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>>24578
>>24578

You have done a pretty impressive job. Let me correct some minor mistakes. I kept the correct parts as they were.

ไฟบๆง˜ใฎใƒ€ใƒณใ‚ธใƒงใƒณใซไพตไบบใ—ใฆๆฅใŸๅฅณๆˆฆๅฃซ...
I came upon a female warrior intruding in my dungeon one day.

ใ“ใ„ใคใ€ๅค–่ฆ‹ใ ใ‘ใงไฟบๆง˜ใฎใ“ใจใ‚’้›‘้ญšใƒขใƒณใ‚นใ‚ฟใƒผใ ใจๅ‹˜้•ใ„ใ—ใฆใ‚„ใŒใ‚‹.
She looked at me like I was some small fry monster- she was sorely mistaken.

ใ“ใ†ใ„ใ†ๅ‹˜้•ใ„ๅฅณใซใฏ (LV99) ใฎ ไฟบๆง˜ใŒใŠไป•็ฝฎใใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ‚ใ’ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒๆœ‰ใ‚Šใ†ใใ ใช.
It's a matter of course for a level 99 like myself to punish such a foolish girl.

"ใชใ‚“ใ ้›‘้ญšใ‹...ใ•,ใ•ใจ็‰‡ใฅใ‘ใฆๅธฐใ†ใ›ใฆใ‚‚ใ†ใ†ใจใ™ใ‚‹ใ‹."
"What's this, some small fry...? Well then, I'll have no trouble disposing of you."


2.

ใพใšใฏ่ปฝใ้€šๅธธๆ”ปๆ’ƒใ‚’1็™บ๏ผ
Let's start with one light common attack, first.


3.

ใ™ใฃใ‹ใ‚Š่ˆใ‚ใฆๆŽ›ใ‹ใฃใŸ็›ธๆ‰‹ใŒใพใ•ใ‹่‡ชๅˆ†ใ‚ˆใ‚Šๅœงๅ€’็š„ใซใ„ใจใฏๆ€ใ„ใ‚‚ๅฏ„ใ‚‰ใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‚ˆใ†ใ ใช
It seems it never occurred to her to that she might come across a being overwhelmingly more powerful than herself.

"ใˆ? ใˆ?!"
"Huh? Huh?!"

"ใ‘...ๅ‰ฃๆ‹พใ‚Œใชใ[?]... ใ‚ใ‚Œ...? ็งใฎ่…•? ใ‚ใ‚Œ...!?"
"My... My sword fell... What...? My arms? What...!?"


4.

ไฟบๆง˜ใซๅ‡บไผšใ‚ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใใ‚Œใชใ‚Šใฎๆˆฆๅฃซใซใชใ‚ŒใŸใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใ‚“ใŒ...
She might have become a halfway decent warrior if we did not meet.

ไธก่…•ใ‚’ๅคฑใฃใŸ้”็ฃจใฎใพใพ็”Ÿใ‹ใ—ใฆใŠใใฎใ‚‚ๅ“€ใ‚Œใ ใชใ€‚ ๆญขใ‚ใ‚’ๅˆบใ—ใฆใ‚„ใ‚‹ใ†.
It would be pathetic to leave an armless daruma alive like that. I'll go ahead and put an end to this.

"ใ„[?]...ใŸ...ๅŠฉใ‘...ใŸใ™...ใ‚ฒใƒ„"
"It... It hurts... Help... Hel-- PAAH"


5.
ๅ‹‡ใพใ—ใ„ๅฅณๆˆฆๅฃซใ‚‚ใ“ใ†ใชใ‚‹ใจ็„กๆง˜ใชใƒขใƒŽใ ใช...
The brave warrior girl's death ended up being pretty unsightly.

ใ‚ดใƒ–ใƒชใƒณใ‚ˆใ‚Š่‡ญใ„็ณžๅฐฟใ‚’้‡ใ‚Œๆตใ—ใฆใ‚„ใŒใ‚‹.
Her piss and shit smell worse than a goblin too.

ใ„ใ„่…ฟ่‚‰ใ ใ€‚ใ—ใฃใ‹ใ‚Šๆด—ๆต„ใ—ใฆใ‹ใ‚‰็พŽๅ‘ณใ—ใ้ ‚ใใจใ—ใ‚ˆใ†.
That's some good thigh meat though. It'll make quite a delicacy, after some thorough cleaning at least.
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