726

    I wonder how long is going to be that your full fledged story :)
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    >>44554
    well, even if the hands weren't removed, they'd need to be tied up so the pony can't do too much about being whipped… but removing them entirely is also a good option

    >>44555
    hmmm… both are good, to be honest. i really like how she seemingly gets herself into trouble just because she wants her brother to pay attention to her, like this time where she underestimated the pain from the nails. but if she ends up getting too much on his nerves, he could also take the initiative, gag her with a bit gag (i googled it, that's apparently what those are called) and whip her until she's ploughed the entire field and breaks down from exhaustion
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    This is brilliant, you could do pin up art or wallpapers if you wanted :D

    I hope the brother is careful when hammering the nails flat, blunt force impact on a toe can be quite a pain, I dropped something on my toe last week and I still can’t move it properly :P
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    trying to make use of all those pinup poses I have :)


    And I suspect now all engineers are suffering more than that girl when seeing latest pictures and painfully screaming "it would not work!" (as she at lest should be standing on some stone) But please endure the pain for sake of the aesthetic :)
    also I did not even intent it do be that painful Just bending nails to make then hold better and look better :)

    But yeah I think getting feet hit with something like that woud hurt many times more than getting nail driven through it:)
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    is it just me or is it kinda weird that the stuff i watch for entertainment is also very much the stuff of nightmares that you wouldn't wish upon your worst enemy? i wonder if the growing divide between me personally and my tastes in this regard is something to worry about :P

    deeper thoughts aside, now it's time to tie her to the plough and start whipping! have you decided yet wether to remove or imobilize her hands or just leave them as is? i think for this scenario, just tying them behind her back would probably work best, but maybe that's just me
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    >>44580
    Oh no, in this scenario hands will be left as is not even tied as she needs them :) that is for another time and another pony :) Just asking to see what you think about it.


    But so far I don't see it as something too nightmarish I even wonder how many people woud be willing to try such stuff for real if they were aware that it will be all fine eventually
    even in the groundhog day movie that main character mentioned that he tried dying in all ways possible killing himself ;)
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    >>44581
    the groundhog day scenario in general is quite interesting… depending on how much you remember, i think it'd probably be more realistic how it's depicted in ReZero where going through the pain of dying in different ways over and over again eventually leaves one psychologically broken. i mean, just look at how "easy" it is to get psychological damage that takes years of therapy to overcome from non lethal events, i doubt many humans could take dying multiple times like that….

    myself, i'm much too much of a scaredy cat, so i doubt i'd try things like that, no matter how long the groundhog day scenario lasts. i'd probably just be frustrated that whatever work you do will be gone the next day, so you'd never actually get anywhere… then again, if you retain memories, it may be worth practicing skills with that in mind, so that if you ever do get out of the loop, you'd basically have years of excersise under your belt XD
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    ok, now you're just showing off XD
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    Some more pinups as she is getting quite comfortable with those new shoes
    Not sure what even woud hurt more running on the cut grass barefoot or running with shoes like that :)

    >>44582
    In this scenario they retain everything, not only memories and if they dont die they even wake up normally next day (actually even dead bodies are left if not disposed properly as you could suspect from the story ;)
    So rather than practicing skills they are practicing different experiences.


    But when you know it it is not really that interesting so i don't want all characters to be aware of this mechanic immediately. When they die they remember what happened as a dream but they are not aware that it was not a dream.
    so only if they die lots of times they start noticing the pattern unless someone tells them or they observe it without dying and waking up next day to see that everyone is fine (but even then they are not fully aware that what happened on previous day is not a dream either) ;)
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    yes :) just have to use my library of poses somehow :)
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    Love what you did with them rusty ol' nails.
    I'm curious what you're gonna do with that whip.
    I guess them taters won't get planted at all, right?
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    here is the next part. and then it will be hard part with the whip (which is hard to make ;)
    she is teasing her brother a little
    >>44595
    I have an idea for the ending which I hope will be good, although maybe a bit too cute and wholesome for a guro story LOL
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    As I said: no taters planted here.
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    oh yeah, it's time to get cracking! get it? :P

    i'm excited to see what you've got planned for the ending. i don't think it'd really matter too much if the ending's "too cute" for guro, the story so far has more than justified the entire thing being guro and from a writing perspective, it's the ends that don't necessarily seem like they match the genre that often work best.

    however, please don't take this to mean that you should hurry up and get to the end, you can take all the time to get there, they can plough the field until sundown if you want XD
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    So finally time for the good part
    bute the end is near :)

    I think if posted separately from the rest it woud be liked by women here a lot and other NC lovers :)
    >>44605
    probably you will see the ending today.
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    Then i will curiously watch for it! And wonder what exactly the definition of today entails if you don’t know the other person’s time zone XD
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    So this is the end. (and some extra show of :)

    At first i was thinking about just making her fail completely and then just getting disposed like lame useless horse Like he should shoot her with a gun ?
    but I think seeing her walk with those horseshoes on her feet actually looks pretty good :) so it may be not the end after all.
    And I have an idea for upgrade ;)

    gradually everyone's pain tolerance get bigger with experience and they do more and more extreme stuff.

    >>44604
    I think at least one could be planted :)
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    ah, and meaning of today, is before you go to sleep :)
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    >>44636
    You did manage that, I’m still awake :P
    But then again, I would’ve probably stayed up late today if needed to see this, so I’m not sure if it counts XD

    I think the ending matches the overall story quite well, they are siblings after all, so even if she teases him a lot and he enjoys putting her in her place, they still get along in the end. Now I just hope that the end of the chapter doesn’t mean the end of the story and you continue with the next part soon :)
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    >>44635
    Although having her fail and then discarded like a useless tool would’ve also been quite nice… you could try making alternate endings to these stories… or if you branch the paths enough, maybe even a small interactive game one day like the RenPy ones. I’ve made a small one like that in unity last year, it’s quite fun :P
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    >>44638
    considering the setting of this universe alternate endings are not necessary as it can be just another story with that kind of ending.
    and going back is tricky as i do not save all scenes just make a picture and do next :)


    also since she is still alive and still completely useless and may be even more useless after upgrade we can keep the discarding option open :)

    you still may give ideas how that could happen as i even don't know if shooting is interesting maybe there will be some race or something or maybe better do something totally crazy :) which could be pretty funny too.
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    right, but there's usually more ideas for endings than time to make stories for them all, so alts are a way to get around that. if you don't save all scenes, that's probably a bit harder to do though :P

    there's lots of ideas how you could discard a useless horse… i don't know if that was international, but a few years ago there was this huge scandal when they discovered horse meat in lasagne… maybe he could make some lasagne next :P
    (if you do go down that road, some "insight" into the preparation process would also be fun, especially if she's alive for some of it)
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    you could put her out to stud or ban the harness and attach the plough directly too her, perhaps with a grappling hook inside…
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    >>44644
    You have interesting culinary tastes :)
    I am pretty curious how do you even think they cloud make lasagna at all. this woud require to do some meat grinding. and if we keep her alive also i wonder which part could be used for that.

    Since you mentioned scandal it looks like an idea that he doesn't know what is that lasagna made of :)
    but it does not look in any way related to her being a horse or being disposed :)

    One crazy idea which came to me from one person with whom I did some roleplay is to fill her with gasoline in the gas station :)


    >>44645
    I think it will be enough of that plough for other time it would be something like chariot
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    >>44646
    To be fair, that kind of thing is one of the things I most commonly draw, so I often gravitate towards it :P
    The lasagna was just one idea that happened to match with the “theme” of discarding horses due to the scandal, it’s not specifically the most involving idea probably… perhaps shooting is the better option after all XD
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    >>44646
    Fill her with gasoline as in an enema? Why gasoline specifically? To set her on fire afterwards? But then you’d probably just douse her in gasoline instead… it may even cause an explosion if you douse her in gasoline while she’s got a gasoline enema and then light her up. Might also not explode, I’m no physicist :P
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    >>44648 this was suggested during roleplay to me once from a girl who liked getting destroyed in various ways :)

    I think gasoline enema would have interesting effects like making her dizzy. I know that children sometimes sniff stuff like that using it as drugs :)
    But the logic woud be that if she is pulling chariot "gets out of gas" and needs a refill to continue LOL
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    I see, though I’m not entirely sure I grasp it’s potential. I don’t know if I ever touched gasoline, so I don’t know if she’d actually notice a difference between it and water from getting filled up. Unless they do it at an actual gas station, in which case however for me the main event would probably be her being naked in public and not her being filled with gasoline… Then again, maybe it’s another one of her own ideas and it turns out gasoline is actually painful and burns, who knows :P


    Got any plans yet as to when the next episode will be made? Or do you want to do something else first?
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    well actually diesel is not that different from water or cooking oil but I think gasoline woud hurt :)

    yes the main event woud be in the gas station and the main purpose is to do something with that gas station scene which I have more showing off around :) When I do stories, often they are based on the assets that I have and I try to make something interesting from what I have. I like to explore various creepy abandoned places but so far did not even managed to do anything with any of that :)

    For the next episode I think about doing a short hanging story.
    Not sure when it will be done but maybe even this week something will get posted
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    I shall look forward to it whenever you get around to making it :)
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    So am I. ;-)
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    Just few pictures to show what new story is about :)
    I woud ask you to guess where this episode should be chronologically but here I hope to explain what happened in the first episode that was posted and why she says that hanging is boring. As those two are not yet fully accustomed with dying and he is not yet aware that his sister will be so much into that kind of stuff as well.
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    Isn’t it quite common for those who get hanged to wet themselves? If so, then you should probably remove her trousers so they don’t get dirty :P

    So this will probably be a shorter chapter, right? Seeing as the noose is already around her neck… Well, though I think I have a general idea of where this is going, I’m excited to see it :)
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    Yes that's right, but it is easier to render wet trousers than stream of pee ;)
    It is quite obvious where it is going but as usual there may be some story twists :)
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    >>44686
    I'm soooo glad that you're still alive and kickin'.
    Everything you're posting here also gets posted in the 'Twilight Zone'.
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    and that, people, is exactly why you shouldn't drop someone when you hang them but rather pull them up with the rope :P

    though honestly i'm not certain that drop would be enough to actually snap anyone's neck, so in this case she probably should have been kicking for a while longer…

    is this chapter already over with this or will he still dispose of the body?


    and another thing i just thought of: since this groundhog day setting isn't resetting time, just the people and things like unknowingly eating your former body is possible, what would happen if you had a heart attack the moment the new day dawns, so that you "die" and come back to life the next day, but then your "corpse" is also revived in the hospital the next day, so there's now two of you walking around… and if that happens, is one of you now able to "die" normally or is there now always going to be two versions? in the latter case, you could theoretically "clone" yourself as often as you need and have all sorts of weird fun XD
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    You made a good observation :) Yes, she is not heavy enough to snap the neck like that.
    The chapter is not over, it is just like half of it :)


    speaking about cloning yourself I actually had idea even for that as science demonstration. If your both versions remain alive (and it may not be necessary even wait for next day sometimes) you will have yourself in 2 places at the same time sharing the same mind over both of them. your vision will be doubled too :) so in that situation you will be required to kill one of your clones or somehow disable them
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    So she’s possibly not dead yet? How would that work? I’m not sure you can “pretend” to be dead while actively suffocating, at that point reflexes and instincts should probably take over

    Why would your vision be doubled? You’re “just” duplicated, there shouldn’t be any telepathic image transmission features added, right? I’m not sure I follow :P
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    of course nobody could pretend in that situation but dying for real takes quite some time like 5-10 minutes if brain get no blood supply. so you will be half dead for some time :) of your neck artery gets squeezed you faint very quickly no kicking will happen while if you can't breathe that would be very agonizing death even for that girl :)

    But actually it is because it was so quick and painless she later claims that it is super boring. better do something more exciting like getting chopped into pieces :) a bit more painful but at least something to remember later LOL


    waking up after dying obviously would require some telepathic/teleportation features already let's call it "quantum entanglement" :)
    How else you can appear in the different place with all memories in the new body?
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    Next part but still not the end :)
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    >>44723
    Oh, so this is where you were going with this… i like it :)

    But now in stead of being the one to justly punish her, she now has a reason to punish him, doesn’t she? Good thing that noose is still here :P

    Although it’d also be fun if they both punished each other simultaneously by getting a second noose, that way they could also try to pick up where they left off just now while hanging, if you get where I’m going :P
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    hehe that is exactly where things are going
    although I have plan for the fate for that girl much worse and cruel than getting hanged ;) which is not even mentioned in any of guro stories.

    For now, I am not even fully sure how to present his punishment because she doesn't mind him to have sex with her and even would like doing it more she is not fully aware what happened as she was sort of dead at that time.
    On the other hand he is quite embarrassed doing this to his sister :)
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    Maybe she doesn’t mind, but he doesn’t know that, so she can still punish him for it :)
    Also now I am really curious what you’ve got planned for her that is so cruel and yet not in other guro stories. You’d think they’ve covered just about everything by now XD
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    Hope to see some ballbusting and cuntbusting between the two at some point, like in one of your first stories. Are they both immortal of some sort, or is it the location that's "magical"/time loop and resurrects her?
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    yep pretty serious ballbusting is going to happen.
    Cuntbusting maybe too.

    I think it is possible that they may repeat that first story to some extent sometime later when more characters will arrive :)

    It is the location where everyone is getting resurrected.
    Otherwise they are normal just very boring village where they don't have anything better to do :)
    consider it the more extreme version of this :)
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0A7Hg8vSsXI
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    >>44730
    I hope the punishment was at least somewhat believable LOL
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    ooho, i can't wait! i wonder what excuse she's going to use to go to town on his balls :P

    >>44748
    they both really don't struggle that long on the noose, do they? well, if he's still alive, he'll probably have quite an orgasm soon if the internet is to be believed XD

    she could maybe check if he's still alive with a small sample of the ballbusting she'll do later, that should do the trick…

    and also i think the punishment was quite believable, since he probably was curious how being hanged would feel anyways, so it's not like there's much of an issue there…

    btw, how did they figure out that they were in a groundhog day setting? to be honest, i really wouldn't know if i could revive upon death, since i've yet to actually die and don't plan on doing so any time soon XD
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    You will learn more and more about your beeing in a groundhog day setting by each revive.

    I would not be surprised if the kids were already some tens or hundreds years old.

    Oh wait, this can not be. They would certainly have discovered the joy of sex a long time ago, wouldn't they?
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    No they are not hundreds years old and this is like the first days of them being aware of that so they gradually do more and more extreme things. hanging was like the first thing they did :) and they did not get to the sex part yet as they still sort of feel embarrassed to do that or even talk about that.
    I think dying should regress your age a little every time so they will age slower than normal. I wonder how that woud work for old people is they die of old age one day then go back to life next day :)

    Also they are one of the first inhabitants of that place which is why they are so bored and have nothing better to do that kill and torture each other.


    >>44750
    yes he sort of was embarrassed quite a bit, and since dying is not that big deal he just went for it. But his sister also rather wanted him to continue having sex with her :)

    as for how they found out about this revival thing it should be that ether they suffered some accident where they died, or they were killed by someone same way as they killed Wendy which seems to be a custom in that village to teach newcomers how things work there because nobody woud believe it otherwise.
    If you get killed several times you probably will find out that you are not going to die. But it may be more or less traumatic experience depending on how it happens

    I did not decide yet how did it happen but I suspect that their neighbor who promised them meat for BBQ may be some serial killer cannibal ;)

    But later other people will come too with their own business plans
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