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Lots of things I liked about it, especially the bouncing butt, and I’ll skip the things I disliked, since I’m not really the target audience. If you’re willing to add two more two-second scenes, here’s what I’d suggest.

As she’s climbing up and turning to “face the wall” (and therefore before all of the spanking), Miss Thorne places a camera on a desk, aimed up at the girl on the stool, and switches it on. (2 seconds max)

Later, the mother picks up that camera, switches it off, pockets it, and smiles, saying “I know some guys who are going to love this.” The girl is appalled when she understands and remembers what’s on that video for guys to watch… and love.