(I am not sure if this is the right place, but /req seemed like the wrong choice).

I am about to finish a new story, and I would like a little help proof reading it. If anyone would like to help, the tags are M/f, MMM+/f, F/f, cons, first, anal, throating, bukkake, lesbian, impalement, snuff.

I am interested in knowing what you think to see if I can change something to improve it. Keep in mind that this time its not one of the dark stories I usually write (note the consensual tag).

If you want to help, let me know and we can get in touch.