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From my stories in "Bad Magic: Petrification, Transformation, Immortality", some are a part of the same system. And this Nina thing has basically turned into a series. So I decided to make a story group for it, and post all I've got (because I just made a new chapter).

https://cuteandhurting.deviantart.com/gallery/66414378/Magical-Nina-and-Friends

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/CuteAndHurting/21698/Bad-Magic-Petrification-Transformation-Immortality

Vacuum Fairy



Vaky is a fairy. She likes to clean people’s homes when they aren’t at home. Many homes have lately been cleaned mysteriously, nobody knowing there’s a good fairy with good intentions doing that to them. Even witches and wizards didn’t know that little Vaky existed!

Vaky would always carry her little vacuum cleaner with her.

***

“Nina!” Yelled Ana with tears in her eyes. Ana was a 12 year old Bosnian blondie from Sarajevo. She was running away from someone.
“Ana!” Said Nina. Nina was a chin-length brunette and Ana’s classmate.
“Nina, please help me!”
“What’s wrong?! You’re scaring me!”
“Cops are after me…”
“WHAT?!”
“Please, just listen! They caught me trying to smoke. They took a picture of me. They want to take me to my parents!”
“It’s just that? Jesus… You scared me so much…”
“My parents are going to take my new cellphone away from me! Please, Nina, help me! They are looking for me!”
“And what can I do?”

“You…” Ana calmed down and kept her voice quiet. “You do magic… right?”
“Uhh… Be quiet…”
“Please, do something… Turn me into a frog or something…”
“I don’t think you’d like that.”
“I will do anything, just please! They don’t know my name, all I need to do is hide for a day!”

Nina was in a secret family of wizards. Only her best friend Ana knew the secret. Naturally to a magician, when Ana offered to be transformed, Nina could barely resist. Although she knew it could be a bad idea.

Nobody was around, so Nina started chanting. Ana stood still, listening to Nina speaking all those words in a mysterious language, waving her hands around. After 1 minute, Nina was apparently done.
“Umm… That’s it?” Ana asked.
“Yes! You will now turn to dust and flow into this tiny vial.” Nina opened a vial and pointed it towards Ana.
“Huh?” Spoke Ana. That was also the last thing that Ana said. She started flowing, like sand, into the vial.

Ana had been reduced to a vial of dust that was just about 1 inch or 2.5 cm high. A whole human transformed into something so small. Worse yet, into pretty big grans of DUST, which means Ana became a large amount of small particles.

‘HUH?’ Thought Ana, whose sight and hearing was consumed by darkness. She felt weird. ‘I can’t move… Is my body a mush?’ She felt like minced meat. ‘I can’t breathe…’

Nina shut the vial.
“Now each part of your soul is tightly sealed to each grain of this dust. I will release you in the evening. When cops stop looking for you. I hope your shock teaches you not to ask me to do magic for you anymore. It’s dangerous! You know, if I lose you, you will be trapped as generic dust for eternity!”

‘Let me out! I change my mind, turn me back! Please!’ Ana was freaking out, unable to move, literally feeling her whole body being motionless cold DUST.

Nina took the vial of Ana home. She put it on a shelf in her bedroom and went to school. She had classes in the afternoon that week. But she left the window open, so the draft blew the vial off the shelf and it fell on the floor. It broke to pieces. Ana’s dust was all over the floor. Ana didn’t know what happened. She wouldn’t even know if wind blew her in several different parts of the town. Because pieces of her soul were tied to EACH particle. Luckily, it didn’t blow her away. There was no draft near the floor at the time. And luckily, the dust was heavy enough not to spread through the air. That was close…

All she felt, before and after, was fear and worry. She got used to being unable to breathe, because didn’t need to breathe at the moment. But she was worried she would never be released, even though the plan was to release her. ‘I shouldn’t have asked her to do magic on me… What was I thinking…? I was so scared of losing my cellphone…”

That was close, wasn’t it?

But then came the cleaning fairy called Vaky.

“Uhhh, why do people leave their windows open?” She said as she was going to close Nina’s window. “There doesn’t seem to be a smell of gas leak or anything. Did she forget to close it then? Wait…” Then she yelled with happy shine in her eyes. “Oh… There’s dust on the floor! Or is it… tiny sand? It is polluting the floor!”

Vaky then took her vacuum cleaner and turned it on. It was a small plastic elephant, pink, with pictures of flowers on it, and some vacuuming options. It didn’t have a hose. It looked like a mini vacuum cleaner for little kids.
“There shouldn’t be dust on the floor. Some bugs could hatch there.”

With a smile on her face, she slowly and thoroughly started sucking Ana up her little sucker. Little by little, the dust in which Anna had been trapped disappeared into the vacuum cleaner, together with the pieces of the vial. Ana disappeared into the vacuum cleaner like ordinary unwanted house hazard.

“The room is pretty clean and tidy. Too bad. One house less to tidy for me. Oh well, there are plenty other houses!”

Then Vaky had her leave. With Ana in her magical vacuum cleaner. Ana didn’t see or hear a thing that was happening. All she felt was worry, begging Nina in her thoughts to turn her back as soon as possible. If only she knew that Nina was no longer around… In Nina’s room, Ana was no more. Poor Ana would keep being several grams of lonely dust forever.

***

That evening, after a hard, or rather fun, day of cleaning, Vaky went to a random river in Romania. She happily opened up the vacuum cleaner.
“I can barely wait to see how must dust I have collected today!”

As she opened it, the dust bag rapidly bulged out as if it had suddenly exploded. Out of that little pink elephant came a dust bag large enough to fit 2 kilograms of potatoes.

“Just like yesterday. But it doesn’t matter! I cleaned 50 houses in 3 countries today! It was so much fun! Oh well. It’s time to get rid of all that dust.”

She emptied the dust bag into the river. All of it. The dust suddenly magically flew into the river, as if you’d never see in non-magical dust bags. All of the dust flew right into the water, and dispersed in it until it could no longer be seen.

All. Of. It.
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