The first one is so hot omg.
I LOVE girls damaging their exposed brain 🧠

>>133431
I don't see what the point of editing it was, I think the average western reader can understand Page 01, Page 02, Page 03 etc while reading pages from right to left.

You altered a lot of the original art and I think most peeps would rather just have it close to the original.

(Original translated version without major edits)

https://www.mediafire.com/file/vs4e10edrtgw5jw/Applicant+for+Death.zip/file

Hi Nikki. Yes the original appeals to some or most. This is my edit. I don't like reading right to left. Sort of like driving in a foreign country where they drive on the 'wrong' side of the road and I can't adjust. I also don't like the massive black characters covering parts of the picture, not sure what they are - possibly sound effects like western comics? 'Bam' 'Zap' and the old time favourite for a machine gun 'Rata-tata-tata'.

And that's why I edit and flip.

>>133483
Well, you do you doll. Just remember some other readers prefer it the way I mentioned.

It's a rare hentai manga now (to the point someone got ransomware trying to find it) so it's best to allow choices. <3

thank you for posting the original

original

original

end of original images

I like left to right better

Oh wow!! Did this get re-translated, or is the new dialog new? Some of the text is very different! It is so nice to see it not censored though!

Looks like some minor alterations in
the text. Maybe different translation
to keep story intact? Edit mostly
to read Western direction and smooth
the pictures.

>>134039
Some of the pages above almost like the opposite meaning. Like, the whole scene where the girl beheads her brother she was originally sad to learn that he was the one on her work list for the day, but this edit she wakes him up and is all excited for him. He originally has a line like "I'm sorry sis. By the time you get home I'll be dead." and here it's "Almost time. Today I am going to die... It makes me so horny!" So, which is more accurate to the original japanese?

I like the edits. It was fun to read through, and I love that it's been decensored. I'm just really curious which is more faithful to what's actually being said in the original and I can't translate japanese almost at all. Machine translation only takes you so far...

A problem translating Japanese is that the Kanji characters may have a different meaning depending on the context/subject they describe The girl who is told to kill her brother works for 'boss' but the character can mean boss, teacher, director so it's hard to guess which to use.

>>134073
Don't obsess so much, use your imagination to fill in the gaps. Just from the pics alone you can tell she gets horny thinking about wanting her brain blown out, what's it matter what variation of moonspeak she's jabbering?

Translations can be difficult. I speak Dalmation, Schnauzer and German Shepherd. Did you know that 'Wuuf wuuf, bark, grrr' in French Poodle means 'Good Morning' but it translates to 'I'm your bitch, fuck me hard, in German Shepherd.

>>134073

> Like, the whole scene where the girl beheads her brother she was originally sad to learn that he was the one on her work list for the day, but this edit she wakes him up and is all excited for him.

The right-to-left translation is a little off, but the left-to-right one is just a rewrite at that point.

Here's what they actually say on that page as far as I could translate from the Japanese original:

***

Sister: Sora, if you don't get up soon, you'll be late.

Sister: Huh? What's the matter?

Sora: Nothing...

Sister: Turn this way a little.

Sister: Looks like you don't have a fever.

Sister: I have morning practice, so I'll go first.

Sister: Meal is prepared, so make sure to properly eat.

***

So, at this point the sister has no clue that the brother is planning to die today, she's just waking him up for school as usual. She's leaving first for "morning practice", my guess is in kendo, which would fit her handling the sword. It might even be that this "morning practice" is also her cover for her job for Sensei, where she's then surprised to learn that her brother will be today's client. Though that's pure speculation, and it might just be that the morning practice is honestly a kendo practice, and the job comes later in the day, like after school.

Anyway, there's no mention of Sensei coming to their place. So the scene where Sora and Sister meet again is not a direct continuation of her waking him up, it happens later in the day and at a different place. It looks like the place has cracks in walls, same as could be seen in Yayoi's part of the story, so probably the same place and not anyone's home. It's reasonable to assume Sensei has a dedicated place for this job.

Since I'm at it, I've spent the evening checking the translation of the Guillotine Masturbation part. Disclaimer: I've never formally studied Japanese, just watched a lot of anime so that I have enough feel for it to see where Google Translate is off.

The right-to-left translation seems mostly correct, but there are some inaccuracies and liberties.

Main errors of the existing translation:

- Akira doesn't ask "Do you have any doubts", he asks "Are you still conscious?" So there's no implication of any sort of doubt.
- Akira doesn't say anything about "Great present", he says "It was the BEST feeling..." So there's no implication of it being sister's present to him.

Here's my whole translation (rough draft in term of phrasing, but meaning should be accurate):

気持ちいい？お姉ちゃん
Does it feel good, Onee-chan?

い．．．いいよもうイきそう．．．あっ
G...good! I'm about to come... Ah

お願いアキラ言ったとおりしてね
Please, Akira, do as I told you.

うんわかってる
Yeah, I know.

あ．．．．．．あひっ．．
Ah... Ahh...

いっ！！ いくーっ！！
Co... coming!

***

あ．．．．．ああ．．．
Ah... A-ah...

あたし．．．．．．斬首されてる．．すごい
I... I've been beheaded... Wow

お姉ちゃん．．．まだ意識ある？
Onee-chan... are you still conscious?

***

ほらお姉ちゃん見て
Here, Onee-chan, look!

すごい．．．あたしの体．．．
Wow... my body...

あたしのまんこ．．．
My pussy...

まだヒクヒクしてる．．．
It's still twitching...

なめてみたい
I want to lick it

お願いアキラはやく
Please Akira, hurry up

ん．．．ちょっとしょっぱい
Hmm... It's a little salty.

これがあたしのまんこの味なのね
So this is what my pussy tastes like.

***

ああ．．．だんだん気が遠くなってきた
Ahh... I'm starting to gradually lose consciousness.

アキラ！最後にアキラのをしてあげたい
Akira! At the end I want to do you.

僕のをしてくれるの？
Will you do me?

お姉ちゃん．．．．．．
Onee-chan...

すごい．．．！！アキラのおちんちんはちきれそう．．．
Wow...!! Akira's dick looks like it's about to burst...

あう．．．お姉ちゃん！！
Ow... Onee-chan!!

出ちゃう．．．！！
It's coming out...!!

アキラ．．．あとはアキラの好きなように．．．して．．．．
Akira... From here on, do as you... please...

***

ありがとう．．．．．．
Thank you...

お姉ちゃん．．．
Onee-chan...

ここで見てて．．
Watch from here...

いいよねお姉ちゃんセックスしても
It's okay to have sex too, right, Onee-chan?
(literally: "even to have sex")

お姉ちゃんのおまんこ．．．まだあったかい
Onee-chan's pussy... still warm

***

気持ちいいよぉお姉ちゃん！！
It feels so good, Onee-chan!!

もっと
More...

もっと前へ．．．．．．
More forward...

(I'm not sure about the exact meaning of forward here or how to better say it in English, DeepSeek says he's asking her to push her hips more forward (so towards him? as in fuck back?), even if I explain to it the story and situation of her being dead and unable to do that, it still says that's what he must mean in the heat of the moment)

***

あっいいっ
Ah... good...

お姉さん僕もお姉ちゃんといっしょに．．．．．．
Onee-chan, I too together with Onee-chan...

もうだめお姉ちゃん
I can't anymore, big sister

僕出ちゃう！！
I'm coming!

いっ！！
Co... (cut-off coming)

***

いぐっ！！
Gum—!! (distorted and cut-off "cumming")
(his neck is being cut off, so c becomes g)

ああ．．．．．．
Aah......

こんな感じなんだ．．．．．．
So this is what it feels like...

Sfx: ぼふっ
*poof*

***

サイコーに気持ちよかったよ．．．
It was the BEST feeling... (deliberate emphasis on the word "best")

おねえ．．．．．．ちゃ．．．．．．ん
Onee-... cha-... n...

>>134484
This might be a silly question, but where did you find the Japanese original?
I'm studying Japanese and I want to be able to read the original Japanese version of the doujin but I can only find English, Italian and Chinese translations.

What I find confusing is boy is watching computer and told that they know him and what he wants, but doesn't really explain that his sister is working for the "boss" executor or why he doesn't know what his sister job is. There could be more explanation from the original. Might be the left to right is trying to explain what's happening. I do not read Japanese.

Could we be obsessing too much about this? Just enjoy what is there.

>>134511

Does Sad Panda say anything to you?
If not, another option is nhentai dot net
>>134513

Well, obviously Sora doesn't know about his sister's job beforehand, because she's hiding it, which she does because it's illegal.

As for why Sensei didn't mention his sister in the video... well, what point would it serve? So that they could talk about it beforehand? Would it necessarily be a good thing (for Sensei)? As they might end up talking each other out if it. Even as it was, sister tried to talk Sora out of it, but since they were already both excited in the heat of the moment they ended up going along. But it could've been different if they were given plenty of time to ponder and discuss it in the comfort of their home.

Besides, we know Sensei expects Sora to apply for death, but we don't know if she knows the exact method of death he would request. And if she doesn't then for her there's no point to introduce his sister as her assistant at this point, when for all she knows the said assistant might not even end up being involved.

And the out-of-story reason is that having it be as it is makes a better and hotter story flow with sister's involvement being a surprise like this. If sister's involvement would be revealed in the video, before we even meet her in the story, it wouldn't hit as hard, because to us she'd be just a new random character being introduced. The way it is, she's introduced as Sora's caring older sister, and the whole exchange where she cluelessly checks in on him while he's secretly masturbating to his upcoming death is hot. And then the surprise reveal of her being Sensei's assistant is hot because we didn't expect the same caring older sister to also be a beheader, and it's hot that she's gonna behead the little brother she was just shown to care about. This dynamic wouldn't have worked if she was introduced as a beheader right away.

>>134536
I ended up finding it on Sad panda, i had looked before but I didn't think to look in Japanese.

>>134484
I read the japanese version and I do believe she is heading to kendo practice in that panel. since she is said to be the leader of the school sensei works at's kendo club, I don't think it would make much sense for her to be working all day long unless they killed sora first thing in the morning.

>>134540
Yes, when I said kendo could be a cover for the job, I meant they kill Sora first thing in the morning. I agree that it sounds more reasonable to assume they do it after school, it's just that for all we know we can't 100% exclude the morning option. Either way that doesn't really matter.

Wirklich?

>>134553
...I kinda wanna read the rest of the cheese story

Sorry about that, chief.

For you youngsters, Rosebud is a sled from the 1941 movie "Citizen Kane" by Orson Welles.

>>134608

Spoilers dude

That first one is literally exactly how I want to die. I saw the JFK death footage in high school and it fucked me up in a similar way. That was pretty much the start of it. I've never felt so seen in my life.

>>134553
🤣

>>134193
Ah! This is true! I studied Japanese for a while many years ago (didn't keep up on it though) and I remember Kanji being a hell of a thing. Like, it could make interesting jokes or puns because you'd verbally say something very ambiguous, but the Kanji would make it clear what you said. Wish I could remember an example.

>>134194
>>134514
This is not obsessing (for me anyway) this is fun. Japanese is a *very* different language from English and subtly and nuance are often lost. I love finding out what didn't make it through translation. It can make a story so much more enjoyable.

>>134484
Oh!! Thank you! It's nearly identical, but the minor changes make sense.

>>134500
Thank you so much! Guillotine Masturbation is my favorite and I tried to take a crack at translating the Japanese Original too.

Fuck, I was only translating the page where Onee-chan dies and it was tough! I wish I had kept up on the practice after learning what I did in school. 😭

The "do as you... please..." was really difficult. I got fragments of that. I got just enough out of my translation to know that "Do what you want" was not exactly wrong, but it was a bit off. I got out something like "Akira... do as Akira pleases/desires" or something rough like that.

Because I'm so horrendously out of practice I was using a mix of Jisho.org, Deepl.com, and some japanese alphabet references.

Speaking of which:
Deepl says that もっと前へ... means "Go back further" which doesn't make any sense. Jisho.org says that the kanji 前 means "in front" or "before" with "forward" being a specific noun meaning. My best guess is that Akira is saying "More... More before..." which makes sense to me since he next says "I can't anymore, big sister", cums, then cuts off his head. Like, he's holding back his orgasm as much as he can to enjoy fucking her body, then hits his limit.

>>134511
You can read it on exhentai.org. You have to have an e-hentai.org account and be signed into it. Each time you sign into e-hentai you have to wait a minute or two before you attempt to visit exhentai or you will see the "sad panda" image instead of the site.

>>134742
> Thank you so much!
You're welcome!

> The "do as you... please..." was really difficult. I got fragments of that. I got just enough out of my translation to know that "Do what you want" was not exactly wrong, but it was a bit off.
Well, literally word-for-word it'd be something like "do how Akira likes", and at that point the translation from Japanese is done and translation into English begins: whether you choose to translate it as "do what you want" or "do as you please" is a question more about English than it is about Japanese. And English isn't my native tongue either. That's why I said my translation is a rough draft in terms of phrasing: I focused on deciphering the translating from Japanese part, rather than the translating into English part.

> Because I'm so horrendously out of practice I was using a mix of Jisho.org, Deepl.com, and some japanese alphabet references.
I used a software called Poricom for OCR, then pasted the text into google translate. But sometimes OCR goes wrong, so have to double check it, and sometimes google translate is off, so have to double check that too. But it's easier to double check after the computer than doing all the work from scratch. Even when google translate doesn't translate well, it spells out the pronunciation, and having the sentence mentally vocalized helps my brain to actually parse it much better than staring at unfamiliar kanji (which are most of the kanji for me). Even when I don't know half the words, having the sentence spelt out in a way I can read it puts those words into the grammatical structure of the sentence for me. Then I can find the individual words in a dictionary and fit it all together. LLMs are also helpful, as they can catch context and nuance that simple google translate doesn't.

> My best guess is that Akira is saying "More... More before..."
You mean like "more, before it's over"?
What happened to へ?
へ denotes a direction, so it'd be "towards the before", which wouldn't make sense in the context of "before it's over".
If you want to say "before something", you say "something の前に". And I don't think you can drop the something here, at best replace it with a pronoun (その前に - "before that").

Earlier I asked DeepSeek in two separate chats, in one just saying it's a sex scene, in the other explaining the whole beheading scenario, and it said both times that he's asking her to move her hips more forward, and why he's asking her even though she's dead is because he's caught in the heat of the moment.

Let me try one more idea... here, I asked it in a yet another chat about the meaning of that phrase if a guy is fucking a sex-doll that can't move or react to commands. It then says the guy talking in general can be one of the two:
1. He's instinctively talking to her as if she's alive. Basically, the same option it gave me before. To think of it, he does talk explicitly to her earlier when asking for permission, and in the last couple of pages he addresses her as well. I then asked if this was the case, what the command would mean, and he says to move her hips forwards towards him (so the same again).
2. He's thinking aloud, verbalizing his own actions. The action then can be either how he leans forward over her, or pushing his dick more forward inside of her. He does lean forward over her on the next page, doesn't he? On the other hand, the very next frame after him saying this is a close-up of his dick entering her pussy, so that option sounds plausible too, and probably even sounds more like something you'd verbalize in the heat of the action rather than just leaning forward.

I think the best thing here would be to study a collection of manga sex scenes featuring a similar phrase, but it's not like exhentai has a search in the full text of the mangas, so ...

>>134746
>>134742

Oh, almost forgot. Yarxi, a Japanese-to-Russian diectionary also gives "genitals" as one of the meanings of 前, although it's greyed out. I asked DeepSeek again, and it says that it is indeed used like that in Japanese slang, specifically for female genitals. But as I asked if it can be the meaning in the もっと前へ phrase in the context of this sex scene (leaving out the girl being dead detail this time), like about going deeper into the vagina, it said no, he's already inside, so moving "towards" the vagina makes no sense. And the meaning of moving her hips forwards towards them is more likely. It even writes a conclusion like this:

> In the context of him holding her leg up and pumping, this is classic Japanese erotic dirty talk for "Angle your hips up more towards me / push your hips forward" so that he can rub against that front wall. It is about adjusting the angle to hit a better spot, not about physically going deeper into the vaginal canal.

Well, I've noticed AIs have a tendency to call everything "ah, that's classic X", so dunno how trustworthy it is, but it is what it is.

So I've checked the Yayoi's part of the story.

The old translation is pretty good, I'm probably being too nitpicky here, but here is the list of differences:

Differences:

1. I can only be satisfied if I feel my brain burst apart -> As long as I can enjoy the moment my brain gets blown away, it's fine (she's saying she's okay if Sensei's methods to keep her conscious for longer don't work, as long as she gets to enjoy the blast itself it's enough for her)

2. Even a bullet can't break it -> It's made so that it won't shatter too much even if hit by a bullet. (It does shatter a little bit as we see on a further page)

3. By brain feels so soft, it's coming out (and so on) -> 'y bwain ish sho... it's co'ing ou' (she's having trouble speaking)

4. I'm wetting the floor -> Pee ish co'ing ou' (she's not worried about the floor)

5. I'll make you feel better -> (not exactly a mistake, but I'd phrase it like:) I'll make you feel even better

6. Bwain and pussy feel good (why did she start saying bwain only now?) -> Bwain and pusshy both fee' goo' ("both" is the difference)

7. (after "I can't take it anymore") Brain... coming out... (where did bwain go again?) -> Bwain... co'ing (here the word is cumming, not coming out)

8. Can I have an orgasm while touching my brain? -> 'ay I cum wish 'y bwain?! (she's not just cumming at the same time as touching her brain, she's cumming from it, brain is the instrument of cumming, also the word touching isn't really there)

9. Apply for death. Just have fun dying as someone special. -> People who, yearning for death, want to experience a specific death.

10. We are looking for talent like that -> We are looking for people like that (she's not calling yearning for death a talent)

11. Waiting for your call -> Waiting for your reply. (doesn't specify it must be a phone call)

***
And here's my whole translation draft:

003

Title: 他殺志願
Applicant for Death

奥村やよいです
This is Yayoi Okumura.

これから死にます
I'm going to die now.
004

やよいちゃんの希望は銃で頭を撃ち抜かれて死にたいだったわね
Yayoi's wish was to be shot in the head and die, right?

どうしてそんな死に方がしたいの？
Why do you want this method of death?

えー言うんですか？恥ずかしいな
Eh, to say that? That's embarrassing.

前にＴＶで
Earlier on TV...

アメリカの大統領が暗殺されるシーンを見たんです
I saw a scene where the American president was assassinated.

頭がバンってはじけて
His head exploded

婦人が飛び散った脳みそをかき集めるの
How the Lady/Wife was gathering up the scattered brains

あれ見てあたし．．．．．．その．．
Seeing that made me... well...

濡れちゃって．．．．．．
all wet...

それから毎日自分の頭を撃ち抜かれる事を想像しては
Every day after that I fantasized about being shot in the head.

オナニーを．．．．．．
Masturbating...

あ
Ah

でも．．．．．．「自分の脳が噴き出すのを見たい」．．
But... "I want to see my own brain explode."

この要望は難しいわね
This request is difficult.
005

そうなんですか？
Is that so?

普通脳を撃たれたら瞬間的に意識を失うから．．．
Normally, if you're shot in the brain, you lose consciousness instantly...

でもまあできるだけやってみるわ
But I'll try my best.

アドレナリンとモルヒネを注射してできるだけショックを抑えます
Injecting adrenaline and morphine will minimize shock as much as possible.

銃は小口径の高速弾の方が意識を保ちやすいと思うけど
I think it'd be easier to maintain consciousness with a small-caliber, high-velocity bullet,

それじゃ穴が小さくて脳が外まで出ないから
but then the hole will be too small and the brain won't be able to get out.

炸薬を減らしたマグナムでできるだけ外側を撃ってみるわ
So I'll try shooting as far out as possible with a magnum with less explosive charge.

脳の右半分だけ上手く破壊すればかろうじて意識は残ると思うけど
I think if we manage to properly destroy only the right half of the brain, consciousness might only just (barely) remain.

保証はできないわよそれでいい？
But I can't guarantee anything, is that okay?

はいかまいません
Yes, I don't mind.

脳をふっとばされる瞬間を味わえればいいです
As long as I can enjoy the moment my brain gets blown away, it's fine.

想像するだけであたし．．．
Just imagining it, I... (makes me...)
006

じゃあこっちへ来て
Then come over here

はい
Yes

この鏡はね
This mirror, you see,

弾丸が当たっても大きく割れないようになってるの
It's made so that it won't shatter too much even if hit by a bullet.

だから自分の脳が噴き出すのを正面から観察するのに最適ってわけ
So it's perfect for observing your own brain explode head-on.

ふわぁ．．．
Ahhh...
007

弾は後頭部から入って
The bullet will enter through the back of the head,

脳の中を回転しながら突き進み
spinning while moving forward inside the brain,

この辺りから出てくるわ
and come out around here,

血と脳漿を撒き散らしてね
Scattering blood and brain matter.

ああん言わないでもうダメ！！
Ah, don't say it, I can't anymore!!

じゃあやるわよ
Alright, let's go.

はいお願いします
Yes, please.
008-009
(shooting)
010

大丈夫？まだ意識はある？
Are you okay? Are you still conscious?

左半身が麻痺してるみたいね
It looks like the left side of your body is paralyzed, eh.

支えてあげるわ
I'll support you.

あらひの．．．．．．のうみそ．．．やわ．．．
(私の脳みそ柔らかい)
'y bwain ish sho..(ft)

出へる
(出てる)
It'sh co'ing ou'

すごいあらひののうでへるよう．．．ひあ
(すごい私の脳出てるよ)
Wow, 'y bwain is co'ing ou'!.. hya
012

あ あああ おしっこ出へるぅ
(おしっこ出てる)
Ah Aaah Pee iss co'ing ou'!

気持ちいひよぉ
(気持ちいいよ)
Feelsh goo'!

もっと気持ちよくしてあげる
I'll make you feel even better

あひいおま．．．ひぃ
(私おまおまんこ)
'y push... hi-

いあああひぃい！！
Iaaahii!!
013

おまんこ気持ひぃぃいん
Pusshy feelsh goo'

のうとおまんこりょうほう気持ひいい
Bwain and pusshy both fee' goo'

らめえ～～
(だめ)
I can't...

あらひもうらめぇ！！
(私もだめ)
I can't anymore!!

のう．．．イク
Bwain... co'ing

あらひのうでイっていひ！？
(私脳でいっていい！？)
'ay I come wish 'y bwain!?

もちろん好きにしていいのよ
Of course, you may do whatever you want.


014

のう．．．
Bwain...

あらひののう．．．
(私の脳)
'y bwain...

あ
Ah

ひゆび．．．はいやわらかあいふへあ
(ゆび 入る 柔らかい)
phingersh... ent'r ... shooft... fue-ah

ああはいぃる
Aah, ent'in'

のうのなか
inshide the bwain

いく
coming

いくいくいくふ
coming coming coming fuah
015
Sfx: どぶん
squelch

Sfx: いにゃあ
inyaah!

Sfx: びくん
jerk

Sfx: がくがく
shiver

Sfx: びくっ
twitch

Sfx: ぴゅるっ
squirt
016

Sfx: びく
twitch

お休みなさい
Good night,

やよいちゃん
Yayoi-chan
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はあ はあ
ha-a ha-a

パッ

このＤＶＤは一般には販売されていません
This DVD is not available for general sale.

ご注文をいただいても通常は表のＡＶを発送しております
Even if you place an order, we usually ship a cover-up AV.

こちらで調査の上
We conduct our own investigation

口が堅く内容にふさわしい金額をお支払いいただける方にのみお売りしています
and only sell to those who are discreet and willing to pay a fair price for the contents.

ただし調査の結果それ以外の方に無料でお分けする事もあります
However, based on the results of the investigation, we may also give them away for free to others.

そうあなたのような方です
Yes, someone like you.

みていただいてお分かりのように
As you understand from having watched this,

私たちの作品に出演するモデルは自ら強く死を望んでいる人たちです
The models who appear in our works are people who by themselves strongly desire death.

借金や病気などの苦痛から逃れるための死ではなく
Death is not a means of escaping from the pain of debt or illness.

死にあこがれ特殊な死を経験したい人
People who, yearning for death, want to experience a specific death.

そのような人を私たちは求めています
We are looking for people like that.
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私たちはあなたにお望みの死を与えることができます
We can give you the death you desire.

まさか
No way...

この人．．．
This person...

連絡先は．．．別に言わなくてもわかるわね
My contact information is... I'm sure you know it without me having to tell you.

連絡待ってます
I'm waiting for your reply.

井上空くん
Inoue Sora-kun

せ．．．
Se...

先生！！
Sensei!!

Well this has certainly brought out the best in translators. Thanks youse guys.