>>133431
I don't see what the point of editing it was, I think the average western reader can understand Page 01, Page 02, Page 03 etc while reading pages from right to left.

You altered a lot of the original art and I think most peeps would rather just have it close to the original.

(Original translated version without major edits)

https://www.mediafire.com/file/vs4e10edrtgw5jw/Applicant+for+Death.zip/file