Well yeah many people here love incest, including myself and your your too so they are trying to get them close.If you can squeze some in it's ok, if not is good also because i like your natural flow.Bte, rules are meant to be broken no? ;)
As for a quick review, what you did here is fantastic.I think it's the first and only one(i think) guro picture story.and it has so many fetishes its a sure win.Just a thought in the future make the sex part a bit longer.Can't say more about the rest, other than great!