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Ah new stuff! good job OP.

It's definitely lacking a few bits, but i think you're on the right track.

Just ignore the haters and the busy bodies. They probably are too high up there, wondering the meaning of things and the standards.

As for the latest one though... it's a bit dark?
The style feels closer to the schlussel/goeniko ones...

I'd suggest a series of continuous subjects OP, and tie up the effects together...