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At first I wanted to make it a simple beheading, with maybe some text about Rin taking a handful of pressure raising pills so that the blood spurting from her neck would be more spectacular.

But then I wanted to add some start to the wink and the ones I've found happened to have more than I imagined, and it made me want to put something into the biggest star. I was thinking of different options, like Rin's head made into a trophy, or a funeral photo of Rin, until I arrived at the idea of putting her angelic form in there.

Then I noticed how the little blood splattered on the background looks a bit like falling cherry blossoms, so I've added those too.

And not that it all looked so poetic I had no choice but to write a tanka. Just how grammatical mistakes it ended up having I have no idea. Probably as many as can possibly fit into five lines.

Oh, and it reads:

massakari
hanachiri kirei
ningen mo
kodomo no mama de
shineba saikou

meaning

In full bloom
Falling flowers are beautiful
People too
While they are still children
If they die it's the best
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Board Gore & Death
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