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First frame done, and noow entirely burned out, the sheer numbers of layers is going to make it… interesting, to make future frames. Something I really couldn’t do with commissions on my queche I’d have to give up after this frame. Trying to figure out what to have them saying is also a pretty daunting task, for four word balloon’s I spent a bunch of time trying to figure out where to position them and so on.

Little back history for the scene, the idea is, the reason for Raven’s large breasts there, is that cyborg talked her into letting him use her as a subject for breast enhancement. She of course assumed it was for cosmetic reasons to sell, but later in the lab she idly picked up the helmet figuring it was part of the thing, and put it on not realizing what it was. Cyborg freaked out and explained that it was actually to convert volunteer women into cows, reducing them to a level where they wouldn’t really register the boredom of being a cow and could be sold to be milked. Raven of course going wide eyed, and then realizing the breasts were part of that. Kinda turned on by it, she decides to volunteer, arguing that “its one thing to do it to random women…”
So this is her finally testing it out for him. Figured she let Beastboy know since she figured he’d “want to see” and its not like she’d going to care about the audience for very long.

I figure since this is a prototype I might do an afterword that this failed in some way (something for erased too much) like the farmer stating he has some difficulty getting her to figure out some task (or maybe hoped to use them as well on a farm, but she’s now too dumb.) Basically shes now been reduced to an intellect where she’d dumber then a cow and only good for milking.

Other details: Raven has an abnormally high IQ. 100 is baseline, 130 is “high.”
Trying to do the computer screen was a pain ,trying to figure out what she’d need even a little to function and what would be “deleted” as unnecessary.

Lots of warnings, its kinda hidden but the thing shes standing on even has danger, and the background the areas taped off. Just like with a x-ray, their taking precautions to not cause exposure to the device to others. To get on she basically had to know what she was in for and except the risk.

Her pose is supposed to be for pre-test testing to make sure she still is viable as a cow. Neither her or cyborg know how much she will retain if there’s an error, so they want to make sure she can still be milked, as a basic need of the product, movement and order following are secondary. Also figure a cool down off the thing might make her a bit more dim right out off the bat, so an hours milking test might be used to let her recuperate.
Undecided fully what type of “deletion” the thing uses. I figured i’d leave it to imagination, but I figured the liquids a radioactive substance used for x-rayish laser/energy thing as well as some electricity shown in the second frame sketch, like the usual mind rays in comics. Its up to the viewer how much is done to her other then that the parts of her brain exposed will no longer work and are irreversible, and the process being highly dangerous and requiring testing.
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