Ok, this was really stupid but also very hot LOL
sort of reminds me the series that I did including even some similarity in what happened, But I like this even more.
In some way characters doing stupid things sometimes feels mores sexy than proper story

I think adding text is impossible to that and it may even look better without it.

This looks completely finished wo we have to wait for what else you will show in the future :)

>>49355I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm somewhat familiar with your content and I like it too.
I don't know what kind of story it sounds like. My source is Tucker & Dale vs Evil and other similar movies.
I too think stupid acts are hot and sexy. Deadly stupidity, LOL.
The funniest part was peeing in the pool and diving in. Now that was a masterpiece.

My head canon on this one is a roleplay within a story. The three kids are bored with always being on the 'nice' list; so they figure the best present to get each other is to end up on the 'naughty' list.

The boy plays Santa, the dark haired girl is the elf, and the blonde plays a random girl.

The blonde has been 'naughty' and is punished by being made into a Christmas tree. The elf, in the process of helping Santa boy punish the blonde girl, gets a little 'naughty' with the blonde. So then Santa boy has to punish his naughty elf. Then realizing he was 'naughty' with the blonde too, Santa boy punishes himself.

My head canon on this one is a roleplay within a story. The three kids are bored with always being on the 'nice' list; so they figure the best present to get each other is to end up on the 'naughty' list.

The boy plays Santa, the dark haired girl is the elf, and the blonde plays a random girl.

The blonde has been 'naughty' and is punished by being made into a Christmas tree. The elf, in the process of helping Santa boy punish the blonde girl, gets a little 'naughty' with the blonde. So then Santa boy has to punish his naughty elf. Then realizing he was 'naughty' with the blonde too, Santa boy punishes himself.

>>49361
haha, lots of punishments in your fantasy LOL

I think they are more like playing and decorating Christmas tree

Later that girl with pigtails complains that boy's dick is too small to feel something and she wants something bigger :)



>>49321

Just now I think that maybe instead of trying to stab that start into her head she should have used a drill first

Okay. Libretto from the author. The girls are alone on the Eve of the holiday. A boy sneaks up on them. He is unmasked. A dark-haired girl suggests a dress-up game. The blonde girl lacks clothes for cosplay and is offered to dress up as a Christmas tree. After the tree is fully decorated, the boy notices that the blonde-haired girl will no longer play with him. The dark-haired girl offers to play with her. What follows is a discussion about size. It ends in trouble for the dark-haired girl. The boy is sad and lonely. And he doesn't need his own toy. The End.

>>49364
I hadn't thought about the drill. More tools could really be added to the story.

I'll probably make the drill the main tool in some story. Right now I'm thinking of doing a story with a garden hose. Either way, it's gonna be deadly stupid.

I decided to give them names. Polly became the basic blonde model. For the dark-haired girl, Anya. And for the boy, Marcus and Walter. Or does anyone want any other names?

>>49371
when I noticed that she is going to put star on her head first thought was that it will shatter into pieces as it is no way that fragile thing could be stabbed into her head
And it was still sort of hard to get if it is just placed on top or it is hammered into her because there is no blood on her face or anything.

>>49370
So I got it almost right

>>49372
You may also consider using hammer and nails if that fits somewhere.
although probably this is already getting overused LOL

>>49374
It was a holiday story. And I wanted to avoid blood wherever possible. So just a little saliva. LOL.

Oh, that's lovely! Love seeing kids casually killing themselves / each other just for fun.
Although for my headcanon I would get rid of the sad and lonely parts, because admitting that death leads to sadness and loneliness defeats the point of casual guro for me. So let's say instead of "he realized the blonde won't play with him anymore" it's "they finished decorating the tree, so proceeded to the next game", and instead of "he was sad and lonely at the end" it's "he found a better toy in form of the broom, so he doesn't need this now" (but there's no sadness for missing the girl, he's happy he could satisfy her so well with the broom).

>>49373
Oh, you got great names for girls and it fits their character I will steal them for my stories. because all good girls names end with -y and and you brought up that it can by -ya too
As for the boy your names look good, but I would suggest Oliver which can be shortened to Ollie when they talk to each other. or your names can't be changed to sound more cute.

>>49376
Does that suggests that you dislike blood in general?

>>49412
Blood is a secondary factor. I'm more interested in stuffing and metamorphosis. My inspiration: Roald Dahl and his Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Lewis Carroll and his Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry and his Le Petit Prince. Hans Christian Andersen the way he really wrote. Naive tales of death. The main characters are children, but the tales are not children's tales.

any more work from him