Everything nice but facial expression are awkward or nonexistent
Probably you just need some good expression package and I would recommend Aiko expressions
www.nulled9.com/aiko-7-expressive-download/
they are quite exaggerated and funny

also you probably need
www.daz3d.com/mannequin-for-genesis-3-female
Maybe harder to find it to download so if you will need it I will help
which allows you to do amputations with only problem that you need to apply your own textures to the stumps or else they vill be white

finally you need to give more attention to angles and poses, because when you change camera position facial expression also changes considerably

I hope in future you will improve and make even more pictures.
there are lot more technologies you can use and make much more interesting stuff.

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Here is a Discord board where you can reach even more people and get more critiques.

No critique just my thanks for your excellent contribution. I like the fully consensual multi frame back story, ripe for captions or with included captions. The themes don't vary that much just the activities leading to the consensual, even participating, erotic demise to the pleasure of both parties; MF, FM, FF, even MFFF, FFFF, but no MM (sorry, to each their own). Keep it up...

welcome! sweet decap ^_^ Keep up the practice :)

Thanks everyone! I've got more art to upload but for whatever reason I'm struggling to get it to work. Suggestions?

>>9795
Do you have problem to upload your art?

I wonder what didi you made and how much better it is.

Yeah when I try to upload new renders i just get an empty post.

>>9828
Most likely file size is too big, what is common for 3d renders . I had that problem too

you need to make files smaller preferably below 1megabyte

>>9828
It's most likely the resolution and not the size. Try to upload only pictures in 1920×1080 or lower format.

I think we need explanation why she is shooting arrows into the dead body?

Because why not? lol :P I'm still learning how to make 3D art and this is just a dumping ground for renders I don't hate at the moment. No stories or anything like that. I DO plan do perhaps do a long running series based on a book I've been writing if I manage to learn a bit about blood, gore, lighting and post effects.

>>9931
Because we assume that pictures have so meaning and I spend considerable amount of time thinking on what exactly is going on there. and what author had in mind while making it.

I'm not arguing that story is necessary for such scenes. All I'm saying is I'm not at that point yet ;)

>>9917
Just sad none one those struck her bare cunt

Looking great! What software do you use and where do you get the models from?

those renders are pretty fucking good!