>>4209
Ok criticism.
You got a bit lazy or hasty. if you look at first image its line-art is more round and detailed ignoring the 2nd image and going to 3 the quantity of details remain the same but the details them-self are a bit hmm... lower quality? Its hard to explain its like you wished to make very detailed image but got hasty with the finish.
There is not much i can point out. But for sure you should clean up the lineart a bit the not erased lines stand out in the 1st image.
But its all a bit pushed criticism your art look quit good. Maybe its just your style. :)