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>>19607
You Ask for feedback so here i go.

I love the closeups and poses, most of your faces is quite good. Especially on closeups but there is one thing i alweys wish was better and what is kind'a boner-killer - Breasts - this the only things that alweys look at best "meh" on your drawings. They are alweys almost perfectly round, in the middle of the chest pointing forward and sometimes stick out so hard that you may think they are made of solid stone.
There are many tutorials online on how to draw boobs and nipples and i think you should at lest look at few simple tips like this https://tinyurl.com/y8z2ctax
As for the nipples themself i think you should try to at least color in the aureolas (like you for example did here >>14600 ) if you leave them just as simple circles that look very bad.

And just as a personal opinion I also think that you should try drawing more variety of bodies - be it tomboys, lolitas or a bit chubby girls or simple experiment with difrent sizes of waist, butts and shoulders.
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