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Randall J. Nelson
2017/08/24
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Since I'm still having trouble accessing ASSTR, I will post my stories here.
Feedback is welcome; criticism is welcome so long as it's constructive.
My first story is in response to this prompt in Killer and Victim: (
https://www.gurochan.cx/rp/res/1864.html#q2637
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Party Killer – Midnight Stabbings
Snuff, pain, rape, ws
Friday night, and I once again went to a party uninvited; just noticed that there was a party going on as I drove around town, parked at a supermarket a few blocks over, and walked on in. Despite the fact that I was unfamiliar with the people there, and they were certainly unfamiliar with me, my presence went unnoticed. Pretty much everyone was intoxicated, too concerned with getting laid, or both. I busied myself with walking around and consuming whatever food and beverages didn’t contain alcohol or drugs; getting intoxicated myself just wouldn’t suit me at that time. Being a serial killer, my purpose was to find someone and make their night the last one they will ever experience.
After an hour of wandering aimlessly and glancing at scantily clad women to determine if they were the ones for the night, I found my prey. Two young ladies in their early twenties who just arrived caught my attention when one told the other that she would help her find a guy to take her virginity. In my years of raping and killing young women at parties, finding a virgin was rare; well, attractive virgins, are at parties are rare.
From observing their conversation I learned that the virgin, a somewhat curvy girl with long black hair and huge breasts, was called Nina. She was just wearing a green dress that displayed her monumental cleavage, and black high heels. Despite Nina’s appearance, I could also tell from the fact that she rarely spoke in the conversation, and that she seemed nervous when she did talk, that this is not what she enjoyed doing. She was probably used to staying in her room on a computer; probably playing video games or watching anime, if I had to guess. The innocence I could perceive made her made her a much more interesting target to me than the girls who were drunk and drugged up.
Her friend was a completely different person all together. Called Ariana, she was a petite black girl with shoulder-length neon hair. While not as massive as Nina’s, Ariana had a fairly large pair of breasts; whereas Nina’s were watermelons, Ariana’s were closer to a small cantaloupe. Ariana’s wardrobe consisted of a pink low-cut tank top that bared her flat midriff, and a black miniskirt. This one was also much more talkative, had a vivacious personality, and spoke with a English accent. While not as innocent as her friend, I knew I wanted her as well, but I wasn’t sure I’d be able to get both of them at the time.
I stayed within sight of Nina and Ariana as much as possible. I mostly listened to them talk while making the occasional glance towards them. I don’t know if either of them ever knew I was there, but I remember seeing Ariana look in my direction briefly. Other than that, neither confronted me.
After what was probably another half-hour, Ariana went off with some blonde muscular guy, leaving Nina by herself. Nina’s social anxiety became clear as she panicked about being left alone at a party full of strangers. Now I only had to get her isolated from the other party goers, and I would be in luck. My fortune was great, because less than two minutes after Ariana abandoned her, Nina left the party to take a walk. Unfortunately for her, I was not far behind.
I kept close enough to Nina that I wouldn’t lose sight of her, but far enough to decrease the chance of being caught. That was downside of stalking a woman who wasn’t in a mentally impaired, especially when the rest of the neighborhood outside of the party was rather silent at this time. If she screamed now the entire neighborhood would hear it, and, even with only the faint glow of the streetlights, I would run the risk of being caught. I could have just rushed her and slit her throat before she could scream, and then run off; that wouldn’t have suited me, since I wouldn’t have been able to rape her without worrying about someone, like a cop, driving by while I was in the act. Still, I was prepared to settle for a kill if I couldn’t get her to a secluded area before she turned back to the party.
That wasn’t going to be necessary, because her midnight stroll left the sidewalks of the suburban neighborhood and took us into a nearby park, where she followed a trail. The trees and bushes around the trail grew thick enough that it was impossible to see the streetlights, and the city clearly didn’t feel it was important to put some lights up along this trail. I knew that would be the best chance I would get to make the kill.
I reached into my pocket and pulled out a switchblade. Before Nina registered that I was coming at her, I closed the distance and threw my left arm around her neck. She screamed, and squirmed in my grip, as I slammed the blade into her breasts several dozen times. I let her drop to her knees before pulling her back up by her hair, and stuck the entire length of the 12 centimeter blade into her throat. When I released her she fell to the ground clutching at her throat and spitting up blood.
While Nina writhed on the ground, I placed the knife in the grass, then pulled down my pants and boxers. Her dress was short enough that I only had to rip off her panties to expose her fuzz-covered pussy.
Her womanhood was already wet when I inserted my member, signaling that she probably pissed herself in sheer terror; perhaps she was just sexually excited, but I really didn’t care either way. Despite the fact that she had a plump ass, her cunt was quite a tight fit as my cock burrowed deeper. I soon broke through her hymen, and felt the warm blood trickling around my cock.
“Heh, guess you really are a virgin,” I grunted.
I went in and out of her sex, and each thrust forward went deeper. I felt the muscles inside of her hole tear as my swollen dick pushed further into her formerly-untouched sex. Nina tried to scream: to protest; but each attempt was an unintelligible gargle accompanied by spats of blood hitting the trail, and followed by convulsions of agony.
I ignored her death cries and continued fucking her pussy with increasing speed. With each passing second her attempts to protest grew weaker, until her only input was to occasionally cough up a slurry of blood onto the ground.
Shortly after Nina’s body convulsed violently one last time and stopped moving forever. I felt warm liquid around my cock and a musky smell rose into the air, as her bladder signified her body’s complete surrender.
“Too bad you didn’t last long enough to feel me cum in your womb,” I grunted at the corpse.
Feeling Nina die as I fucked her was the stimulation that I needed to take my arousal to the next level. Ecstasy washed over me and it only took twenty more thrusts to come. When the last bit of my sperm shot into Nina’s dead womb I collapsed on top of her corpse in exhaustion. I laid there for five minutes, catching my breath and trying to stay awake, before I mustered the strength to get up.
I regained my strength in time, because seconds later a familiar voice echoed around the park.
“Nina! Did you run into this park again? I found a boy who you might get along with! Let’s get back to the party,” Ariana’s voice boomed out of the darkness.
“Shit!” I spat.
I quickly grabbed my knife and hid myself in the foliage before she reached sight of me.
“Nina, I know you’re in… Nina?”
Ariana stopped as soon as she saw Nina laying on the ground. She ran over to her friend and dropped to the ground next to her. A few seconds later she jumps back several feet and high-pitched shrieks cut through the silence.
When I emerged from the bushes running at her she only stared, like a deer in headlights, as I covered the distance in less than five seconds. I buried the knife deep into her abdomen, and her screaming became grunts as the pain washing over her made it impossible for her to draw breath to scream. I swiveled the blade around in her belly, tearing internal organs, and looked into her eyes as her face contorted with pain. After two minutes I pulled the knife out and grabbed her by the head. I looked into her tear-filled eyes for a few seconds, before I drove the knife through her chin, going through the roof of her mouth, and all the way into her brain. Even in the darkness I could see the life fade from her eyes. I pulled the knife out and Ariana’s body crumpled to the ground; her panties turned yellow and a puddle of urine spread out underneath her body.
As much as I was ready to leave, there was a surge of lust that had to be satisfied first. I started removing her clothes one piece at a time, and laid her naked corpse spread-eagle in the middle of the trail. I started slowly squeezing her breasts in my hands, and kissing their soft flesh. I made sure to sample each nipple between my teeth a few times, and my hands pushed their way down to her ruined belly. My right hand moved slowly down her hips and across her thighs before cupping around her shaved labia. I inserted my left index finger into her hole and prodded around. Then I moved my right hand to my erect member and guided it to her entrance before inserting it.
My hands rested firmly on Ariana’s dead tits as my cock thrust in-and-out. After a few minutes I let out a long grunt when my seed ejaculated into her hole. When I finished, I gave her a long kiss on the lips before standing up.
I walked over to Nina’s corpse and removed her dress, just out of fairness. Despite being slashed to hell, I kissed her huge breasts and sucked on her nipples. Another long kiss on the lips and I made my way out.
I walked quietly back to my van and left town, before stopping at a motel three hours later. Around that time a huge rainstorm rolled into the town, and the bodies went undiscovered until three days later.
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