>>20167
i've never really gotten a whip to work well, the only thing i can think to try is having a character holding it in the starting image

>>20126
I was gonna end this one a different way but i've never been able to get a good prompt for someone getting run over. the train just rams into her and stops, i think i need to get the pov off the tracks and over to the side or something. i tried to work out a prompt but after a couple of failures i went with the exploding gas can idea. anyway one of the train ones looked kinda neat.