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Raven brain drained 4

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So. Much. Work. I’ll look over these again later and make sure in my tired and sick state that my dsylexia didn’t kick into over drive :P but looked over the text a bunch of times already. Usually still miss a word heh ^^:. Probably look over the art aspect as well again, but hopefully it all worked out. I just didn’t want this to sit too much longer. Much less with the possibility of doing additions I wanted the base “middle” of the idea down so I wouldn’t need to worry about writing outside of the “canon.”

For story purposes, the intention of the device is its using radiation to burn the cells in her brain out, but basically making them unusable, not so much killing them. The data contained in the cells is ruined, and the ability to reconnect to the rest of the cells via neural pathways is disabled, BUT it leaves the brain still alive, but the cells will never recover that were deleted. Sci-fi very much. Its also emitting a large amount of heat for that, so by the end, she’s basically got her brain over heated and needing to cool down, which is why by the end she’s “really out of it.” A scene I may draw later would mention shes in the odd downward pose there cause she was unlikely to be able to do things for a short period after, so it made doing the testing easier to pre set her up. Had intended to do a little more edits to the pose as I went (with the last frame having her arm up, but fatigue set in, especially as I got sick (dealing with my fourth week of insomnia on top of everything so I am burnt out.)
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